The essay I wrote in high school, please polish it by a master, thank you, I will send you an essay

How many words, what type, what effect to achieve.

First paragraph: To quote Russell's famous quote, 'There is no shortage of beauty in life......And then by extension, the same is true of love. Illustrating the common understanding of love, ordinary life, some people lament the lack of love, but in fact, love is only hidden under the ordinary surface, sometimes it is not so obvious, and it needs to be carefully experienced.

In the second paragraph, for example, the most beautiful theme mentioned above is introduced, explaining that the reason why ordinary people can do great things is because of love. It is pointed out that they are not great people with a different ideological realm, but only because of the belief in their hearts, they inspire and create miracles when they encounter abnormal situations.

The third paragraph talks about the counter-example in real life, the indifference of society, that is, because there is less love in interpersonal relations in daily life, and it is necessary to pursue great love in addition to loving one's own 'little love', so as to push oneself and others.

The fourth paragraph, summarizing the lyricism, is that love is not a rare object placed in the exhibition hall, but a friendly smile, the concern of neighbors and friends, the compassion for the weak, and the love and awe of life.

Once you have this material, you can write it yourself.

Surrounding the great selfless love, plus these materials, is enough.

Set the theme, outline it, select the materials, and then start writing.

In fact, teachers only look at the beginning and the end...However, if you want to write a good essay, you must first clarify what you want to express, accumulate more materials, read more books, and see how other authors write an article.

Today is the Mid-Autumn Festival, a day of reunion for thousands of families. As the saying goes: the moon rises in the sea, and the end of the world is at this time.

But this year we were not so lucky, the sky was drizzling and the sky was overcast from the morning. It seems that we will not be able to see the bright moon tonight.

In the evening, our family gathered around a table to eat a reunion dinner, chatting happily, my brother and I ate round mooncakes, looking at the night sky from time to time, I couldn't help but think of last year's Mid-Autumn Festival night.

Last year's Mid-Autumn Festival, as soon as dinner was over, my grandfather and I and my family couldn't wait to come to the Han River to admire the moon. "It's out, it's out," I cried out excitedly. The moon peeked out of the clouds with half of her face, shy as a little girl.

Slowly, the round moon rose, like a big jade plate, and the moon was like a fairy in a white gauze skirt, sprinkling the bright moonlight on the earth, illuminating the earth like day. The bright moon was embedded in the sky, and from the moonlight, I seemed to see Sister Chang'e crying alone, holding Yufu in both hands and missing her relatives.

At this time, my grandfather stopped me, "Look there, it's so beautiful!" "It turns out that the shadow of the moon is reflected in the water, forming a moon in the water, and the river reflects the surrounding lights, and then sets off the beautiful full moon, which is really like being in a beautiful picture. Seeing this scene, I couldn't help but compose a poem:

The moon is full in the Mid-Autumn Festival, and the lake reflects the moon very fresh. The long river is like a picture scroll, and our family is a common charm. When everyone heard this, they praised me and said, "Yes, the interest is quite high, and I can still compose poems."

I smirked ......What an unforgettable Mid-Autumn Night!

Although I regretted that I didn't see Sister Chang'e during this Mid-Autumn Festival, I had the same happy time, and the family had a happy holiday, and the most important thing was to have a reunion meal.

The Mid-Autumn Festival is not over yet, why is it the night of the Mid-Autumn Festival?