I want to write an essay on the value of life

In the afternoon, I took a walk in the park. A small bird in a flock caught my eye. It flapped its wings and stumbled after the birds.

It's obviously a newborn bird For some reason, the flock of birds has to migrate so that this weak life has just come into this world, and it has to learn to fly It flies slower and slower, and falls headlong to the ground After a while, the flock of birds is getting farther and farther away from it, and at this time, the bird's wings seem to be injured, and it can't fly, but it struggles, and it tries to stir its wings, and finally a strong desire to survive makes it jump into the air and fly into the blue sky again

In the crevice of the rock, a small flower grows like a trace. What a strong vitality! It has experienced the scorching sun, the biting cold, and the ups and downs. But it is still strong and thriving.

Another time, I saw a neighbor's cat catching a female mouse. The mother rat managed to crawl to the hole and give the baby food to eat. But he was caught by a cat.

It struggled desperately, and the desire to live made it break free"Grim Reaper"of poisonous claws. It struggled to escape, the cat chased after it, and the mother mouse ran to the corner, and suddenly, it made a sharp turn and jumped out of the wall. The cat slammed headfirst into the wall.

The mother mouse dragged her scarred body back into the hole.

Although life is short, as long as we work hard and cross the difficult journey of life We can make our limited life reflect infinite value Now, I finally understand that the meaning of life is to contribute, to give, to cherish Never give up life in a momentary helplessness Therefore, I made up my mind that I must cherish life, never waste it in vain, and make myself live more glorious and powerful

The value of life is more important than anything else.

It is an endless spring of water.

It is a shining pearl.

To tell you the truth, there should be no such counter-examples in this kind of essay. People who are originally inactive should not be known, how can they become famous? All you need to do is briefly talk about the negative side and give a few more positive examples. This is the right way.

Moreover, you should be discussing **, tell you a way, give an example of the related.

The total score pattern is to put forward the central argument within the first 100 words, and then divide it into three (generally this number is better) sub-arguments, one paragraph to two paragraphs (neat), put forward the sub-arguments at the beginning of each paragraph, and give a corresponding example, comment and analyze after the example, and say some reason, and then summarize this paragraph at the end of the paragraph.

After the sub-arguments are listed, here is a summary of the whole article, a high-level summary, and finally another paragraph is icing on the cake.

This is the standard pattern for high-scoring essays. Very effective. Pay attention to the combination between examples and arguments, and combine arguments when analyzing.

Yes... So be it. This is what our teacher taught, and we typed it word by word.

Hurt Zhongyong. It should be possible to change it, and this article is relatively famous, and it is also in elementary school textbooks.

Wang Anshi's works are selected from "Mr. Linchuan's Anthology". This is the story of a child prodigy named "Zhongyong", who can write poetry at the age of five, is born with outstanding talent, and is reduced to an ordinary person because he does not want to learn and be used as a money-making tool by his father. The central idea of the article:

People's knowledge and ability must not rely solely on aptitude, but must pay attention to acquired education and study, and emphasize the importance of acquired education and study for the development of talents.