I, a freshman in high school, always write a running account, what should I do in a hurry!!

It is recommended that you learn to make excerpts while reading youth digests, readers, and essays, and record the good words, sentences, and paragraphs you see, and usually read and read more!

Read, read, re-read, figure out in reading, accumulate in reading, compare in reading, and apply after reading.

15-20 points is normal, unless you have super insight. The rhetoric is beautiful and not artificial, or it comes from the heart and moves with emotion. Or maybe it's because the teacher's vision is different, and the fact that he doesn't approve of you doesn't mean that your work is bad. If the language is too watery, don't take it seriously.

Dictionary Anthology ** Magazine. ok

Find some essays to look at first, and then put your own examples into them. This is the first stage, after which you can put aside writing your own essays. In view of the fact that your current affairs have expanded a lot, it is recommended that you write a proposal**, but you should read more comments and examples, otherwise it will be empty.

As for the fiction and reality, I hope you don't care too much, because the most important thing in narrative is the grasp of emotion, it is recommended that you read more philosophical stories, and after reading more, when you write a narrative, you will come a little bit to connect with the content of the article, absolutely high score. Thank you.

Think of it as a clerical with a routine.

Read more extracurricular reading. Psalms. Or don't want to read a book.

Just look at some magazines. I used to read new concept essays when I was studying. Very thick book、。

Many essays have plots. There is writing、I think it looks better than ordinary writing essays。

"Essay journal" refers to an essay that lists the narrative or record of phenomena without analysis. The "running account" is a ledger that records the details of Baizi's transactions in the form of a diary day by day, which is a metaphor for the narration or record of the phenomena without analysis.

Source: The fourth and fourth chapter of "Dream of Red Mansions": "Jia Lian ordered Lin Zhixiao to put the 200 silver into the running account, add it separately, and spend it in the past." ”

Mao Dun's "Lin Family Shop" five: "So after smiling at dinner, after calculating the day's 'running account', Mr. Lin went to visit the president of the Chamber of Commerce. ”

Guo clarified the second chapter of "The Legend of the Big Knife": "These 'running accounts' that everyone knows, do you need to retell them again?" ”

Ding Ling's "Creation and Life": "I don't want to be limited by real people and real things, so I made some cutting, I tried to write it as a **, not a running account." ”

Zhao Shuli's "Little Manager": "As soon as he sat down, he wanted to see what jokes Sanxi had made on the account in the past half a month, and opened the account with his hand. ”

Lao She's "Four Generations in the Same Hall" 59: "He took out the running account and asked them to look at it." ”

It is because I usually read less and the material in my mind is insufficient, which requires me to read more books on composition training and accumulate materials.

On the other hand, imitation writing is also an important way to change the bad composition, for example, if you are writing people's essays recently, you can find a better writer's essay model, now there are many such books in the bookstore, write according to the model text, parents or ask teachers with high composition level to take a look, and then revise it, train a few more times, and prepare so that the writing ability should be improved.

If he doesn't like writing, you should encourage him more and help him realize the importance of writing.

Composition is generally divided into three parts, the beginning, the main body and the end, the beginning is very important, there are many ways to start, let students practice, the main part should have a plot, talk about a few things, or explain a few questions, you must think about it first, the end must echo, but also practice more.

Writing is a long-term accumulation process, and parents should be patient and meticulous to help students.

Hehe. Chinese is to practice and add textbook knowledge.

Composition is to narrate real things and express real feelings.

Of course, you can let your child practice it himself, and the essay will be good.

Exceptionally, it is also a good idea to use it as an essay, you can let your child copy some beautiful words and phrases during the summer vacation, or you can let him practice more.

In addition, in terms of time, the action should not be too slow, and the general writing essay only takes about 1 hour at most, make an outline, think for a few minutes, and then write, it will be much easier.

In this way, the level of writing is improved without delaying time.

I think this method works. Thank you.