My day in charge of the sixth grade essay is about 500 words

When correcting essays, it is often found that although many primary school students have clearly expressed the things they want to write, they often list the skeletons, but lack flesh and bones, making the content empty, not vivid and concrete, and not impressive. So, how do you make your essay concrete?

For example, a fourth-grade student wrote about the school's large flower bed when he wrote about it: "The flowers in the school's big flower bed are blooming, colorful, different shapes, fragrant, so beautiful!" Obviously, the schoolboy only grasped the main trunk, but ignored the branches and leaves, forming an empty description.

The flower beds in his pen are nothing more than the following meanings: the flowers are blooming, the color is beautiful, the fragrance is beautiful. So how do you make this passage vivid and concrete?

I think that as long as he asks questions, questions, in the order in which he describes, he can achieve his goal.

We can ask the following questions: How are the flowers blooming? What colors do they have? What does it all look like? How to express floral scents? What is the role of a flower bed?

According to the questions asked, let the students think carefully, observe carefully, imagine, and write the following paragraph: "The flowers in the big flower bed of the school are in full bloom and colorful. The red ones are like the glow, the white ones are like the snow, the yellow ones are like brocade, and the blue ones are like the ...... of the seaSee!

Flowers come in different shapes, some like a fire, some like a shining red star, some like a small trumpet, some like a golden bell, and some like a cockscomb ......A gust of wind blows, and the fragrance of flowers is fragrant, attracting bees humming a little song and fluttering butterflies. Yes! The big parterre beautifies the environment and freshens the air, I love the big parterre.

Students, if you write like this, won't the composition be vivid and concrete? This will make people feel like they are there, like seeing the scene, and smelling their fragrance. In a nutshell, the method of asking questions, asking questions, adding branches and leaves has been effective.

Seeing but everybody's way of relaxation Aslan.

On Sunday, Mom and Dad told me they were going to Nanxun for a very important meeting. I probably won't be back until a little later, so I was told to stay home alone and not go out. He also said that he was going to clean up today, and asked me to wash the windows and doors.

Mom and Dad drove away. I took a storybook and read it. Suddenly it occurred to me that I had to clean up.

So, I found all the tools I needed for the cleaning and started cleaning. I had to clean the windows first, first wet the towel, then wipe it, I wiped it once, I wiped it a second time, and finally I wiped it with a dry towel. After wiping it I said to myself

I'm so tired! "After that, I went to look at my watch, it was already past 11 o'clock, it was time to eat, but I couldn't burn it. At this time, the neighbor came and said; "Your mother called me and told you to eat at our place.

So, I went to dinner with my neighbors, and I came to the table and looked, wow, what a sumptuous dish, braised fish, celery, and meat. I immediately filled a bowl of rice and ate it with relish. After eating, I continued to clean up.

It was time to wash the door, but it was too difficult to wash, so I took a leather tube and connected it to the faucet as my parents used to wash the door. Rush to the door. But the tube was so heavy, it was about seven.

Eight meters long, five or six pounds, and its mouth and faucet are particularly difficult to connect, I took a lot of effort to connect it. Then, I turned on the tap, picked up the leather hose and rushed at the very dirty door, and the ash on the door flowed down the tumbling water, and it didn't take long for the door to start lighting up. I washed everything on the door.

After washing the door, I put the leather tube away. At this time, I felt very tired, so I lay down on the chair to rest, about an hour of sleep, I woke up, just someone came to buy a pen, they picked, asked**, and then saw a sheep's pen, so I sold it to them according to my parents' mark. Soon after, my parents came back, and I gave them the money from the sale of pens and told them about the cleaning, and they praised me for being a good boy.

It's so tiring to be a family member for a day! It's not easy for mom and dad! Hehe.

I usually see my grandmother doing very hard housework, so I decided to let me be the head of the house today.

In the morning, I got up at 6 o'clock, got dressed and went to hot food. After the rice was hot, I went to scramble a scrambled egg with mint. First, I crack two eggs into a bowl and mix well, then add mint and cook together.

After frying, put it in a bowl for my mother to taste, and my mother said, "It's so fragrant." At noon, I helped my mother dry her clothes, sweep the floor, and tidy up her room. In the afternoon, I helped my grandmother pick the pods, holding the pods in one hand and gently picking the strings of the pods with the other, and it was done in a short time.

After dinner in the evening, I took the initiative to clean up the table.

It's really tiring to be at home for a day, and I have to help my grandmother and mother more in the future, and share the housework.