An excellent 600 word narrative essay at the junior high school level should have good rhetorical de

Time flies, time flies, but there are often days in life that are worth remembering. Moreover, it is "this day" that makes our lives more colorful; This day has made you so unusual from early morning to dusk; "This day" makes you extraordinary from then on, "this day" ......This day in my life is something I remember ......

After failing the exam, I walked aimlessly down the street alone, feeling as if the world was gray, and inadvertently my eyes fell on an inconspicuous tree trunk, and my strong curiosity prompted me to walk over. It was a chrysalis, and the life that had transformed from a caterpillar into a butterfly was struggling to get out of the chrysalis. I wanted to help him, but I also wanted to help him, and I didn't want to help him, the hand that had just been stretched out retracted coldly.

The chrysalis was broken little by little, and after a while, the life inside seemed to be tired and stopped struggling. I smiled sarcastically, "Look, aren't you just as unsuccessful?"

Just as I was about to leave, the chrysalis moved again, and the little life inside began to struggle again. I was blown away by the vitality of such a young insect. After a while, the butterfly completely emerged from the chrysalis and he turned his wings and my eyes became colorful.

The outermost layer of his wings was a purple wall, followed by a bright gold, the red two dots seemed to have eyes on his wings, and the innermost orange was more like a cheer for his life! At this moment, he seemed to want me to show off: "Haha, I succeeded!"

I was indeed struck by her beauty, but even more struck me by her strong vitality.

She flew away, but I was still standing there, staring blankly, the feeling of failing the exam suddenly dissipated, and the dark clouds in my heart flew away. Such a big difficulty, a small insect can get through, how can I be scared of such a small difficulty?

In an instant, life returned to its previous color, and the sun was still so bright, shining on the warm ...... in my heart

The process of the chrysalis transformation is so short, but the inspiration he left me is so long. I was intoxicated ......

This moment is the most impressive moment in my life, and this day is the longest day of inspiration in my life.

This day is a day that I remember ......

That is to say, don't just talk about others in life, but also think about how others help you and how bad you are!

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