Help me change the sick sentence 10, help me change the sick sentence

1. Whether or not you can accept the opinions of others is an important criterion for measuring whether a person is progressing.

2. In the dead of night, thinking of a series of things that happened today, I couldn't sleep 3. The county seriously dealt with the violation of the pesticide factory's unauthorized price increase 4. The heavy rain kept going, which increased the difficulty of earthquake relief 5. The police put forward their own requirements to participate in the earthquake relief work in the Wenchuan disaster area 6. Because of such achievements, he was praised by teachers and classmates 7. His hometown is Shuangliu County, Sichuan.

8. In the past year, our safety precautions have been laid a considerable foundation, which allows us to gain certain work experience.

9. Whether or not we can do a good job in earthquake relief work depends on whether the style of cadres is in-depth.

1.Accepting other people's opinions is an important reason for a person's progress2In the dead of night, I couldn't sleep when I remembered a series of events that happened today3The county seriously dealt with the incident of the pesticide factory raising prices without authorization.

4.The light rain continued to fall, which made earthquake relief even more difficult.

5.The police officers have expressed their determination to go to the Wenchuan disaster area to participate in the earthquake relief workHis achievements have been praised by teachers and classmates.

7.His hometown is in Shuangliu County, Sichuan.

8.Over the past year, he has laid a considerable foundation for safety and security work, gained some work experience9, and he was one of the survivors.

10. Doing a good job in earthquake relief work depends on the in-depth work style of cadres.

1 handle"Yes"Changed to"Yes"

2 Singular. 3. Improper collocation.

4 "Trickling"with"Non-stop"Repeat.

5"Present determination"Improper collocation changes"Make up your mind"

6"Due to"Remove.

7"people"Remove.

8. Lack of subject. 9 "Death"change"Survived"

10"But'Remove.

When people ask questions, we'll answer them.

Don't say anything, how do you learn, everyone has times when they don't understand.

It's simple, but I'm not going to give it to you! How did you learn Chinese! You can't even see such a simple language problem! With inappropriate (1, 2, etc.) lack of ingredients....Analyze and analyze for yourself!

Sentences 1 6 8 10 are missing subjects.

For the rest, I'm too lazy to say pull.

Original sentence: Class is over, the classroom is very quiet, and the students are listening attentively.

Revised to: class, the classroom is very quiet, and the students are listening attentively.

Analysis: Sick sentences belong to improper collocation. Replace "tranquility" with "quiet", and the revised sentence is: Class is in progress, the classroom is very quiet, and the students are listening attentively.

Improper collocation of the modification of the sick sentence:1. Improper collocation of related words.

2. The definite sentence is not properly matched with the central word (subject and object).

3. Improper matching of moving guests.

4. Improper subject-verb collocation.

5. Improper matching of the host and guest.

6. Improper matching of dynamic supplements.

7. The adverbial is not properly matched with the central word (predicate).

8. One side and two sides are not properly matched.

Modify the sentence: 1Xiaohong was honorably awarded the title of "Outstanding Young Pioneer". The three words "title" at the back are gone.

Changed to the word "be": she uses such a moving tone to depict the world she "sees" in her heart.

The world she "sees" in her heart is depicted by her in such a moving tone.

Changed to the word "put": she uses such a moving tone to depict the world she "sees" in her heart.

She depicts the world she "sees" in her heart in such a moving tone.

These sick sentences are all of the same type, and the order and level of the sentences are not handled well.

1. This is a good book, it can make people think deeply, urge people to wake up, and urge people to forge ahead.

2. Every grassroots worker of our party should consciously read the party's purpose in words, implement it in action, and melt it into the blood.

3. This village has implemented the party's policy of enriching the people very well. Now not only does he not eat state relief, but he also sells 60,000 catties of public grain to the state.

4. For your own path. They're exploring, they're thinking.

1.It's a great book that makes people think, awakens, and pushes people to forge ahead.

2.Every grassroots worker of our party should consciously put the party's purpose into action, and should not read it verbally.

3.This village has well implemented the party's policy of enriching the people. Not only do the villagers not eat the state's relief now, but they have also sold 60,000 catties of grain to the state.

4.For their own way. They're exploring, they're thinking.