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Anonymous users2024-02-06In my opinion, your composition level is clear and comprehensive, but the fly in the ointment is that your subject should not be played by a predicate verb, which is a taboo in English composition, and it also exposes your negligence in the details of English sentences. The second point is that your essay lacks a certain coherence, especially between sentencesFirst, help others can make us feel happyWhen we help others, they will say "thanks" to you I don't feel like I'm finished, so I have to work on the details of the sentences in the future.
It's good overall, so I think I should get 11-12 points, keep up the good work, come on!
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Anonymous users2024-02-051.Prepare the assignment to be graded, either in real object or in a clear front that can be taken from a photo.
3.There are two ways to get a job, one is to take a photo directly and the other is to get it from the phone album.
5.After the assignment is corrected, you can drag the page up to reach the analysis section, where you can view the analysis process of the question.
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Anonymous users2024-02-04As is clearly shown by the cartoon, it goes without saying that the cartoon aims at revealing a common (and seriou) pheonmenon in our society : with the rapid development of internet,we choose it as the only tool to communicate with others）
The only communication tool, which does not correspond to reality, should be changed to the essential tool or the popular tool
It can be changed to: the inrernet has become essencial to our life, we choose it as the popular tool to communicate with others
and don't want to do the same thing (in the reality) .
in the reality) should be in real life
therefore ,we live much closer than anytime before
yet the distance
inside of ) to ( between us (become) further( long ) to (longer)than anytime before too
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Anonymous users2024-02-03It should be separated, for the same thing
Whether the reality would be better changed to in reality is a fixed phrase.
should be separated, for any time
It's best to have a comma after that.
long to much farther seems better to be followed by an is or see after us
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