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The first sentence is missing a subject and should be changed to read: After listening to the report, I received a profound education.
The second sentence is repetitive, and it should be changed to: The nature teacher tells us about insects, plants, and animals.
The third sentence is a mixture of sentence structures, which should be changed to: No matter how good your grades are, you can't be complacent! Or, you can't be complacent even if you have good grades.
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1.After listening to the report, I was deeply educated.
2.The nature teacher told us about the survival of insects, plants, and animals.
3.No matter how good your grades are, you can't be complacent!
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After listening to the report, we were deeply educated.
The nature teacher told us about plants and animals.
No matter how good your grades are, you can't be complacent!
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The first sentence No Subject After listening to the report, I was deeply educated.
Sentence 2 The nature teacher tells us about insects, plants, and animals.
Sentence 3 No matter how good your grades are, you can't be complacent!
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After listening to the report, I was deeply educated.
The nature teacher told us about plants and animals.
No matter how good your grades are, you can't be complacent!
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1.Add the subject before the words "listened" or "received".
2.Remove "insects".
3.Replace the word "although" with the word "even if".
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2.Insects belong to animals and should be deleted.
3.Remove the word again.
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Recently, Myanmar was hit by a "severe tropical storm", which caused a large number of people. In Yangon, houses and trees have been blown down by the wind, water and electricity are not available, and damaged vehicles can be seen everywhere on the streets. People.
Life is in full swing, and the candles in the shops have long been sold out.
If the title number is used incorrectly, delete the title number.
The semantics are repetitive, and the word "innumerable" is deleted.
Replace "put" with "be".
Add "in". Misnomer. You can change "in full swing" to "hard".
Typos. Replace the word "elimination" with the word "pin".
May it help you!
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Tomorrow, we graduate.
Change: We will graduate tomorrow.
This semester, we have studied more diligently.
Change: This semester, we have studied more diligently and diligently.
The world classics we often read include "Robinson Crusoe", "Romance of the Three Kingdoms" and "Juvenile Literature and Art".
A lot of extracurricular reading has allowed us to increase our knowledge and writing skills.
I wrote a post-reading article "Zhuge Liang in My Eyes" published in "Innovation Composition".
Change: An article I wrote after reading "Zhuge Liang in My Eyes" was published on "Innovation Composition".
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Next year, we will be graduating.
The world famous books we often read include "Robinson Crusoe" and "Romance of the Three Kingdoms".
A lot of extracurricular reading allows us to increase our knowledge and improve our writing skills.
I wrote a review of "Zhuge Liang in My Eyes" published in "Innovation Composition".
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Tomorrow, we're graduating. This semester, we have studied more diligently. The world's famous books that we often read are "Robinson Crusoe" and "Romance of the Three Kingdoms".
A lot of extracurricular reading has allowed us to increase our knowledge and improve our writing. I wrote a review of "Zhuge Liang in My Eyes" published in "Innovation Composition".
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This short comment has given me confidence in writing.
In the ** hall, we enjoyed the beautiful Chinese and foreign famous songs.
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Hometown people are put into the real estate singing good official i
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Let me set up a ......We appreciated the ......
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1 Whose passion for writing has been established? 2. Can I watch the song Reflect on it.
1.Lei Feng spirit.
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