6th grade essay comments short teacher comments

1. The trick is shaped, and the language is vivid and fascinating. The teacher is very pleased to see your progress.

2. Reading your article is deeply enlightening, and the unimpeded language is the highlight of the article. I hope to write good works in the future and strive to be a "little writer".

3. The beginning of your assignment is concise and engaging. The content is vivid and detailed, and I did like it after reading this article of yours.

4. The theme of your article is clear, the focus is highlighted, the level is clear, and the rhetorical tricks of metaphor and personification are fully used to express things in front of you, which is a good article.

5. Your essay is progressing quickly, especially the language is unblocked. The fly in the ointment is that the transcription is somewhat sloppy. I hope that you will develop your strengths and avoid weaknesses in your composition next time, and take your composition to a new level!

6. You caught Lamei.

After reading your masterpiece, I was really impressed by the unyielding temperament of Lamei.

6th Grade Essay Comment 2

1. The ending is just right to point to the center, the language is simple and profound, and it is intriguing.

2. Switch with a feeling and end with a feeling. In this way, the article is coherent, coherent, and at the same time, the theme of the article is repeated, which is very infectious.

3. The praise of the characters at the end is sincere and touching.

4. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing.

5. At the end, the emotions are expressed in a concentrated manner, which not only corresponds to the beginning but also summarizes the whole text. Coherent from beginning to end, all in one go.

Although the events in life with certain narrative value were selected, due to the lack of thorough analysis and deep excavation, the hidden truth of the events could not be profoundly reflected. However, the article has a clear point of view, and the position of likes and dislikes is clear, which makes it clear to people at a glance.

Through rich language and action, the ideological quality of the characters is brought out. Appropriate use of contrast, comparison and other techniques, through the disparity and difference between things, to strongly support the center of the article. The imagination of the article is reasonable, and the narration is natural and vivid.

The center is not clear enough, and the idea is not clear enough. However, the content of the article wastes no time in using the technique of comparison to explain the characteristics of things from many aspects, which not only enhances the tone of the language, but also leaves a very deep impression on the reader.

Essay Comment Short Teacher Comment:

1. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main characteristics of things, and the length is short and concise, which is worth reading.

2. The text is like its person, and your article is as simple and open-minded as yours. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term honing. I hope that in the future learning process, you will feel and appreciate life with your heart, and write more touching and good articles.

3. The text can speak, I think the article is a reflection of your soul. The road of life is indeed very tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persistently move forward, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.

4. Wen Neng is pleasant. You should not regard writing essays as a burden for yourself, but should record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate strokes.

5. It can be said that your article is full of real feelings. Failure is inevitable, and having the courage to face failure is even more commendable. I believe that it is gold, and there will always be a time to shine. I hope you adjust your mindset soon, and you will find that the sky is even bluer.

6. It's really "like a god in the pen". It seems that you must have read a lot of literature. The content is so rich, and it shows your literary skills. It's just that if the material is adjusted in a certain logical order, this article will be more exciting.

7. After reading your article, it seems that a stream flows in front of me, pure and lovely. I hope you can maintain this style of writing and express the rich connotation in pure language.

8. Essay is like being a person, it can be seen from your life experience that you are a positive and motivated young man, you have your own unique views on things, and your understanding is profound, which is really commendable.

9. The language of the whole text is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and twisty, as if bringing the reader into a happy paradise, which makes people smile.

10. The beginning of the article is concise and appropriate, and the mood of the characters is set off by the description of the environment, which is very artistic.

When the teacher opens your composition, you can always hear a cry, which turns out to be punctuation, because you don't value them too much. Think about it, don't you cry when the teacher also despises your essay as you despise punctuation?

2. Your essay can describe the autumn fields in detail, which shows that you are an observant child. But what a beautiful season autumn is, autumn is the season of harvest, autumn is a colorful season, I really hope that you can feel that beautiful and poetic autumn in your article!

3. The author uses psychological description and action description techniques to truly and meticulously express his nervous and scared psychology at that time.

4. Decent tailoring. The pen and ink are concentrated, and the details are subtle. The language is concise and generalized. In addition to the positive theme, concise beginning, and powerful ending, the suspense is used to make the plot twists and turns. Material typical.

5. Wu Cheng, a theorist of modern opera in China, once said: "Everyone has their own scene, and on their own body, they volatilize, there is a master of joy and sorrow, and there is a root for crying, Zhang San's crown, Li 40,000 can't wear it." Therefore, when we write essays, we must pay attention to what characters we write, we must turn ourselves into what characters, and we must experience and figure out from the identity, gender, age, and personality of that character, and we must not use our own student tone to trick others.

The ancient Roman poet Horace said, "You must laugh yourself before you can cause a smile on the face of others." In the same way, you have to cry yourself to elicit a crying response on someone else's face.

Students are invited to carefully ponder and scrutinize when writing the essay to let the characters enter the role.

6. The title of this essay is well established, and the content is real and concrete, especially the successful description of the characters. Whether it is a sensory description, 7, a psychological description, or an action description, it is all in line with the age characteristics of the characters and the specific situation at that time. In addition, the first few sentences of the environment are not idle writing, but pave the way for the development of the plot. The ending points out the theme, which has a warning effect on young readers.

8. This article writes the true feelings. It is very full and specific, and in addition, the use of lyrical writing while narrating can arouse the reader's emotional resonance and have a tear-jerking effect.

9. Grasp the details well. Choose a fragment of your life. The language is colloquial, and the straightforward and simple narrative is full of deep affection for the mother, which is touching to read. The materials in this article are true and typical, and they are representative. A few words that mimic sound are used very accurately.

10. Lively and outgoing are your strengths. Teachers like you and believe that you are also a pampered child at home. But perhaps because he does not hide this characteristic of himself, he also lacks moderation in his behavior and often shows dissatisfaction.

I hope that you can develop your strengths and avoid weaknesses in the process of continuous growth, so that the continuous improvement of academic performance will become another of your strengths. As a member of the class labor committee, you take the work seriously and responsibly, and you are busy every time you clean up, and each little red square is condensed with your hard work and sweat, and the teachers and classmates have given you full affirmation at work, and the title of "outstanding student cadre of the school" is a reward for your work, but study.

The essay comment is short, it may be that your essay is not very well written, or the essay is not on topic, so the teacher's comment is short.

You are a child who loves to work, and usually, you unite your classmates, but you are not attentive enough in class, and the homework assigned by the teacher cannot be completed in time. Thinking is slow, memory is particularly poor, and grades in various subjects are also poor, and I hope to redouble my efforts to improve my grades in all subjects in the future.

You are a smart, lively and cute girl. Serious study, good grades, can take the initiative to help students with learning difficulties, class work is serious and responsible, is a good assistant to teachers, and a model for students to learn. I hope you guard against arrogance and rashness, and strive for the top.

You are an introverted, smart and clever boy. Usually be able to complete the homework assigned by the teacher on time, study seriously, have good grades, and work seriously. But I don't like activities very much. I hope to speak boldly in class in the future, read more extracurricular books, and strive to improve my writing skills.

You are a lively and lovely girl, really likable, capable of doing things, and a good assistant to the teacher. You can usually sing and dance, and your classmates envy you. The class work is conscientious and responsible, which is really amazing, but due to the young age, the self-control ability is poor. I hope you will carry forward your achievements and make up for your shortcomings.

Although you are a girl, you have a boy-like personality, and you love to read and play with your classmates' school supplies. Study more seriously, can take the initiative to help students with learning difficulties after class, and is usually nosy. I hope you write well and strive to be a good boy who pays attention to hygiene.