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Recently, I studied the ninth lesson "From the Hundred Herb Garden to the Three Flavor Study", and when I focused on the description of the scenery in the second paragraph, I summarized the methods of appreciating and analyzing the description of the scenery, mainly from the following aspects:
1. Rhetorical devices.
Common rhetoric: metaphor, personification, comparison, rhetorical question, question, repetition, association, and imagination.
2. Sensory depiction.
Mainly: sight, hearing, smell, taste, touch, and synaesthesia.
3. Writing order.
1. Spatial order: orientation, moving and changing scenery.
2. Chronological order: pay attention to the connectives.
3. Interweaving time and space.
Fourth, descriptive techniques.
1. Combination of dynamic and static (dynamic lining static).
2. Point-to-surface combination (whole and part).
3. Combination of front and side (side accent).
4. Combination of virtual and real (imagination or association).
5. Verb appreciation (refining words).
6. Special sentence structure (needless to say......Needless to say, ......, ...... aloneThere is ......Seventh, the scene blends.
1. All scenery is love language (expressing love for nature and ......2. Write grief with music (contrast).
3. Borrowing the scenery to be lyrical and allegorical.
4. Borrowing the past to satirize the present, hanging the past and hurting the present (nostalgic poems are the majority).
The key is that students can self-digest, truly understand and use these techniques, which is also beneficial to reading comprehension and their own writing!
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Endowed with riverside willows.
Fish Mystery (Tang).
The emerald color is even the barren shore, and the smoke enters the distant building.
The shadow shop is buried in the water, and the flowers fall on the fisherman's head.
The root is an old Tibetan fish cave, and the branches are low passenger boats.
Xiao Xiao's stormy night, frightening dreams add to sorrow.
The emerald color of the willows stretches on the desolate shore, and through the silk of the willows like smoke, you can see the tall buildings of the distant sellers. The reflection of the willow trees on the shore spreads on the water, swaying with the waves, and the fluttering catkins fall on the heads of the anglers. The roots of the willow tree are hidden deep in the water, becoming a habitat for fish, and the low-hanging willow branches tie up the traveler's boat.
The stormy night added a little sorrow to waking up from a dream.
It writes about the author's sorrow and the beauty of the scenery.
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Raw A: Shape: Hanging Spring Waterfall, flying in the meantime.
Raw B: Color: Plain turbulent green pool.
Sheng C: Sound: The high ape roars, the genus is poignant, and the hollow valley sounds.
Teacher's summary: The above three Tongkuan Kaixue are all very accurate. The text describes the scene of spring and winter, painted with "plain" and "green", and painted with "'absolute", "hanging" and "gargle".
These are all in line with the "Qingrong Junmao". When writing autumn scenes, the emphasis is on painting sounds, "long howling and cautious", "poignant", and "mourning", which renders the atmosphere of solemnity. His depiction techniques change from time to time, and from scene to scene, appearing varied, and his costume is swaying.
The author's emotions are contained in it, a "fun" word, which accurately expresses the pleasure at this time, and the word "poignant" at the end is not only a description of the ape's voice, but also a feeling triggered by the autumn scene.
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