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Updated on society 2024-06-16
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  1. Anonymous users2024-02-12

    Dear teachers and students:

    Hello everyone! The topic I want to talk about today is "Cultivating the Wind of Etiquette and Being a Civilized Middle School Student". As we all know, the Chinese nation has a long history and splendid culture, and was recognized as a "country of etiquette" and "ancient civilization" in the world a long time ago, and there are many touching stories that have been passed down to this day.

    Yang Shi and his classmates You Xing met with their teacher Cheng Yi, Cheng Yi was resting, and they stood outside the door. At that time, it was still snowing heavily, and by the time Cheng Yi noticed it, the snow outside the door was already a foot deep. The story of Yang Shichengmen Lixue has also been handed down and has become a model of respecting teachers.

    In fact, civilization is not new to our lives. Usually we accidentally disturb others, and a "sorry" can turn hostility into friendship; When you faced difficulties, others helped you in time, and a "thank you" shortened the distance between each other; Inside and outside the school, the enthusiastic "good teacher" makes the relationship between teachers and students more harmonious and ......Seemingly simple words have a lot of help for our learning and life.

    As a middle school student, we are the flowers of the future of our country. We have been educated in civilized etiquette since childhood, and many students can talk about civilized etiquette endlessly. However, the campus is full of discarded lunch boxes, drink bottles, and swear words from the mouths of some students.

    What is the difference between us receiving education in civilized etiquette and not practicing it ourselves, and never receiving social education? Therefore, we must work our words and deeds and bid farewell to uncivilized behavior.

    It is not easy for us middle school students to really do a good job of civilized etiquette. As the saying goes: "If you don't take a step, you can't go a thousand miles; If you don't accumulate small streams, you can't become rivers and seas.

    If you want to be a civilized middle school student, you must start from every detail of your words and deeds in your daily study and life, and consciously abide by civilized etiquette. At home, we respect our elders, honor our parents, and do our best to help the family do what we can. Mop the floor, do the laundry, tidy up the room, cook some simple meals, and give parents more rest because they have paid so much for us.

    At school, we are neatly dressed, polite, united and loving, helping students who have difficulties in life and study, and actively extending a helping hand to help them tide over difficulties.

    Respect the teacher, start with me, greet the teacher when you see it, stand up and say hello when the teacher enters the classroom, and prepare the textbooks and utensils to be used before class. Listen carefully in class and ask positive questions; After class, carefully complete the homework assigned by the teacher. Clean up our classes, campuses, and keep the environment beautiful.

    Actively participate in various activities organized by the school. In society, we are civilized and courteous, respect the old and love the young, take care of the surrounding public facilities, do not litter, and care for the environment. When encountering bad people and bad things, you should actively report them and be a good citizen who is qualified and law-abiding.

    Students, let's start from the bits and pieces of daily life, strive to become a civilized middle school student who understands etiquette, and contribute to the creation of a harmonious society!

    That's the end of my remarks, thank you.

    I've helped you change it... Take a look.

  2. Anonymous users2024-02-11

    After the first paragraph, change it to a long history and culture.

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