Exaggerated sentences and repetitive sentences, how to change exaggerated sentences

Exaggerated. The asphalt road was sunburned, and even the bronze plaque in front of the shop seemed to be sunburned.

The class was so quiet that you could hear a pin drop.

The round bed and chairs are made of large steel plates three inches thick, ......

Children fly in marshmallow balloons.

The exchange of words is fast, and the flow is like floating clouds.

This place is not as big as a palm, how can you build a house?

Planes the size of clouds fly rocket-like in the blue sky.

Subtle and incomparable.

She had no appetite at all, and when she didn't eat food, she was full.

Reaching for his bow, the arrow was already whistling and hitting the target.

She was drunk before she could serve her wine.

The plane raced wildly in the blue sky orbit at the speed of a flying saucer.

The five ridges are soaring and the waves are thin, and the Wumeng is majestic and walks the mud pills.

The flying stream went straight down to 3,000 feet, and it was suspected that the Milky Way had fallen for nine days.

30,000 miles east of the river into the sea, 5,000 miles on the sky.

My heart is like a knife.

Yesterday I called my mom ** and I asked her how she was doing at home. Mom said there was nothing going on at home. Mom said that there was a family that came to ask for fertilizer money.

My mom said of their fertilizer: "Two years ago, when you were still in the field for the first few days of the fertilizer, I picked one up and put it in a gun and killed a bunch of rabbits.

The sea is dry and icy, and the gloomy clouds are bleak and condensed.

There was a young lady whose laughter sounded as if she had been immersed in cold water.

He was so hungry that he could eat an elephant.

We jumped three feet tall with joy.

The entire auditorium was so crowded that it couldn't fit a single needle.

The class was so quiet that I could even hear the pin dropping.

His voice was so terrible that it could shatter one's eardrums.

There is still a banquet in a place with a big palm?

There was a rumbling sound, and when I looked up, I saw a silver-gray behemoth appear overhead. The front body is high, and the wings are stretched, just like an ancient eagle vulture hovering above the blue sky.

The sun scorched the earth like a ball of fire.

So the guests left the table without changing color, and they stretched out their arms, and the two trembled, almost wanting to go first.

Dr. Li treated people, but the prescription was not prescribed, and the disease was cured by three points.

I rolled up my cuffs, put the pot to the faucet, flushed it with water, and then opened the "Divine Palm" to give it a move to "turn the tide" first, then to "darken the sky", and finally to "return to the intestines". After a lot of tossing, I was so tired that I was "panting like a cow".

Repetitive sentences. Example] Silence, silence! If you don't explode in silence, you perish in silence. (Lu Xun, "In Memory of Liu Hezhen").

Looking forward to, looking forward to, the east wind is coming, and the footsteps of spring are near. (Zhu Ziqing, "Spring").

Example] ***, our good prime minister, are you in **ah, are you in **? (Ke Yan "***, you are **") This paragraph is intervaled repeatedly.

The same word or sentence does not appear consecutively, and there are other words or sentences separated in the middle, which is called interval repetition.

For example, we are still alive in such a world; I also felt the need to write something. With March 18 still two weeks away, and the forgotten Savior is about to come, I need to write something. ("In Memory of Liu He Zhenjun").

In my back garden, I can see two trees outside the wall, one is a date tree, and the other is also a date tree. ”

It's you again, I'm the car, give me extra points.

How to change exaggerated sentences:

1. Expansion and contraction of exaggeration:

Elevate the characteristics of things, make them higher, stronger, faster, and more, and achieve the effect of overwhelming and earth-shattering. Deliberately make ordinary things smaller, making them lower, weaker, slower, and less, so as to achieve several times the reduction effect.

For example, in "I Can Do It", "I rolled up my cuffs, put the pot to the faucet, filled it with water, and then opened the "Rulai Divine Palm" to give it a move to "reverse the world", then "the sky is dark", and finally a "revolt". After a lot of tossing, I was so tired that I was "panting like a cow". ”

For example: "The classroom is so quiet that you can hear a pin drop on the floor." ”

Second, the time is exaggerated:

Speak of what comes later as coming first, or what comes first as coming later. This seems unreasonable on the surface, but through exaggerated rendering, the content is emphasized.

For example, Dr. Li treats a doctor, and if he does not prescribe medicine, the disease is cured by three points.

Sentence training for primary schools.

Topic: He's having a bad time.

Changed to an exaggerated sentence:

1. He had a very bad life, and he washed his face with tears all day long.

1. He had a very bad life, covered his head and rags, like a beggar.

Examples of preferring to change to exaggerated sentences are as follows:

1, Mom and Dad like my sister too much, I really hold the cherry blossoms in my mouth and am afraid of melting, and I am afraid of falling in my hands.

2. I like you, like the wind, I have walked 80,000 miles, regardless of the return date.

3. Grandpa likes his little grandson very much, and he smiles for him, and he can't wait to pick stars for him!

4. I like to read books so much that I am obsessed.

5. On my birthday, my dad bought me my favorite book, and I was about to go crazy with my love for Ridge Rock.

6. Whenever I think about this question, I feel like I'm walking on the clouds, easily passing through layers of blue sky. My mood is like that of a happy bird, fluttering with the wind, flying high in the sky, with the best wishes.

7. Wow, I can't love it anymore! This question is like a fluffy and waxy marshmallow that melts in my heart and leaves infinite sweetness. I felt like I was jumping from the top of a cliff and it instantly filled my whole body with excitement and ecstasy.

8. For this beggar who has been hungry for a long time, this cake is only the size of a soybean, and it can't fill his defeated belly at all.

9. I like the blue sky, I like the green grass, I also like the smell after the rain, I think being surrounded by nature is the happiest thing.

10. My liking for you is like a surging river. <>

Ba'er, who lives in the Fang family's compound, is about to go crazy with joy today. Imitation sentence: As soon as the sun came out, the ground seemed to be on fire.

Exaggeration is a rhetorical method that deliberately exaggerates or shrinks the image, characteristics, role, and degree of things in order to achieve a certain expressive effect.

Exaggeration can be divided into the "ordinary" category and the "advanced" category. Exaggeration is a rhetorical technique that uses rich imagination to purposefully enlarge or shrink the image characteristics of things on the basis of objective reality to enhance the effect of expression, also known as exaggeration or extravagance. Refers to the use of exaggerated words to describe things in order to enlighten the imagination of the reader or listener and to enhance the power of the words spoken.

Some exaggerations can strengthen the power of the words spoken and make the language more eloquent. As the Western adage goes, "If a long beard is as long as a hail oak is erudition, then a goat is a doctor."

If the false truth, that is, the fallacy, is exaggerated to the extent of absurdity, the fallacy will naturally be defeated, and the truth will be self-evident in the exaggerated language. Exaggeration often has a sense of humor and philosophy, for example, after reading the above aphorism, you will realize some profound truth in a knowing smile.

Example sentence:

1. The class is quiet, and you can hear even the needle dropping.

2. A man covered in black, standing in front of the old bolt, his eyes were like two knives, stabbing the old bolt by half.

3. Thirty years have passed, and there is a flick of the fingers.

4. How do you play football on this slap-sized court?

5. A little lovesick tears last year have not flowed to the cheeks so far.

6. Your waist is as thin as my fingers.

7. Sesame grains are big, don't take it to heart.

8. The room I live in is only the size of a palm.

9. He runs slower than a snail.

10. Even ants can't get into that house.

11. But after being a soldier for three or four years, I always fought a hundred and ten times, and I didn't break a single hair on my body.

12. He is skinny.

13. You can only see a palm-sized piece of heaven and earth.

14. He is narrow-minded and can't even tolerate a grain of sand.

15. The entire auditorium was so crowded that it couldn't even fit a needle.

16. The five mountains are soaring and the waves are soaring, and the Wumeng is majestic and walks the mud pills.

17. My house is as small as a cigarette.

18. Mountain, fast horse whip for saddle. Looking back, three feet from the sky.

To write an exaggerated sentence, you can write something like this:1. Even ants can't get into that house.

Second, he stomped his feet in the city, and the whole city of Beijing trembled.

3. This rose is so fragrant, you can smell it ten miles away.

Fourth, my lungs are blowing up.

Fifth, the class was so quiet that you could hear the pin dropping.

Sixth, the children flew in the marshmallow balloon auspicious banquet.

Seventh, he was so heavy that he fell to the ground, and neither of them could pull it up, so he had to be overweight to hang it. Silver.

Eighth, his face is so thick-skinned that he can't even prick a needle into it.

9. Dr. Li treated people, but the medicine was not prescribed, and the disease was cured by three points.

10. His heart aches like a knife.

Ten. 1. If you want to say thirsty, I'm really a little thirsty, my throat is smoking, my face is on fire, I can drink him a river, I can drink him a river.

Ten. Second, the big insect roared angrily, like a thunderbolt on a sunny day, shaking the hills.