Help: What s wrong with this sick sentence?

There is nothing wrong with such a sentence.

News sometimes needs to be vague, not ambiguous.

For example, the relevant department refers to more than one department involved, the second is to divide the responsibilities of the inconvenient to distinguish, and the third is out of a kind of privacy or confidentiality. For example, the officers and soldiers of a certain unit of the People's Liberation Army, a certain unit here is a rough symbol, perhaps because the expression of the unit number is too complicated, or perhaps out of the need for confidentiality.

My opinion is that because the content of the sentence may involve more than one department, for example, the melamine incident involves a series of institutions such as the quality supervision department, the health department, and the market management department, so we can only say "relevant departments" ......in general termsIt can only be said that it is a more "official" word.

Is this a sick sentence?

1. Wrong word: "gushing", which could be changed to "fluent and organized" or "methodical".

2 punctuation: "Some practice alone," comma to ellipsis; "Journey to the West" was changed to "Journey to the West".

After: During the morning class, the six (3) class "Love My China" reading exchange meeting was held. Before the start, everyone was preparing carefully, some discussing with their tablemates, and some practicing ...... aloneChen Xia first introduced the book "Journey to the West" to her classmates, and everyone felt that her speech was very orderly.

May it help you!

1.The Yunlong Bridge should not be called an estimate (I don't know where the Yunlong Bridge is, it should be a modern bridge) 2The front is the number and size, so the back should be the amount of effort.

3.The number of people is less than before, and it cannot be said that it is doubled.

4.The subject is unclear, and it is not known whether it was "he" who laughed or "friend" who laughed.

5.Literacy and increase are not properly matched.

6.It should be technology that is fully promoted, so after feeding the pigs, add "technology" to accelerate the development of the business, and add "development" after the business

7.There is no predicate verb, add go after the East Ring Road.

Wuzhou's Bingquan Soybean Milk Museum, Qilou City and Yunlong Bridge are places that Chinese and foreign tourists yearn for.

Experiments have proved that the key to a person's knowledge and achievement lies in the amount of effort.

I don't know why the number of people who came to watch the volleyball game today was a little lower than last time.

When he saw his friend who had just recovered from a serious illness, he had a smile on his face.

In order to promote the traditional culture of the Chinese people and cultivate students' literacy of Chinese culture, our school will carry out ancient poetry recitation activities. In order to comprehensively popularize the use of rapeseed cake or cottonseed cake to feed pigs and accelerate the development of pig breeding, the county has held three technical training courses for breeders.

We walked along the East Ring Road, and it didn't take long for us to come to the newly built International Hotel.

Improper matching of the establishment budget is a type of missing ingredient error.

On the surface, everyone can understand the establishment of a certain budget, but if you think about it carefully, the establishment is generally to establish a system, a project, and a system, and it is inappropriate to establish a budget, so to speak, to carry out the budget, but here he means to establish a budget system, and it is more effective to use the system to constrain it.

Furthermore, look at the first half of the sentence "clarify the payment items of ** finance and local finance in accordance with the law", and compare, if he changes it to "clarify ** and local finance", it seems to be in the past, but this is a sick sentence, there must be "payment items".

That's understandable.

The ingredient is mutilated, and it should be "established......system", after the words "national overall budget", add "system".

Original sentence:

Students from more than 30 schools went to a nursing home on the outskirts of the city to show their love under the guidance of their teachers.

Analysis:

At first glance, I can't see the problem, check it carefully, the second half of the sentence should be correct, the first half of the sentence feels a little problematic, is there ambiguity?

For students in more than 30 schools, the measure word "individual" can be used for both schools and schools, and more than 30 schools and more than 30 students can use a "individual". Of course, "individual" here is not the most appropriate quantifier, and it is often said that "more than 30 schools" and "more than 30 students".

So there are two understandings of this sentence:

One is students from more than 30 schools.

The second is more than 30 school students.

Then analyze which is more realistic, I personally feel that if there are students from more than 30 schools in a township nursing home, it is not realistic for such a large number of people to give love, or the latter is more suitable.

Modification:

More than 30 students, led by their teachers, went to a nursing home on the outskirts of the city to show their love.

The "school" in the sentence can also be removed, but it is more concise to remove it. The school is for the teacher, the driving school is for the instructor, and the military school is for the instructor, so the pointing is clear, and it is better to remove it.

Under the guidance of the teacher, more than 30 students went to the nursing home on the outskirts of the city to show their love.