I often give up my seat to the elderly on the bus, how to change the sick sentence?

It can be changed to: I often give up my seat to the elderly on the bus.

There are three steps to modify a sentence:

The first step is to read the sentence and figure out what it is trying to mean. This is the most important step in modifying the sick sentence, and only by reading the meaning of the sentence freely can you find its faults and correct it according to the meaning of the original sentence. Many sick sentences can be modified as long as they understand what they are trying to convey.

The second step is to find out what the meaning of the sentence is to express, and then go back to the original sentence to find out what is wrong with the meaning of the sentence.

The third step is to find out the problem of the sentence and modify it according to the meaning of the sentence. There is often more than one way to modify a sick sentence, and it is necessary to choose the one that not only expresses the original meaning most accurately, but also the easiest one.

It can be changed to: I often take the bus to give up my seat to the elderly. Or I give up my seat to an elderly person on the bus. Both.

I think it could be changed to "On the bus, I will give up my seat to the elderly".

I would often give up my seat to the elderly on the bus.

It should be put in front of the frequent.

I often give up my seat to the elderly on the bus.

This makes the sentence much smoother.

I think it should be.

On the bus, I often give up my seat to the elderly.

Summary. Hello, this sentence is like this after the modification.

I would often give up my seat to the elderly on the bus.

I often give up my seat to the elderly on the bus to revise sick sentences.

Hello, after this sentence is modified, it is like this, I often give up my seat to the elderly on the bus.

Hope mine is helpful to you.

Have a great day.

Thank you. You are welcome.

The author seen in the night book is a revised sentence written by the Southern Song Dynasty poet Ye Shaoweng.

Revised to: The author of "What I See in the Night Book" is the Southern Song Dynasty poet Ye Shaoweng.

Hope mine is helpful to you.

She wore a gray blouse and a blue hat to revise her sentences.

He wears a gray shirt and a blue hat.

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I often see Xiaowen giving up his seat to the elderly in the car.

Original sentence: The bus will be on the way in front of my house.

Modified to: The bus will pass by on the road in front of my house.

**: Missing predicate. Just add the predicate "drive by".

This sentence lacks a predicate.

The sentence modified to correct is as follows.

Seniors over the age of 60 can travel for free. Is it a sick sentence?

Analysis: It is a type of sick sentence that is not properly collocated.

It should be changed to such that seniors over the age of 60 are entitled to free bus rides.