-
The advantage of using the technique of before and after in many places is that --- can play a role in connecting the previous and the next. It makes it easy to see the main point of the whole text. Or the point of this sentence. Written in this way, the whole text is clearly layered and well-structured.
-
The structure is rigorous, the whole text is hierarchical, and the full text is summarized The article is close to the topic The expression emphasizes and highlights Susan's love for "me" Hehe, I just finished the teacher After talking about this text, give more points Please use.
-
The text uses the technique of before and after in many places. For example, the fourteenth natural paragraph "Susan? Can you tell me how to spell the word 'repair'" corresponds to the seventh natural paragraph "how to spell the word 'repair'"; The fifteenth natural paragraph" She was silent for a moment and said
I hope your fingers are already healed'" with the fifth natural segment "I said to the elf: 'I'm home alone and my finger has been smashed by a hammer ......'Take care of; The last stanza, "Tommy, I'm going to sing in another world," echoes the tenth stanza, "You know, this cute little bird, it's going to sing in another world." Written in this way, the whole text is clearly layered and well-structured.
-
Finishing touch. The advantage of this kind of sentence is that it makes the structure of the article rigorous.
It is the expression of the meaning more powerful, the feeling more intense.
-
The structure is rigorous and hierarchical.
-
The whole text is closely linked, hierarchical, and rigorously structured.
-
The structure is rigorous, the full text is hierarchical, and the full text is summarized The article is closely related to the topic.
-
The echo of the article is not only the need for the plot of the article, but also the necessary means for the writer to conceive the article. The echo of the article can be divided into three types: one is the beginning and end of the echo, which is taken care of at the beginning and end of the article, so that the structure of the article is more rigorous, and it often plays a role in highlighting the center; The first is to take care of each other, that is, in the middle of the article, the two contents take care of each other, the front asks the back, the front plot does not end, and the back is complete. Such a response can make the structure of the article more rigorous; The third is to echo the topic, that is, the content of the article echoes the topic and plays the role of a point.
This division is just for everyone to grasp the art of echoing, in fact, although the name is different, its essence is the same.
In order to better illustrate the role of echo, the teacher takes "Listening with the Heart" as an example and briefly talks about the use of echo art in this article, so that you can apply it well in future compositions.
Appropriation of hope.
-
The two sentences with the same meaning are before and after.
There should be several kinds of before and after photos.
1. The beginning and the end 2. In the middle of the article, different paragraphs 3. It can be understood as the previous paragraph of the article as an ambush clue for the later article, or it can be understood as a hint from the above to the following, and the following echo of the above. It has the advantage of being subtle and subtle, making the article tightly structured and compact, so that the reader will not have a sense of abrupt suspicion when reading the following content.
Summary of benefits: Make the content of the article complete and rigorously structured, enhance the authenticity and appeal of the article, and better express the center of the article. However, for the advantages of expressing specific content, it is not appropriate to simply transcribe the above benefits, but should be combined with specific content, such as the benefits of "Memories of Sixteen Years Ago", which can be said like this - this kind of writing makes the article structured rigorously, and enhances the appeal, and better expresses the author's deep nostalgia for his father and the pain of losing his father.
-
You know, this cute little bird, it's going to sing in another world.
I found that in this wonderful ** machine, there lives an omniscient elf.
I think the cute little bird did go to another world, a place more beautiful than our world, and sang happily.
When I was a child, what fascinated me the most at home was the old ** machine.
The elf was indeed inside, and she was a woman with a gentle voice.
It's best to think for yourself, but I hope it helps, thank you.
-
Deep down in your heart, don't you have a little idea of your own?
-
1.I found someone listening to me and couldn't help but cry out loud.
Finding someone who listens to "me" is actually finding hope, hoping very much to get help, and pinning hope on the little elf called "Information Office". Hearing Susan's gentle voice, "my" lonely heart was soothed at once, and finally cried out loud. This is not only the cry of pain brought about by pain, but also the cry of happiness that finds hope in loneliness.
2.The elf always patiently addressed my questions and explained them to me over and over again.
Susan is like a mother who "patiently took my questions and explained them to me over and over again." In the heart-to-heart exchanges, the hearts of the two people walked together and formed a mother-son friendship. This sentence vividly writes about Susan's love, and although the language is simple, it is very touching to read.
3.You know, this cute little bird, it's going to sing in another world.
The beloved canary died suddenly, and "I" was not only in pain, but at the same time full of fear of death. Susan adopted a better one. Yes, what a wonderful thing it is for the bird to go to another world to sing!
Hearing these words, the shadow that hung over the child's heart immediately dissipated, and happiness returned to the child's side. Susan is kind and optimistic. )
4.But I really wanted to get to know Susan, to know this person I had never met, but who was like my second mother.
"Meeting" means to meet, and using "like my second mother" to describe Susan, you can see "my" love for Susan. Susan is not "my" mother, we have never met, it is the ** thread that binds the two people together: Susan is like a mother, patiently listening to "me", helping when in trouble, and comforting when in pain. )
-
In the journey of life, the sincerity will always be hurt, and eventually it will transform into a hurtful hedgehog, and the innocent heart will cry.
-
Your question is too complicated. No one on earth can understand ...
Why don't you ask your seniors.