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Do your own thing.
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Key words: Children Primary 3 300 words.
Word Count: 300 words essay.
He has all kinds of fishing tools, such as fishing rods, fish fishing, bait, fish baskets, .......He first hung the bait on the fish, then lowered the rod gently, and in a few minutes the fish was on the fish. The little boy put the fish he had caught in the basket and ran home happily.
Famous teacher's comments: The fishing child described by the little author is a very careful child. You see, he has all the tools for fishing, and he pays attention to his movements when fishing, and he puts the rod down "gently", so it is only natural that this child can catch fish smoothly.
As a second-grade friend, being able to write sentences smoothly is already very remarkable. However, the author does not describe the fishing process specifically enough, and it is recommended that the author carefully observe the specific scene of fishing, and then describe it. In this way, the content of the composition will definitely be more vivid and full.
"Fish fishing" should be "fish hook". (Scholastic China Distinguished Teacher: Ms. Luo Danna)2010-2-25 8:
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Summer vacation is the happiest day for me because my mom and dad take me to my grandparents' house in the countryside. As soon as I arrived at my grandmother's house, my mother and my grandmother were busy in the kitchen, and I was my father's follower. Dad said:
Let's go fishing! "I happily took my father's hand and jumped to the river. After a while, Mom came along, and Dad said that there was another follower.
When my father stretched out the fishing rod and grabbed a handful of fish food and threw it into the river, I asked my mother curiously, "Why is this?" Mom said
This is Daddy making bait for the fish to eat and take the bait! "Now I realized. Dad frowned and turned his face to look at me and Mom, and we didn't dare to squeak in amusement.
After a while, the fish floating on the surface of the river began to twitch, and I was happy. shouted: "Dad, there is a fish on the hook, hurry up!"
Dad hurriedly said, "Shhh Don't make a sound.
I quickly covered my mouth, my eyes widened to watch the fish float gradually sinking, suddenly my father swooped up the fishing rod, a fat and big fish flicked its tail on the hook, my mother and I clapped our hands happily, I was busy carrying the fish to my grandmother, not to mention how happy I was in my heart!
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