The master helps to revise the composition basically self created .

The fastest and slowest in the world, the longest and shortest, the most mundane and the most precious, the most neglected but the most regrettable is the water that is gone. — Inscription.

The first paragraph: ...

Sigh that life has only been in a hurry for decades, and when did I find out when time passed and refused to look back? . . When did you find out ...

As a child, I didn't really understand the fear of time. The time that I can't see, can't grasp, but really has flowed away, it seems to me at that time, it is simply to tell us what time it is. Now, I'm really chilling at it.

It leads not only to birth, old age, sickness and death, but also to determine a person's fate. Tao Yuanming said: If you don't come back in the middle of the year, it will be difficult to get back in the morning.

Be encouraged in time, and the years will not treat others. Whether you can grasp the time and be the master of the time often determines the road to success in your life.

Change the order of the paragraphs, think of a wonderful beginning, change the first paragraph of the original text to the end, and then write back...

The title of your writing is lamenting that time has gone and there is no turning back, but you wrote in the sixth paragraph as if you cherish time.

= The penultimate and third are indeed a bit awkward.

Time will quietly pass away before you know it.

It's better that way.

It's okay, it's okay, it's okay not to modify it.

It is recommended that you go to the New Oriental correction website to submit it, where there are professional teachers to help you make corrections.

I've never been happier than I.

I am surrounded by happiness all day long, and the road of life is naturally infinitely happy, but the happiness I experienced was the strongest one like that time.

On the morning of the first day of the Lunar New Year, the sky was not bright, and the sound of firecrackers outside started one after another, and I couldn't wait to play a symphony. Although I was lazy, I made an exception today and got up early in the morning and happily went to the street to receive the New Year's baptism.

The streets of the New Year are full of joy and activity, with all kinds of people selling snacks and fireworks ---. I don't know if it's too joyful, but I actually picked up a 100-yuan bill. Now I was so bad that I hurried to the supermarket.

On the way, a woman was holding a child, her clothes were in tatters, and she was anxiously looking for something, could it be that she was looking for the 20 yuan?

I always felt empty in my heart, as if something was missing, and the hundred-dollar bill in my hand didn't make me happy. "Do you want to pay it back, who doesn't need money for this Chinese New Year, and it's not easy for people to make money. No, maybe it's not her money.

Forget it, let's check with her first. "After a fierce mental struggle, I finally decided to return the money to its owner. So he ran to the place where he had been.

The anxious figure of the woman was still there, searching the ground and asking passers-by. "Auntie, do you see if you lost this one? "Where did you pick it up?"

It's on the bridge over there. I pointed to the bridge. "yes, I didn't think of it, I just fell there.

I just looked for it, you see--- hey, how do you say I can thank you? "No, that's what I'm supposed to do. After saying this, I felt very full and indescribably happy.

By the way, what was lacking in the emptiness at that time was this happiness! It dawned on me.

If you just ask someone to revise your sentence, then your original intention is wrong, and your sentence is impeccable to most people. But if it's the future that makes people appreciate your talent, you did! Your freedom will be fulfilled.