There were 50 cases of sentence modification, and 10 typical sentence modifications

15.I accept.

Everyone's criticism came, and self-error was corrected.

16.In autumn, chrysanthemums bloom in Bai Park. du

17.During the years of the War of Liberation, Grandpa Wang participated in the revolutionary work.

18.It's the depths of winter, but we don't feel cold at all.

19.This year, the grain harvest in my hometown is bumper again. Or this year's hometown corn and wheat harvest 20With the help of my teachers, I gradually developed good study habits. or Through the help of my teachers, I gradually developed good study habits.

21.Lan Lan, the neighbor's child, is very sensible although she is young.

22.We discussed and adopted the squadron activity plan.

23.Two of our Year 6 football teams are playing a friendly match.

24.Our whole class went to the nursing home to comfort the elderly.

25.Spring is coming, and the seeds in the fields are quietly taking root, germinating, and growing leaves.

26.We must inherit and carry forward the glorious tradition of arduous struggle. Or we should carry forward the glorious tradition of arduous struggle. Or we must inherit and carry forward the glorious tradition of arduous struggle.

15.Replace the words "if" with the words "because, so".

16.Spring is changed to autumn.

17.Liberation goes.

Version off. 18.Put the buts ahead of our powers.

19.Corn and wheat removed.

20.By removing.

21.The related word is changed to although but.

22.Pass and remove.

23.Sixth grade and two swapping places.

24.and class committee members removed.

25.Remove the rooting leaves from the long leaves.

26.Between us and to add there is.

1. Improper subject-verb collocation:

For example, his revolutionary spirit always comes to mind. （"Spirit"with"Hunger emerges"It cannot constitute a subject-verb relationship between socks and limbs, and it can be used"Spirit"Instead"image"）

2. Improper collocation of moving guests:

Example: Commemorating the arrival of the Three Leading Days. （"Memorial"It can only be"Thirty-eight verses"and cannot be"Coming"）

3. Improper collocation of modifiers and central words:

For example, we carefully studied the suggestions of the employees and humbly solicited the opinions of the experts. （"Serious"It cannot be retouched"Research", which can be changed to"Seriously"、"Be cautious"etc.).

4. Improper matching of the host and guest:

For example, we firmly believe that one day, China's agriculture and agriculture will become a developed country. (It should be.)"countries"Instead"behavior).

5. Improper collocation of related words:

Example: Since you're here, it's time for me to go. （"Since"with"Also"It cannot be used together, it should be"Also"Instead"Just"）

1) Improper word order.

Improper word order is often envied in the following cases:

1. The position of the definite and the central language is reversed

For example, China's cotton production has been unable to be self-sufficient for a long time. （"Production of cotton"It should be"production of cotton"）

2. Put the real language in the position of the adverbial:

For example, the vast number of young people have shown great enthusiasm for reform. (Will.)"Incomparable"to"Passionate"ex).

3. Put the adverbial in the position of the definite:

For example, the full role of the vast number of young people should be brought into play. (Will.)"Adequately"Tune to"Play"and delete one"of"）。

4. Improper word order of multi-layer definite sentences:

Example: Exhibits artifacts that were excavated thousands of years ago. (It should be.)"Thousands of years ago"Tune to"Cultural relics"Before and after"of"）

5. Improper word order of multi-layer adverbials.

For example, we are no longer a country that is arbitrarily bullied by foreign powers. (It should be.)"Optional"Tune to"Hazing"before).

6. Improper placement of related words:

For example, if he can't be realistic, his career will suffer. （"him"should be moved to"If"behind).

7. The subject and the object are reversed:

For example, Ostrovsky's "How Steel is Made" is no stranger to Chinese youth. (It should be changed to: Chinese youth to Ostrovsky.) ）

8. Improper placement of clauses:

For example, they are exploring, they are judging, they are seeking, they are thinking. (It should be changed to: They are thinking, they are judging, they are exploring, they are searching.) ）

There is a mistake in this sentence, but the fault is not in the issue of "weaving" and "weaving". If you think about it, a "flower" is a flower, and it is not like a twig that can be used to weave, and the flower itself cannot be used to weave a basket.

Secondly, the meaning of "weaving" is broader than "weaving", and the meaning of weaving items with slender strips interweaving warp and weft is used, such as: weaving bamboo baskets with bamboo strips; There are also meanings that are formulated based on research and analysis, such as: compiling lesson plans; There is also the setting of the organization and its personnel quota, such as:

Establishment of public institutions. But "weaving" can only be made of slender strips, and that is what it means.

To sum up, if you change "flower" to "flower branch", you can do it: make a flower basket with Hua's auspicious branches, this is right.

That's an interesting question.

I feel that knitting is more inclined to Qixian to weave soft thin strips and weave them together to make things, such as potato bags, knitted sweaters, etc. Weaving also refers to the connection of fragmented knowledge or linguistic events. For example, weaving folklore into beautiful fairy tales.

Weaving is more focused on making utensils from hard, rough things, such as baskets made of wicker. Of course, there are other meanings, but I won't talk about it because it has little to do with this topic (typing on a mobile phone, it's not easy).

Look at this question, it is a basket, and it is said that it should be made up. It should be a very aesthetic process to make baskets with flowers, so it is inevitable that the weaving will appear cold and hard, and it cannot give people the softness and delicacy that flowers should have. So judging by this sentence, it is better to use weaving.

Hehe, I'm also a student, and I'm in my third year of high school. This is just my personal opinion, I don't know if it makes sense. For your reference, you can also give my opinion to your teacher and see what he thinks.

Weaving means making, and weaving is sewing.

"system" - the meaning of making, manufacturing. Refers to the transformation of one object into another.

"Weaving" - generally used to refer to the processing of silk, thread and other textiles.

Therefore, the sentence you offer should be smiling, yes.

"Quality" requires a fine processing process to change the physical properties; "Weaving" is to weave rattan and the like without changing the coarse properties of physical dry matter. I guess it can be changed.

6 Successively change to continuous.

7 Basically all of them go to one of them.

8 more than two years ago just happened to one of them.

9 Remove the approximately.

10 It must be cultivated in the middle of the relationship.

11 And the clouds were reflected in the waters of the river.

12 Fragrant Hills in autumn.

13 Continue the hardships and carry forward in the middle.

14 Flies and spiders were covered with a large drop of pine resin.

15 Crisp for pleasant.

16 Understand and apply.

17 I remembered it and changed it to a sound.

18 Autumn in Jiuzhaigou.

19 And the milk is removed.

20 Xiaohong was rated as a top three student for two consecutive years.

1. Under the teacher's education, he has a correct attitude towards learning. (Generally speaking, correct attitude and clarify the purpose and direction).

2. I love to read extracurricular books such as "Little Bee", "Little Stream", and "Primary School Student Study Newspaper". (In addition to extracurricular books, there are also newspapers and periodicals).

3. After the reform and opening up, people are getting richer and richer. ("Rich and strong" generally describes the country) 4. I think the scenery in spring is very beautiful.

5. The teacher requires the students to clarify the purpose of learning and correct their learning attitude.

6. Xiao Ming's sister was rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years.

7. He basically completed all his language homework.

8. My mind comes to mind what happened more than two years ago.

9. I'm sure it's going to snow tomorrow.

10. Everyone must develop a good habit of paying attention to hygiene.

11. The clouds are reflected in the river, which makes them appear whiter.

12. Xiangshan in autumn is a desirable place.

13. We must continue to maintain the glorious tradition of arduous struggle.

14. A large drop of pine resin encapsulates flies and spiders.

15. The audience saw her beautiful dancing again.

16. We must understand and use the idiom of "perseverance".

17. After the principal's speech, the students burst into fierce applause.

18. Autumn in Jiuzhaigou is the most beautiful season of the year.

19. Xiao Ming ate a piece of bread and drank a glass of milk.

20. Xiaohong was rated as a good student for two consecutive years.

There is a mistake in every sentence 20 titles removed.

The river is reflected in the clouds, and it should be the clouds that are reflected in the river.