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"Camel Xiangzi".The appreciation of the good sentences in the first chapter is as follows:
1, Xiangzi is a countryman, and his speech is not as dexterous as that of people in the city; If he is a genius who is articulate, he is naturally reluctant to speak much, so he does not want to imitate the poor tongues of the people in the city. He knows his business and doesn't like to discuss it with others.
Appreciation: Wrote Xiangzi's not poor mouth, honest and kind.
2. rented a broken car, and he practiced his legs first. Didn't pull any money on the first day. The next day's business was good, but after lying down for two days, his feet and neck were swollen like two gourds.
Like, I can't lift it anymore. He endured, no matter how painful it was.
Appreciation: It writes about the hardships of pulling a car, and also highlights Xiangzi's hardships and perseverance.
3. The running method is the evidence of the driver's ability and qualifications. The feet are like a pair of fans.
Fan on the ground, no doubt Liang Ran is a novice who has just come up from the countryside.
Appreciation: Write out the characteristics of the novice running method.
4. If you crash into the car, you will naturally lose money; This made him even more anxious, and added fuel to the fire; For fear of causing even greater trouble, he sometimes slept all day. When he opened his eyes, the day's work had passed in vain, and he regretted it and hated himself.
Appreciation: Shoko's strength is written.
5. Xiangzi's hands trembled even more, picked up the insurance policy, pulled up the car, and almost cried. Pull to a secluded place, take a closer look at your car, and try to take a picture of your face on the paint panel!
Appreciation: Write about the excitement and excitement of Shoko after buying the car.
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"Camel Xiangzi".The appreciation of good sentences in the first chapter is as follows:
1. These days, his blood seems to flow all over his limbs; At this moment, it seems to be all in the heart; Fever in the heart.
but the limbs were cold; Desire made him tremble!
Appreciation: Write about the excitement and excitement of Xiangzi after calculating the escape route in his heart.
2. Hope makes him happy, fear makes him frightened, he wants to sleep, but he can't, and his limbs seem to be scattered on some hay.
Appreciation: Wrote about Xiangzi's psychology of being both happy and frightened at that time.
3. There was no sound, only the stars in the sky accompanied by their heartbeat.
Appreciation: Highlights the silence of the night and Shoko's nervousness and excitement!
4. He crouched beside the camel, like a soldier hiding behind a sand bag.
Appreciation: The rhetorical device of metaphor is used to highlight Shoko's caution and prudence.
5. Because of happiness, courage will also be great; Since buying the car, Shoko has been running faster.
Appreciation: Write about Shoko's happiness after having a car, and he is full of beautiful visions for the future.
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Camel grips the spine of ShokoThe passages are as follows:
1. When I pulled it to the location, Xiangzi's clothes and pants were all sweaty, as if they had just been fished out of the basin. He felt tired, but very happy, proud, a kind of fatigue, like riding a famous horse for dozens of miles.
Appreciation: Using the rhetorical technique of metaphor, it is vividly written that although Xiangzi pulls the cart hard, he is happy, proud, and satisfied.
2, he doesn't listen to the rumors outside much, what Xiyuan.
Here are the soldiers again, what Changxin shop.
Fought again, what Xizhimen.
Outside the case, what Qihua Gate has been closed for a long time, he doesn't pay much attention.
Appreciation: Wrote about Xiangzi's indifference to current affairs, paving the way for his car being robbed by the soldiers.
3. Such a big person, pulling such a beautiful car, his own car, the bow is so soft that it trembles, and even the handlebar moves slightly.
Appreciation: Wrote about the excitement of Xiangzi pulling the car, full of Chang infiltrating.
4. There is nothing cumbersome on Xiangzi's body, except for a gray single military uniform and a pair of blue cloth military pants, which are all soaked in sweat - it has been like this since it was not on him.
Appreciation: Highlights the frugality of Xiangzi's usual life.
5. At night, as soon as he hits the ground, it is as if he is dead, and it is not necessarily a bad thing to never open his eyes again.
Appreciation: It writes about Xiangzi's fatigue of being forced to do coolies by the soldiers, and also highlights the sadness and despair in Xiangxun's heart at this time.
I only give five points, too lazy to type!
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