Ask for advice! Modify the couplet! Ask the master to modify a couplet!

Actually, you've written pretty well.

Places to change:

1.Bluestone is not quite right to Kunpeng.

It can be: Bluestone vs. Eagle.

2.Flapping wings is not as atmospheric as spreading wings.

3.The beginning of the sky is said: Soar into the sky and be realistic.

The above are all personal feelings, and the shortcomings are forgiven.

The cantilever piercing strands, the wonderful hand rejuvenation to be a saint.

Shanglian: Lying on the salary to taste the gall, the bluestone sharpening blade became famous.

Downlink: Riding the wind and waves, Danshu left a name to show his talents.

Shanglian: Lying on the salary to taste the gall, the bluestone sharpening blade became famous.

Downlink: The bitterness is sweet, and the eagle spreads its wings in the sky.

Uplink: Lying on the salary and tasting gall, bluestone sharpening blade to become famous, downlink: cold window hard reading, children out of the mountain into pillars.

Business is like spring grass.

Wealth is like flowing water.

Lying on the salary to taste the gall, the bluestone sharpening blade becomes a famous weapon;

Changing bones, silkworm chrysalis breaks the shell for a beautiful butterfly.

Shanglian: Lying on the salary to taste the gall, the bluestone sharpening blade became famous.

Downlink: soaring upward, Dapeng spreads its wings and is proud of the clouds.

Shanglian: Lying on the salary to taste the gall, the bluestone sharpening blade became famous.

Downlink: Xi Wu Shangwen, the title of the gold list is a pillar.

Shanglian: The bluestone sharpening blade finally became famous.

Downlink: White ash turns ashes into infatuation.

Shanglian: Lying on the salary to taste the gall, the bluestone sharpening blade became famous.

Downlink: unforgettable, ash into ashes infatuation.

The four seasons of spring are often in the purple and thousands of reds bloom forever Horizontal batch: Welcome the new year, spring is full of flowers in the world, and the four seasons of Fulin Courtyard are always safe Horizontal batch: Celebrate the Spring Festival for a hundred years, and the contemporary is good Thousands of years and rivers and mountains are new in the present Horizontal batch:

Vientiane renewal, happy to live in the treasure land, thousands of years of prosperity, blessing according to the family, everything is prosperous, horizontal criticism: welcome the new year, smooth sailing, good year, all the best, backgammon horizontal criticism: auspicious stars shine on the hundred years of heaven and earth, return to vitality, unify the mountains and rivers, and the peace horizontal criticism:

Guotai Min'an, spring rain, silky silk, red plums, embroidered thousands of mountains, horizontal batch: full of spring.

In calligraphy and painting, the dragon does not groan, the tiger does not roar, and the little scholar is ridiculous and ridiculous.

No matter the car on the chessboard, the horse has no borders, shouting generals, beware of beware.

I don't know if it's a line from the movie shame.

I'm sorry, I just saw it when I went out in the afternoon. The couplet can be modified like this:

One of them: Shanglian: Yunxi welcomes guests, and guests praise Yurui.

Downlink: Haixia waits for high friends, friends wish Yuemi.

Horizontal batch: happy to get a daughter.

If the word "cross" is changed to the word waiting, there will be no ambiguity.

Second: Shanglian: Fuze Yunxi celebrates the full moon.

Downlink: Yunji Haixia He Golden Branch.

Horizontal batch: the joy of the full moon.

The word "Lower Birthday" was changed to luck, and the long day was changed to He Jinzhi. Although there is something wrong, it is also good to use it on the occasion of the full moon of the daughter.

The above two couplets are more round and plain if they are modified, which is also more appropriate.

1. Colorful clouds in the sky.

2 Honesty is a person, faith is a person, and people are difficult to compare.

3. Learn from celebrities, worship famous teachers, and wish you to become famous.

The moon is bright on the sea, and the clouds are clear in the mountains.

Live to be old, learn to be old, and not accept old age;

Say it clearly, do it clearly, and be obviously smart!

Read good books, write good words, persuade you to do good deeds, seek good reputation, be a clean official, and drink tea with me.

See the morning sun among the clouds.

Well said, good said, good is not good.

Say good things, do good deeds, and teach you to be good people.

1. The moon rises in the sea, and the world is heavy on evening love - true love in the world.

2. Live to be old, learn to be old, and not accept old age; Born in Si, raised in Si, Les Aisi - good times.

3. Read good books, write good words, and persuade you to do good deeds; Make friends, make friends, clean people - good words for life.

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Refreshing air can beat the heat.

Relief can solve worries.

The riverside is short and long bamboo.

There were thick and faint clouds in the sky.

4Look at the east of the great river, the sky is high and the clouds are light.

Mu Chunguang is overflowing, and the heart is relaxed.

5. High-rise buildings rise from the ground.

The long snake dragon soars.

6. Autumn waves are clear and clairvoyant.

Spring Mountain is ten thousand years old.

7. The four seas sail by the helmsman.

Everything depends on the sun.

8. Luan danced in the sound of happy cannons.

The phoenix blind date in the song banquet.

If you don't have to do a couplet, you can write it out, but when a couplet doesn't work, the relationship is messed up, and both sentences are down.

To become a couplet slightly modified: Na Baichuan run the world Bo Huan Yu Ze Wanmin each sentence must have an independent and complete meaning, there must be a part of speech corresponding to the flat correspondence, but also the last word of the upper couplet is the last word of the lower couplet.

However, the modified numerals do not yet correspond to hundreds and ten thousand should be relative in the same case.

After modifying the part of speech and pingping:

Nabaichuan Ze the world.

Bo Kyushu runs the people.

The world and the people still don't match, but if you don't change your meaning, it can only be like this) Couplets are a unique art of Chinese literature, which seems simple, but requires rigor, and cannot say that a simple pair of couplets can be called couplets.

I saw that the friend above could change it.

Final Modification: Bohuanyu Baichuan Nahai.

Run the world and all the people are blessed.

Bo Huanyu Baichuan Kona.

Run the world, all the people can ze.

Bo Huanyu embraces all rivers and moistens the world and all the people.

The sea is facing the sea, facing the chao, facing the chao and falling;

The clouds are long, long, long, long,

What cares, apricot blossoms in February and laurel in August;

Who urged me, three more lights and five more chickens.

How good it is to gather people who read books in the world;

It is a pleasure to collect the world's talents to educate.

The rationale is profound, look at the confluence of the two waters in front of the steps, and find the source to understand the clear;

There is no end to learning, and I want to show off my lone peak after Yuhou, and I don't want to work hard to climb to the top.

The Han Chao School Baichuan Society;

Eight generations of public articles declined.

Mr. Willow in front of the door;

The tomb of the chief on the ridge is kept.

Poets through the ages, Penglai articles build an bone;

Arrogant, Qinglian monk is an immortal.

The maple leaves weep in autumn, and the fir touches the end of the world with a thousand tears;

Thousands of feet of water in Xunyang, the sentence stays on the river.

A confidant of life and death;

Two women survived.

The worries of the world are worried, and the joys of the world are happy.