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There is a school on the bank of the Nandu River, the students in it are lively and lovely, and the teachers in it are amiable. It's my school

When you walk through the door, the first thing that catches your eye is the towering office building. This office building has white walls and green windows, and the branches below are luxuriant, and the flower beds next to it are full of flowers. Geese swept by in the sky, warblers sang and butterflies danced.

The word "nature" came to mind. On the left, there is a very large sports field, and standing there, you will feel very small. To the right is the basketball court, with green poles and red frames, gray ground and white lines, brown balls and white clothes, and three points of applause.

If you go a little further, you will see our school building, which is the holy place of learning. There are three teaching buildings in front of you, which is very majestic.

Please, you're in too much of a hurry to use idioms, but you don't notice that you're using the right phrase.

There is a school on the banks of the Nandu River, where the students are energetic and the teachers there are amiable. It's my school

Walking through the door, you will see an office building with white walls and green windows, surrounded by tall trees with lush foliage, fresh flowers in the flower beds next to the building, and the occasional wild goose passing by, with a few long cries across the sky above the school. My school, you can't help but feel the "natural" atmosphere. Walking to the left, there is a wide sports field, the grass is green, the red flag is fluttering, and the students who are exercising there are in their prime.

Looking to the right, there is a basketball court with green poles and red frames, gray ground and white lines, as long as it is between classes, the cheers of the students and the sound of sweat dripping are indispensable. If you go inside, you will see our holy place of learning - the teaching building, the third floor is juxtaposed, the momentum is majestic, the white walls and white doors, simple and generous, the blue curtain is on the floor, and the tables and chairs are brown.

The first paragraph is a typo, change which one to that. The second paragraph was changed to Yong, the construction period was changed to a red flag, and the playground could not be described in its prime. Brown ball and white clothes, three-point cheering is not appropriate. Then the blue curtain fell to the ground, and the tables and chairs were brown and unsuitable, so they were removed.

That's it, there are a lot of good words overall.

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Title: The Days That Accompany Books.

Many people indulge in flowers; Many people are addicted to online games; Many people meditate on virtual items. However, is there anyone who is obsessed with the years of studying?

As the days go by, how long can the books that accompany us last? An ancient man once said, "Books are a necessity for mankind." However, how many people know the joy of reading? And how many people can be awakened?

People who spend all day drinking and drinking, when they come out to work, don't understand anything. In the end, the only way to do evil is to join some illegal associations and do evil things; People who are obsessed with online games all day long, what can they do when they come out of society? is only full of confusion about life; People who are obsessed with virtual items all day long, in order to get the long-awaited items, let go of their dignity, let go of their purity, and go to steal jade and steal hooks.

However, how many people have woken up from this? What about getting rid of it? Please open your eyes and get rid of these mistakes.

Go read while you're young! Find everything that belongs to you, and from now on you can look up and realize your dreams!

Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles. Yes, this was the ambition of the ancients. However, I don't think it's perfect enough. We should read and learn from the old. Let the book accompany you and live the best years.

Some people are tired of reading and feel that reading is a burden, just a waste without reward. Now I can tell you cautiously that you were wrong. Reading is a pleasure, an experience.

Some people, although they have realized the importance and necessity of reading. But they pushed the reading until tomorrow, and when it came to tomorrow, they pushed down tomorrow again, thinking that it would be enough to read twice as much tomorrow, okay. However, reading, like journaling, is a daily necessity.

Life is full of changes, until one day, you realize that you are reading, and then maybe you are already old, or even passed away quietly. At that time, you will regret it for the rest of your life.

The days with books are really numbered. The days go by day by day, please, you who are drunk, you who feel confused. While you're young, hurry up and find your own book. Rise to the occasion and challenge the future!

What the breeze takes away is the unbearable yesterday. Please sum up your failures and look forward to tomorrow!

Wow, what grade are you, big brother, so well written.

I'm only in my first year of junior high school. Please advise.

It's already well written, there's nothing to change.

Weave colorful dreams with both hands, and hold up the future with dreams. China, with a dream, has a "national dream" for the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation, a "dream of the rule of law", and a "dream of happiness". The youth of dreams will never fade, and I am a middle school student, I also have a dream, to become a people's teacher in the future, to shed light, to cultivate the future flowers of the motherland, and let them fight for the country, this is my biggest dream.

Isn't the long stream of water as life? Isn't the turbulent sea just as China's steps into the future? Countless Chinese sons and daughters have gathered the same dream in their hearts: to revitalize China, to rejuvenate the nation, and to make the country rise!

The wisdom of the youth is the wisdom of the country, and the strength of the youth is the strength of the country......"Isn't our main task as middle school students to study? Remember that clear, powerful voice many years ago? The sentence "Reading for the Rise of China" has inspired the hearts of many people, and how many people have been staggered, so young *** can have such great ideals and ambitions, why can't we do it today?

What I always remember in my heart is "We are Chinese!" "No matter what dreams we have for our more than 1.3 billion people, we all have the same goal. Therefore, we must take steps and fight for it!

Thinking of how many Chinese athletes fought bloody battles with swords and guns, they were brave and good at fighting, and they roared sonorously and powerfully, they had a common belief and a common goal to support their spirit, such a great and strong, so they have the current peace and happiness.

Now we are also saying, Chinese dream, my dream! At the Olympic Games, the shining light of the gold medal is the shining light that China is now shining in the international arena. The dreams of the Chinese people are woven into thousands of countless shining points, dream + struggle = success.

Each person is only eleven meager strength, but what a powerful force gathered to make the country rich and strong! Let the nation rejuvenate!

Watching the national flag rise against the rising sun in the east, my heart is filled with pride, happiness, and hope. The Chinese dream flows in the hearts of every Chinese and inspires everyone to forge ahead. China's 5,000-year-long history has written many exciting bloody stories and created many respectable heroes.

In the long river of history, how many ancient Chinese cultures have influenced us, we must take our steps to a newer level and follow the Chinese dream! And we have to treat the Chinese dream as our dream, and usher in a different life with a smile with our actions!