The Chinese teacher asked me to help her classmates compose essays, and asked me to write comments,

Analyze the words, words, sentences, articles, structure, thinking, and connotation of the composition according to the content of the composition. It's best to use motivational language.

Write off-topic, don't forget to focus on the center, the main idea.

You don't have to be good at writing on your own, the more books you read, the more sensitive you are to language. And when approving an article, the first thing to look at is whether the sentences of the article are smooth, vivid, and delicate, secondly, whether it is logical, and finally whether it expresses its true feelings. And the selection of materials should be novel, and the teacher said that the text seems to look at the mountains and does not like the flat.

As long as you do these things, it's a good article...

This article is meticulously described, neatly written, profoundly describes autumn, highlights the characteristics of the season of "autumn", is a good study, continue to work hard!

The level is low, and I didn't understand this sentence.

Everything starts with praise and the drum tower.

When a child does not know how to see the world with his own eyes, your praise is the motivation for him to move towards a wider world.

Every child who writes his own essay cares about the teacher's comments! I still remember the words that followed those essays.

Affirm, then suggest, then talk about ways to improve.

The idea is clear, the information is detailed, the paragraphs are interlocking, and the theme is prominent.

What level of composition do you have? Elementary school junior high school or what? The beginning should be where to pick the sentence copied by dao.,It's very blunt.,It's incompatible with the article.,It's better to write a little plain.,The end is also a little abrupt......Shouldn't you start by pointing out the ...... that the above examples and data show that traffic accidents are often caused by people not following the traffic rules?

You can choose a sentence like bai appreciating a good sentence, and use the rhetorical method of dao through the sentence, what is written in the version, and what emotions are expressed to write. If you don't have a good way to write, you can also write "delicate description, beautiful sentences, appropriate metaphors" and so on.

That's what I used to write.

Hope it helps.

After leading Bai Chen, the people should be dizzy, feel the shoulder, Liju, Fuzhi, the wind is rusty, and Liaoyue is beautiful.

b, casually, how can the word not be ...... like a catThe words are not in the middle of the grid, and of course they don't look pleasing to the eye......Your words are staggered, is it because the wind is too strong today that it has blown into such a ......I don't believe that your handwriting is not good, and it will always be scribb......led like thisWrite carefully and patiently, and you will write even better than I ......

Content A, such a rich content, is almost the same as what a writer writes......Your assignments are flesh and blood, and it's a real pleasure to read......The content of your essay is specific, and I enjoyed reading ...... itYou must have loved to read it as a paperwork, and it is ...... you write so many words

b. The dry content is like boiled water, there is no taste at all, and it is delicious to add more beautiful words and sentences......It's not as good as Liu Weiwei's word count (or other bad names), don't you feel a little embarrassed......Your essay is like the mouth of a 90-year-old lady, shriveled and hollow, and your speech is leaky ......