How to write for a walk, what kind of writing for a walk

It is written in a way that sees the big from the small.

"Walking" uses the writing technique of seeing the big from the small, and shows the traditional virtues of the Chinese nation of respecting the old and loving the young through the life fragment of a family of four grandchildren walking together.

Through an incident of a walk of three generations and four members of the family, this article triggered a kind of "emotion of life" of the author, expressing a strong family affection intertwined between mother and son, father and son, and grandchildren. The language of this article is simple and simple, but the connotation is rich and intriguing, so that the reader's soul follows the author's beautiful words on the trajectory of family, humanity and life.

A Walk was selected as the text of the sixth lesson of the second unit of the seventh grade Chinese first volume of the human education edition and the fourth lesson of the first unit of the sixth grade Chinese first volume of the Shanghai education edition of the textbook.

With the writing technique of seeing the big from the small, through the life fragment of a family of four grandchildren walking together, it shows the traditional virtues of the Chinese nation of respecting the old and caring for the young.

First, it is full of fun.

She listens to me now, just as I listened to her when I was a child. This sentence writes about the relationship between mother and son, the mother is reasonable, and the son is filial, which contrasts with each other. The little one suddenly cried out

The front is also a mother and son, and the back is also a mother and son. We all laughed. These two sentences are full of interest in life, which not only shows the innocence and intelligence of the little one, but also shows the happiness and warmth of the family.

Second, the meaning is rich.

My mother survived another harsh winter", writing "I" rejoicing that my mother was finally safe and sound. "As for my wife, she always listens to me when I'm outside. This sentence shows the virtuous wife of her wife.

…It was as if the sum of what was on my back and what was on her back was the whole world. This sentence has a profound meaning. It highlights the great significance of "respecting the old and loving the young" with light and heavy, and also writes that middle-aged people have realized the great responsibility of their own responsibilities and are inheriting and carrying forward the fine tradition of "respecting the old and loving the young".

3. The intention is beyond words.

This southern early spring field, large patches of new green ......All this makes one think of one thing - life. This passage depicts the vigorous vitality of spring through the depiction of the beauty of early spring, suggesting that the mother who has survived the harsh winter will gain new vitality. ⑤

Other Aesthetic Appreciation:

1. The waves of the ruler water refract the supreme beauty of human nature.

How can the author write about a simple little thing in life in such an interesting and thought-provoking way? Tasting it carefully, it is nothing more than the use of the writing method of shaku water and waves, twists and turns, and reflects the bright light of family affection and human nature on the troughs and crests.

Second, understatement contains subtle and timeless poetic beauty.

The essay "Walking" does not describe the scenery much, only two places, but in this understatement, it is full of rich poetic and picturesque feelings, providing a wonderful background for common walks.

3. Tell the story to show the beauty of Xiaochang's elegant language.

The text is not a little subtle, and the rest is as clear as the words. But it is popular but not vulgar, clear but not explicit.

The neatness and intricacy of the sentence structure, the sonorous and continuous rhyme, and the contrast and contrast of the semantic meaning seem to be easy to come by, without the slightest deliberate carving. See the aura in the plain, and see the philosophy in the shallowness.

1. The scenery is beautiful and poetic.

2. The selection of materials is exquisite, and the small is big.

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