Thanks to my mother s teachings, I have developed a good habit of resting and behaving, and I have b

Sick sentence: Because of my mother's comfortable cultivation of me, I have developed a brave and optimistic character since I was a child **: The ingredients are incomplete, and the words are inappropriate Changed to:

My mother's "careful] nurturing of me has made me develop a brave and optimistic character since I was a child, no matter who caused the psychological problems, I have to solve them by myself, and I can only overcome the obstacles by myself, and we must carefully check and correct the mistakes in the homework.

2. We must consciously develop good habits.

3. He often recalls interesting things in the past.

Born for your dreams I wish you progress in your studies.

My mom cares about my life because she cares about my studies.

If the related words are used inappropriately, they should be changed to indicate a progressive relationship or a parallel relationship.

My mother not only cared about my studies, but also about my life. My mom cares about my studies as well as my life. (Juxtaposition) may it help you!

My mother not only cares about my studies, but also about my life.

My mom cares about my studies as well as my life.

Mom not only cares about my studies, but also about my life.

The reason why my mother cares about my studies is because she cares about my life.

After reading the article "Motherly Love", we were touched by the great mother. (Modify sick sentence).

It seems to be a mother's love! Not a mother.

Original sentence: After reading the lesson "Motherly Love", we are cultivated by the great mother.

After revising: After reading the lesson "Motherly Love", we were moved by the mother of Wei Cong Dongda.

Or modified as: After reading the lesson "Motherly Love", we are cultivated by great maternal love.

Analysis: The sick sentence is an improper collocation, and the mother cannot be matched with the cultivation, which can be replaced by the mother moved or the mother's love and cultivation.

Revised to: read "Mother's Love".

After a lesson, we were touched by the Great Mother.

Explanation and analysis: According to the original sentence "After reading the lesson of "Mother's Love", we were cultivated by the great mother", it can be found that the word "edifying" is inappropriate, and the word "mother" should not be modified, but should be changed to "moved", that is, it should be revised to: After reading the lesson of "Mother's Love", we were moved by the great mother.

Revised to: We must develop the habit of paying attention to hygiene.

Or: we need to be hygienic.

Steps to modify a sick sentence.

1) Read the original sentence and figure out the original meaning. First of all, you need to read the sentence carefully to understand the main meaning it is trying to express.

2) Find** and identify the condition. Find out the reason for the sick sentence around the main meaning of the sentence, and figure out what type of sick sentence it belongs to.

3) Prescribe the right medicine and modify the sentence. After figuring out the **, we should think about what to delete, what to add, and what to replace in view of the problems existing in the sentence, and then start to change the sentence.

4) Double-check and complete the exercises. Read the revised sentence to see if it is correct and whether it retains the original meaning of the sentence.

3 How to modify the sick sentence.

1) Modify sentences with missing components, the most important thing is to understand which part is missing. For example: "Sing aloud."

This sentence lacks the basic ingredient "who", so the meaning of the sentence is not clear, and the way to modify it is to make up this part, which can be changed to: "Students sing loudly." ”

2) To modify sentences with repetitive meanings, the main thing is to understand which part of the meaning is repetitive. For example: "I corrected an incorrect typo."

Obviously, "incorrect" repeats the meaning of "typo", and the way to correct it is to remove one of the "incorrect" or "misspelled" and keep one to become: "I have corrected the incorrect word." Or:

I corrected the typo. ”

3) Modify the sentence with inappropriate words, the main thing is to find out which word is used incorrectly, and the nature of the error (wrong synonyms used, improper use of range, improper collocation of words).For example: "Xiaogang loves time very much.

The meaning of "love" is: cherish and protect, it is inappropriate to use it in front of "time", but it can be changed to "cherish" (meaning not to waste because of attention), become: "Xiaogang cherishes time very much."

4) Modify sentences with reversed word order, the main thing is to find out which word is in the wrong place, e.g., "We discussed and listened to the principal's report. "After reading the sentence, you can find that it is not in the order of things to discuss the report first and then listen to the report, you must listen to the report first and then discuss the report, becoming:

We listened to and discussed the principal's report. ”

We need to develop the habit of paying attention to hygiene.

Speech disorders are a mixture of sentences.

1. I was deeply moved by the lesson "Deeply Loving Motherly" by removing the words "read" and ",] instead.

2. Replace the mention of "I" in front of the sentence to: I read the lesson "Motherly Love" and was deeply moved.

Three ways to change:

1. I was deeply moved by the lesson "Motherly Love".

3. I was deeply moved by the lesson of "Motherly Love". (But this modification is less)**: The subject is missing, so the subject should be added.

2. I was deeply moved by the lesson of "Motherly Love".