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Watching the autumn leaves fall like tears Dust that has fallen to the ground Why don't you gently push the mullions Listen to the heartbreak of the wall The spring breeze is gone and will never return Leaving a season of slumber How will I look for the fiery buds of the past? The lotus pond in midsummer has been replaced by sad autumn water On the banks of the river How can I find the dancing butterflies in my dreams? Xiao Xiao's autumn wind spits out a deep intoxication Bare dead wood The longing for the verdant mountains A little autumn rain Playing a faint sadness Scattered autumn leaves Waiting for the reincarnation of life Whether it is through the severe cold of winter Can you get the comfort of spring But spring and summer quietly slipped away Without leaving a single tear Watching the autumn in the season Can't stand the remnants of the years I don't know what kind of tears will be after the watch The years lost in the corner are gone forever The hope flowing in life ...... like thisThe smoke is gone
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The day I came was about half a month, and I tried to do a daily update for half a month, but sometimes I started the topic, and I couldn't continue to write it because I was so choked that I didn't want to give up the article halfway, so I just waited for a day and thought about the topic clearly before writing.
I can be said to be an amateur in writing, I have never taken out my own words to read, and there is no circle of friends, and one essay a day is a matter of elementary school. At that time, the teacher's requirements were the same, mainly the number of words, I still remember that I was struggling to find a writing topic every day, I couldn't make up the number of words, I couldn't hand in my homework, and I stayed up on the desk until everyone at home fell asleep.
Before I came, I occasionally wrote some travelogues and wrote a diary, but it was just my own unintentional record, and I never wanted to show it to others, and I was ashamed to show it to others. The reason for being ashamed to show people is that the content is gloomy, but when you are in a bad mood, you are depressed and unbearable, or you think that you have glimpsed the deep underlying truth and cannot be made public, or you are just scribbling a random account without careful structure and words, and you can't call it an article.
Tang Seng has a saying in Journey to the West, I don't know why it often echoes in the brain, that is, the paragraph that seems particularly meaningless, "You want it?" Wukong, if you want it, you can speak, if you don't say how I know you want it, although you look at me very sincerely, but you still have to tell me what you want. Do you really want it?
Then you can take it! You don't really want to, do you? Do you really want to?
The Tang Seng in it is really poisonous, and I don't know why I am deeply impressed by this passage, so that I often have a Tang Seng in my heart who is verbose, "Do you want to write?" If you want to write, you can write, if you don't write, how do you know you want to write, although you write and hide it, but if you don't write it, it still doesn't prove that you want to write, do you really want to write?
Are you really going to write? If you want to write it, why don't you show it to others? Don't you really want to show it?
Do you really want to write? ”
I couldn't help it because of that Tang monk, okay, I want to write, I really want to write, I want to write it and put it on for people to see, can a text that doesn't let people see it still be called an article?
You don't know how hard it is to really start doing it, and it takes a lot of brain cells and a lot of time to seriously write an article that can be read by others, and it's not just a kind of entertainment that you think you have at first. Thousand-word essays are small goals that are difficult to achieve, thinking that other people's articles are just chatter, and when I really start to write, I find that it takes a lot of consideration to write down the chatter, and it is not easy to write one more word and one more sentence. Sometimes in order to add one sentence in order to make up more words, I feel that the preface does not match the afterword, and I delete two or three sentences.
At this time, I began to realize that my control of the text was so poor, the limitations of the content and subject matter were so great, and I could not talk about the structure and layout of the long story.
If writing is a tall building, what I am doing now is just beginning to dig the foundation, but in short, it is still a happy start, I don't know how long I can last, I don't know if I can write it, but I firmly believe that I will not regret because of this beginning, I believe in the power of accumulation over time.
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The novelty of things can be said in two ways. The first is the extraordinaryness of the things themselves, such as the scenery and customs of distant places, the production of kitkats, the major accidents of the country, the deeds of heroes and celebrities, complex stories, etc., which are certainly worth writing about. One is that the thing itself is ordinary, but the author has found a new meaning for this ordinary thing, which is also worth writing about.
There have never been two types of narrative themes. In fact, except for practical essays, the subject matter of all articles is these two types.
Things that are not fair to themselves are actually infrequent, and ordinary people may not often encounter them in their lives. What we experience on a daily basis is nothing more than ordinary things. However, ordinary things contain infinite aspects or contents, and if you can observe them carefully and experience them carefully, you can discover new meanings at any time, and this new meaning is the subject of the article.
People who have always been able to write articles are probably people who can find new meanings in ordinary things. The old "love" between men and women, the well-known "flower" and the triumphant "moon", I don't know how many literati have used it, and how many good articles have been written.
The new meaning is the life of the subject matter of the narrative. The new meaning of things can only be discovered by observing and experiencing. Therefore, the cultivation of observation and experience is the basic skill of writing narratives.
Xia Yazun Ye Shengtao "Seventy-two Writing Lessons".
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Living in this world, every day we have to meet some people, experience some things, and every moment, there are thoughts that keep flashing in our minds. The library of writing materials that has just been framed has more content in bits and pieces. But when I pick up the pen, I still hesitate, where do I start writing about such people, such things, and such messy ideas?
With these questions, I opened "Seventy-two Writing Lessons".
I remember a friend said that when the ancients wrote poems, the closed school was nothing more than visiting relatives and friends, visiting the mountains and rivers, sad spring and autumn, and depressed.
Until now, the articles we write can't escape this range. An article is a record of things and events in the world, and something that expresses the author's meaning and emotions.
If you just write everything in order, such as what you ate this morning, what you ate at noon, and what you ate at night, the article will become a running account.
Or the article blindly expresses his dissatisfaction, resentment, and self-talk, and the article becomes a self-congratulatory essay again.
Even if you're writing alone, think of the reader sitting across from you. Writing an article is talking to the reader on the other side.
Think about it from another perspective, if someone keeps talking about the trivialities of life or talking about yourself when you talk to you, you are afraid that you will want to run away a long time ago.
Therefore, when writing articles, it is always necessary to write about things and truths related to the reader, which is beneficial to the reader. It's also best to be able to empathize with the reader. Don't say what others already know. Write content that is worth reading and that will make the reader feel novel.
What is novelty content?
In two aspects, one is the extraordinaryness of the thing itself. Such as the scenery and customs of distant places, the production of KitKat, the big story of the country, the deeds of heroes and celebrities, complex stories, etc.
One is that the thing itself is ordinary, but the author has found a new meaning for this ordinary thing.
For those of us who are ordinary people, there are limited opportunities to experience extraordinary things. When I read Sanmao's prose, I often sigh at the simplicity and touching nature of her writing. I also want to write my own story.
Later, I realized that maybe I would never be able to live like Sanmao in my life, her life is legendary enough, and her writing, even if it is just a record of the daily life of life, is attractive enough.
As an ordinary person, I can only work hard to refine my eyes, use my wisdom to find the extraordinary in ordinary life, and explore the novelty in daily life.
I think Wang Zengqi's words have such charm. He has childlike eyes that look at everything carefully.
He wrote about the wildflower Shandandan and wrote an interesting knowledge point that Shandandan blooms more than one flower a year, so Shandandan "remembers" his birthday. A few flowers are how old you are. And this matter, the author who wrote about the blossoming and falling of Shandandan may not know, and the singer who sings will not know.
If you can find something unknown in ordinary things or sedan chairs, I'm afraid that only writers have the mental strength to do so.
Even though we are just ordinary writers, we should also learn from the masters. Every ordinary person's experience and experience is unique, as long as you put your mind to it, you will always discover the unknown side of the people and things around you.
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1.The theme is clear. The title of the article is "You Are My Accident", which expresses the author's longing for the subject, and this old theme runs through the whole text.
2.The language is delicate. The author's language is relatively delicate and rich, and a large number of rhetorical devices are used, such as metaphors, personifications, rhetorical questions, etc., which fully demonstrate the author's linguistic talent.
3.Emotional sincerity. The feelings of longing expressed in the article are unusually sincere and touching, which makes the work have a strong emotional impact.
4.The structure is clear. The article takes the search for youth and true love as a clue, and gradually shows the author's thoughts about the object, which is relatively coherent and clear.
Emotional expression is too subjective. The author is too subjective and direct to express his feelings of longing, and less in terms of the object or other perspectives, which can make the work appear subjective and emotional. Sue Lusheng.
So, in general, this is a good work with delicate language and sincere emotions.
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This essay seems to be a letter to a former lover or a loved one, expressing the author's strong thoughts and love for him after nine years of loss. The essay is full of poetry and imagination, using a large number of metaphors and images to depict the rich emotional world of the author's heart.
There are many sentimental words and sentences mentioned in the article, such as "a comma that has not been finished for nine years", "a beautiful accident", and "love fire!" The fire has been like the eruption of the mountains in the rough world", etc., all of which express the author's deep feelings and memories of this experience. At the same time, the article also uses natural scenery and seasons, such as autumn winds, falling leaves, spring, etc., to express the author's yearning and expectation for the future and hope.
Although the essay does not have a clear structure and theme, it is very personal and literary. The whole article is smooth and full of limbs, and it shows the author's affectionate inner world.
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Nine years of longing and love make people feel the firmness and persistence of your contents. The preciousness of love requires us to care for and cherish it with our hearts. Your words also express respect and gratitude for every encounter in life, which is a beautiful quality.
I hope that in the days to come, you will continue to strengthen your beliefs and pursue your own happiness. At the same time, I also hope that you can cherish the people in front of you, grasp the moment, and make every encounter in your life more beautiful.
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The article is brilliantly written, the rhetoric is gorgeous, the language is simple, the writing is fresh, the emotions are rich, the characters are full of celebrity, the structure is clear, the structure is clear, the plot is reasonable, the ups and downs, the description is vivid, fascinating, the art Dan is infectious, and the ending is late to grasp the finishing touch, the meaning is profound, thought-provoking, and the meaning is long.
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In the narrative, the author compares peanuts with peaches, pomegranates, and applesMy father compared peanuts to peaches, pomegranates, and apples. The comparison of the appearance of the fruit and the position of the fruit at the time of bearing shows that peanuts are the most valuable.
Peaches, pomegranates, and apples are bright red and green, while peanuts put ripe fruits into the soil, waiting for people to dig them up and use them. From this, you realize that the valuable quality of peanuts is not seeking fame, silent dedication, and unpretentiousness.
Such a contrast, clearly highlighting the silent dedication of peanuts, not seeking fame, simple and unpretentious good quality, very real, there is a kind of inner beauty.
"Falling Peanuts" explains:
The essay "Falling Peanuts" is the work of Xu Dishan, a modern Chinese writer. This is a narrative essay that revolves throughout the text"Planting peanuts - harvesting peanuts - eating peanuts - discussing peanuts"to write, a true record of a family activity and education received by the author when he was a child.
The prose describes the scene of a family harvesting peanuts, and by talking about the benefits of peanuts, using things to metaphor people, revealing the character of peanuts without vain fame and silent dedication. It shows that people should be useful people, not people who only talk about decency and are not beneficial to others, which expresses the author's life ideals and values that are not for fame and fortune, but only for the benefit of society.
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