Please help me revise it, thank you can help me revise it

No problem, very good article.

Very good article, please read it!

Let me give you my opinion (personal opinion).

1. Your theme idea is "moving".

But in your paragraph 3 it doesn't fit the topic and is a bit different from the beginning.

It is recommended that you change it to "Touched, from love." Love is the waves in the long river of life, and the waves form the vast sea. What is love......(your article)".

2. It is recommended that you do not use "......".Although you don't show it in PPT, you still feel that it is inappropriate to have this symbol in the article.

3. It is recommended that you can change the 3rd paragraph and the 2nd paragraph, which may be more consistent with the structure of your subsequent articles!

My mother didn't know how to cook before I had me, but after I had me, because my father had to work overtime a lot, my mother didn't dare to eat anymore for the sake of my health, so I had to learn to cook. Since then, as long as it is a book related to cooking, TV shows and colleagues who can cook, my mother will not let it go, but I will see that my mother's delicate hands have some more knife wounds

The burns hurt me, but my mother never gave up. As the saying goes, hard work pays off, and now my mother not only cooks, but also often creates some very nutritious foods that are very suitable for children, which attracts the children of the neighborhood to come to my house for dinner. But behind all this, only I know what happened to my mother!

Mother's love is like a cool breeze - when I have sweat; My mother's love was a tear that flowed - when I was sick, my mother waited anxiously for me; Mother's love is a flower-folded umbrella - when I encounter wind and rain outside; Mother's love is a warm harbor ......

Plain and insipid maternal love.

Read the following passage, identify the error in the passage, and correct it.

In the morning, I went to school with Lihua. Halfway through, I suddenly remembered that the stationery box was at home. I said to Lihua, "You go first, I'll go home and get the stationery box." With that, I ran home as fast as I could.

You need us to help you change what to upload**We will help you take a look.

Whatever you want to change, I can.

What do you need to help you change? I didn't see it.