How are I doing with my 2011 Spring Festival couplets?

That's very good, but a few suggestions:

1.The second couplet, "The Wanderer's Song" and "Homesickness". In "Silent Night Thoughts" and "Moonlight on the Lotus Pond", two are ancient poems, one is a modern poem, and the other is a song title, and you are worthy of the four ancient book titles.

Secondly, all four names in Shanglian have a faint atmosphere of homesickness and sadness, so you should also have four names around the same theme.

2.In the fourth couplet, "compare with the world" does not echo the theme of "diligence", and "world" is a noun, and "go home" is a verb, not a battle.

Hope mine helps you!

The Wanderer's Yin", "Homesickness", "Silent Night Thoughts", "Moonlight on the Lotus Pond".

-En", "Parents", "Love", "-Brother and Sister".

- Memory", "Uncle", "Reading", "-Sister-in-law".

-Dream", "Wife and Concubine", "Pan", "-Aunt".

- Hope", "Children and Grandchildren", "Broken", "- Other Country".

After chanting and thinking, he will follow the Lord, that is, j q k. Fang buckles the theme, raising the head sheep.

Very good! A little suggestion: Can the five colors be changed to seven colors? It seems inappropriate to have five in front and use five in the back. Shanghai Boguan telescope store.

I don't understand, but it feels good.

Chen Sui soared and shocked Guangyu.

Years of hard work to shake the world.

The dragon and snake dance of urban and rural reform.

Meiliu strives for the spring and the new century.

Out of the mountains and the years of heroism.

Teng Daze to strengthen Shenzhou.

The spring breeze brings warmth and a good year of the snake.

Rui Qi Yingmen magpie language incense.

Spring flowers spit out beautiful snakes.

The sesame grass contains the deer Qixiang.

The spring post is extended and the new is replaced by the old.

Dragons and snakes alternately Rui Chengxiang.

Spring is full of snakes and dancing.

The people's sentiment is excited, and the swallow flies.

The great cause of the new century.

The grand plan is to show the Year of the Little Dragon again.

Ozawa Ryu hides the ambition.

The Mangyuan snake is full of vitality.

Thirty years of the tiger firecrackers crispy.

The first couplet of the Year of the Rabbit is red.

Say goodbye to the old and welcome the new. Chang'e dances in the moon.

The jade rabbit in the world is coming in spring.

Blessed world.

Danfeng Chengxiang Dragon Xianrui Red Peach New Year Apricot Spring Horizontal Batch: Fu Man Man Human Sweat Horse Absolute Dust An Wai Zhen Winning Bid Qing History Jinyang Kaitai Rich People Qing Zheng Exhibition New Chapter Horizontal Batch: Spring is full of people and Shun One Gate has a hundred blessings The word peace is worth a thousand gold Horizontal batch:

Vientiane update: Yellow warbler singing green willow purple swallow cut spring breeze horizontal batch: warbler song swallow dance.

Huitong neighborhood, the door welcomes spring, summer, autumn and winter, treats the sages sincerely, and accepts the southeast and northwest financial horizontal batches: auspicious stars shine on green bamboos and don't have three points of scenery Red plum is reporting Wanjia spring Horizontal batches: Spring returns to the earth every year, and the scenery is the source of wide years and years of peace and longevity Horizontal batches:

The auspicious star shines on the prosperous era of Ding Niange; Mao Rabbit Yao China.

Jade Rabbit Toad Palace laughs; Red plum Wuling incense.

The jade rabbit welcomes the spring solstice; The yellow warbler announces the good news.

The jade rabbit welcomes spring; Red plum blessings come.

Mao Men is happy; The Year of the Rabbit heralds the New Year.

Maomen is purple; The Year of the Rabbit heralds the New Year.

1.The pear blossom courtyard dissolves the moon, and the catkins pond has a faint breeze. 2.

Happiness and auspiciousness, flowers bloom and wealth. 3.The sound of firecrackers bids farewell to the old year, and red plums welcome the new year.

4.The east wind blows out the green of thousands of mountains, and the spring rain sprinkles Vientiane new. 5.

The business is prosperous and the wealth is prosperous to the three rivers. 6.The mountains and rivers are beautiful, the scenery is good, and there are many happy events in the life expectancy.

7.And the wind blows the green willows, when the rain moistens the spring seedlings. 8.

In winter, the mountains and rivers are beautiful, and the birds are singing and the flowers are fragrant in spring. 9.Lotus flowers on all sides and willows on three sides, a city with mountains and half a city lake.

10.A harmonious family is a blessing, and the four seasons are safe and spring. 11.

Outside the building, the spring doves call for rain, and the warm butterflies in front of the court turn the wind. 12.People are diligent and prosperous, and the land is fertile and the grains are abundant.

13.The spring of the year is the first, and the six pigs are the first. 14.

People open the road to prosperity, and pigs arch the door to wealth. 15.Righteous dogs guard the door, and good pigs report the year.