Please help me change my junior high school essay and help me change it

Teacher Zhang is our physical education teacher in the first year of junior high school, swarthy **, and his figure looks particularly burly and strong.

Mr. Zhang's figure is particularly good. He said he also won the honorary title of "Mr. Bodybuilder" several times in college. When we were given lessons, we all had to run.

Mr. Zhang will run with us, and he will run as much as we run. Although he is older than us, his physique is not inferior to ours.

Playing basketball, the physical education teacher looks particularly good. In basketball lessons, the kind of moves that we thought were difficult seemed to him to be a piece of cake. When he teaches us to shoot, we can see that his powerful big hand throws the basketball into the blue frame accurately, and he shoots ten times, and the probability of hitting the basketball is 99%, which is really good for a professional basketball player.

The PE teacher who went up the stairs was particularly good, and he was able to run up to the fourth floor without much effort.

Seeing that the PE teacher is so strong. I also learned from the PE teacher to exercise. Wake up at 5 a.m. and go out for a run.

This has two benefits: one is to exercise and the other is to breathe in the fresh morning air. Skipping rope at the sports venue downstairs at noon will make me work up my appetite.

Therefore, I suggest that you should exercise more and improve your resistance so that you can have a good body.

That's my PE teacher, and he's a good role model for me.

It was just April, and the sun seemed to have changed its face," the sentence did not make sense. I couldn't help but be slow, and after two and a half laps, I finally "struggled" to the finish. "It doesn't make sense.

After the exam. It was in the evening after a midterm exam, and I walked towards the school gate, only to see that the sky was gray, and soon it was pouring rain. I looked at the gray sky and remembered the scene of the midterm exam results coming out and the loss.

After lunch that day, the results of the midterm exams came out, and I did very poorly. There was a strong sense of loss, and I had no strength in my body. In physical education class, I saw that my classmates were all going to the Chinese teacher to get the final exam papers, and I also lowered my head and walked towards the office with my thighs that seemed to weigh thousands of pounds.

There were already students queuing up in the office, and the Chinese teacher was commenting on everyone's test papers. I found my one among the many 100-point papers – 97 points. The test paper with a full score of 130 only scored 97 points, and I was suddenly "petrified".

I didn't know what to do, so I habitually went to the end of the line.

Before that, the math and Chinese scores had already come out, and I scored 103 points in math. You must know that everyone else has a score of 110, and math has always been my strong point, so this score alone is a big enough blow to me. Later, the English score came out shortly after, and I scored 103 again.

God, everyone else is in their 110s or 120s, but I only have 103 points. I could see from the English teacher's expression that the English teacher wanted to "break me into pieces". Now I'm only 97 in Chinese, oh my God, what am I going to do?

Time flies, and soon it will be my turn. The Chinese teacher was about to comment on my test papers, and my heart was like "fifteen buckets of water - seven up and eight down". At this moment, the physics teacher came with the physics test paper that had just been approved.

My heart was pounding, and I saw the head teacher walk over and read it. I don't know how long later, I heard the head teacher suddenly say something about me: "Li Ganghong's physics test is not bad.

My heart suddenly calmed down, and then the math teacher picked up again: "Li Ganghong failed the math test this time." The English teacher followed suit

He only scored 103 points in English, a few from the bottom, what do you compare with others? People are not solid at all, and the foundation is a mess. This is what the Chinese teacher said to me

If you don't hear it, it's okay if you listen carefully in class for science, but what you're most afraid of in liberal arts is that you're not down-to-earth, and if you hear the words of the English teacher, you're just too playful. ”

My heart was like an overloaded motor, and my tears fell like pearls with broken threads. After the Chinese teacher's comment, I went back to the classroom and cried.

The rain is still falling, and I wish time could stop there! How do I explain this to my parents when I get home? They expected so much from me, and I failed them.

If time had stopped, I wouldn't have gone home, my parents wouldn't have been disappointed, but that was impossible, and I had to walk slowly on the way home with heavy steps.

The sky was still gray, the rain was still falling, and I was still on my way home.

(v) Well, it's very well written, the mind is delicate, and the psychological description is also very good, but who are you writing about??

"Farewell, my dear alma mater! "Standing on campus, looking at this familiar everything, my heart let out a cry. The white clouds condensed in the air, echoing my reluctance; The little bird stopped in the treetops and sang lovelessly, wanting to sing praises before parting, and everything was silently blessing me.

The floodgates of memory open in silence.

I won't forget those colorful days. The fruits achieved in the past six years are vividly vivid, and it embodies how much hard work and sweat the teachers have. At night, the stars shine.

The teacher's window reflects the figure of the teacher preparing for class, which is the deep affection of nurturing peach and plum under the table lamp. I think, teacher, you are like a star, swaying all your light to the fullest, just to leave a piece of clear light for educating people. How many times, when the sun is scorching, you give us lectures in the classroom.

You know that you are like the sun, giving your life generously with light and heat, without expecting anything in return. The calendar was flipped through one by one, and the sorrows and joys of our elementary school life were recorded on it. We play and study next to the locust tree on campus; On the playground we ran and kicked the keys.

Six years of companionship, strong friendship at the same table, oh alma mater, I will never forget you.

Farewell, alma mater; Farewell, mentors and alumni.

I hope you take a look at it, I've worked so hard to change it!

Don't. Lovely school.

Farewell, lovely alma mater, my dear alma mater! "Standing on campus, looking at this familiar everything, I let out a call from my heart. The white clouds seem to be condensed in the air, fluttering lightly, all of which are silently seeing me off, and the floodgates of memory are opening in silence

The colorful primary school life has left many unforgettable pages in life. The fruits achieved in the past six years are the result of the sweat and blood of the teachers.

It was dark, and the teacher's window reflected the figure of the teacher preparing for the lesson. Whenever this happens, I often think of the stars. Teacher, you are like a star, you give all your light to the fullest, how many times, when the scorching sun is in the sky, you give us a lecture in the classroom.

Teacher, you are like the sun, giving generously to the light and heat of your life. I will never forget you, my teacher.

The calendar was flipped through one by one, and the sorrows and joys of our primary school life were recorded on it. In the past six years, I have developed a deep friendship with my partners who have been getting along day and night. I once remembered the scene of us playing and learning next to the locust tree on campus; On the playground, we run and kick the keys to exercise the game.

Oh, the strong love of the same table is also floating at this moment.

Farewell, alma mater; Farewell, teacher. I will not forget you in the future.

It's modified. In addition to individual language problems, there are also typos, I hope your essay is getting better and better!

The word for [silently, silently] should be changed to "earth".