Correction, 2 punctuation, 2 typos, 3 language problems

This semester, I fell in love with reading, because I know that there is an old Chinese saying, "Black hair does not know how to study early, and white hair regrets studying late." "Reading a good book is like talking to a close friend. Recently, I have read a lot of books and learned that the author of Robinson Crusoe is Defoe, and Lu Xun's hometown is Shaoxing, Zhejiang.

The newspapers I often read include "Elementary School Students' Mathematics News", "Reading", "Composition World", etc., and through a lot of extracurricular reading, I have increased my knowledge and writing skills.

1. (punctuation) The comma is used in the ancient saying;

2. (punctuation) Robinson Crusoe uses the title number.

3. (language disease) and ......It cannot be used in combination.

4. (typo) best friend.

5. (Language disease) can not be used together through and make.

6. (typo) Earnest talk.

7. (sick sentence) Lu Xun is a native of Shaoxing, Zhejiang, not a native of Shaoxing, Zhejiang.

Punctuation "The black hair does not know how to study early, and the white head regrets studying late". Robinson Crusoe

and so on......Remove the ellipsis.

Typo, Kentan, Talk.

Lu Xun's hometown is a native of Shaoxing, Zhejiang Lu Xun's hometown is Shaoxing, Zhejiang.

Increased knowledge and writing skills Improved writing skills.

Through a lot of extracurricular reading, I was able to get rid of the passes.

One day during the summer vacation, I was watching "Journey to the West" in the room. Just as I was watching Du with relish, I suddenly heard someone outside shouting: "It's raining on the dao!" It's raining! I hurriedly put down the book and retrieved the sheets that were hanging outside.

Two typos: signature (false) - summer (false), special (ran) - sudden or sudden (ran) two wrong punctuation:

1. If the full stop after "one day" is used incorrectly, it should be changed to a comma.

2. The quotation marks on Journey to the West are incorrect, and they should be changed to the title number.

Sick sentence: "I hurriedly put down the book". - The words "hurry" and "hurry" are repeated, and one of them is deleted.

Bai day on leave. I watched du in the room

Journey to the West". Just as I was looking at the smell of dao with relish, I heard someone outside shouting: "It's raining!" It's raining! I hurriedly put down the book and retrieved the sheets that had been hanging outside. They are:

Two typos: signature (false) - summer (false), special (ran) - sudden or sudden (ran) two wrong punctuation:

1. If the full stop after "one day" is used incorrectly, it should be changed to a comma.

2. The quotation marks on Journey to the West are incorrect, and they should be changed to the title number.

Sick sentence: "I hurriedly put down the book". - The words "hurry" and "hurry" are repeated, and one of them is deleted.

One day during the summer vacation, I was watching "Journey to the West" in my room. Just as I was watching with relish, I suddenly heard someone outside.

"It's raining."

Answer! It's raining! I hurriedly put down the book and retrieved the sheets that were hanging outside.

Two typos: signature (false) - summer (false), special (ran) - sudden (ran) two wrong punctuation:

1. If the full stop after "one day" is used incorrectly, it should be changed to a comma.

2. The quotation marks on Journey to the West are incorrect, and they should be changed to the title number.

Sick sentence: "I hurriedly put down the book". - The words "hurry" and "hurry" are repeated, and one of them is deleted.

One day during the summer vacation, I was watching "Journey to the West" in my room. Just as I was watching with relish, I suddenly heard someone outside shouting, "It's raining!" It's raining! I hurriedly put down the book and retrieved the sheets that were hanging outside.

Two typos: (signed) fake summer vacation, (specially) - (suddenly) two wrong punctuation:

1. If the full stop after "one day" is used incorrectly, it should be changed to a comma.

2. The quotation marks on Journey to the West are incorrect, and they should be changed to the title number.

Sick sentence: "I hurriedly put down the book". - The words "hurry" and "hurry" are repeated, and the words "hurry" are deleted.

The students loved the nature experiment class the most. Under the microscope, the "supernatural" bacteria all showed their original (form). Mr. Wang, who teaches nature, explained (beautifully to us) the history of human research on bacteria, and everyone listened to it with relish and couldn't take their eyes off it.

Even Xiao Ming, who usually doesn't respect the teacher very much, sat in his position in a regular manner and listened carefully to the class.

The special abilities of living beings in nature often arouse the deep interest of human beings. For example, the eyes of frogs are very peculiar, they are very keen to see things that are moving, but they are slow to see things that are still things. People took a cue from the frog's eye and invented the "electronic frog eye".

Biomimicry is the study of the structure and function of certain organs of living organisms, and the imitation and inspiration from them are used to develop new instruments.

1 punctuation: The invention of "The Electronic Frog's Eye" Here should be quotation marks instead of the title of the book 2 Typos: 1. People get a notice from a frog's eye It should be "revelation".

2. Research and treatment into new instruments should be "developed".

3 language problems: 1. The eyes of the frog are very special and peculiar Repeatedly, "special" should be deleted, 2. Blind to still things "Blind" is a misnomer, blind means "seeing is the same as not seeing", so this sentence is changed to "can see still things but are very dull".

3. People study certain organs and structures and functions of living organisms The first "and" should be changed to "of".

The special [strange] abilities of living beings in nature are often of great interest. For example, the frog's version has very special eyes, which are very peculiar and strange, and they are very keen at seeing moving things, but they are blind to still things. [, people got the notice [enlightenment] from the frog's eye, and invented the ["electronic frog eye"] "electronic frog eye".

People study certain organs and structures and functions of living things, imitate them and get inspiration from them, and develop new instruments, which is called "biomimicry".

Xiaohong's mother is a warm-hearted person. Once, when she saw the neighbor's child staying at the door of the house and couldn't get in, she took the initiative to lead the child to her house, asked him for warmth, and enthusiastically left him at home to eat, and the people around her did not praise her.

1."Warm-hearted" after the "person"."

2."Warm-hearted"The comma after is replaced by a full stop.

3."Neighbor's "changed to "neighbor's".

4."To be" is changed to "stay".

5."In the door" was changed to "in the door".

6."Cai" is changed to "just".

7."Passionately stream him" is changed to "enthusiastically keep him".

8.No one around praised her to change to no one around her who didn't praise her.

No, sick sentences refer to sentences with incomplete structure, unclear and unclear meanings, and errors. The purpose of the training is to recognize the mistakes that are easy to make when writing sentences, so that you can write less and no sick sentences, and express the meaning clearly and smoothly.

Common types of language disorders:

1) Incomplete Components: This kind of sentence lacks necessary ingredients and has incomplete meanings. Such as:

Sing aloud. Students know that a sentence can generally be divided into two parts, the first part says "who" or "what", and the latter part says "what", "what" or "how", these two parts are the basic components of the sentence and are indispensable.

2) Repetition of meaning: This kind of sentence is a sentence that says a meaning in the front, and repeats it again in the back, and the meaning is repeated. For example: "I corrected an incorrect typo." "Incorrect" here means the same as "typo", and it is redundant to use it together.

3) Improper use of words: This kind of sentence is due to a lack of understanding of the meaning of the word, the use of the wrong synonyms, etc., creating a difficult bend into a word that does not reach the meaning, and violates the structure of the sentence. Such as:

4) Word order reversal: Word order is the order in which words are arranged in a sentence, and this order reflects the position of words in the structure of the sentence. Every word has its own place in the structure of the language, and if it leaves its place, it commits the mistake of improper word order.

For example: "This year's wheat harvest is in sight, and the growth is gratifying." "The growth of wheat is gratifying, and a bumper harvest is in sight, and the reversal of the word order does not conform to the objective law.

The language disease does not include the wrong mark and the wrong point of the travel bank to dismantle the tent banquet, see for details:

Generally speaking, it counts, but generally punctuation and grammatical errors are said separately, seemingly.