Grade 6 Chinese Revision Sick Sentences. Urgently. Help.

37, praised the good people in the class and Li Qiang's good deeds.

The logic is chaotic, Li Qiang's gold collection is also a good person and good thing in the class, and there is no subject in this sentence, who praised it? It should read as follows:

I always praised the good people and good deeds in the class. (Or add later that it includes Li Qiang's good deeds in picking up money)38, although he may not be able to come, we always have to inform him.

The relationship between the two clauses is incorrect, resulting in an error in the logical relationship between the two clauses. It should read as follows:

Even if he doesn't necessarily come, we still have to inform him.

39. Recently, the library has been crowded like never before. (Here you make a mistake) modifier wrong, the presentation is not crowded, the presentation cannot be modified crowded, it should be changed to:

Recently, the library has been more crowded than ever.

40. Teenagers should become a sublime communist style with everything for the collective.

The logic is super confusing ......The order of the modified ingredients is wrong. The abbreviated sentence is followed by "become style".

This is not right. It should be changed to have style.

Teenagers should have a noble communist style that gives everything for the sake of the collective.

37.Praise is preceded by a teacher.

38.Although change to even though.

39.Render changed to appear.

40.The style was changed to spiritual.

The first question seems to have some problems at the back, and I can't change it. 100% back pair!

The second volume of the sixth grade revises the sentence as follows:

1. The production of cotton in China is now self-sufficient (the position of the definite and the central language is reversed, and it should be changed to "produced cotton").

2. He is one of the many victims who have been spared (since he is "spared", that is, he has not died, and he cannot be said to be "one" among the "victims"). ）

3. He sits there intently, listening intently to the teacher's lecture (redundant ingredients, delete "concentrated" or "concentrated").

4. The students all said that yesterday's activity was a pleasant day (remove one from "the activity of the sale" and "the day").

5. My sister is very anxious when she can't find her parents (is it "sister" who is anxious, or "Dad" and "Mom" who are anxious, or "Mom" who is anxious?) You can put a comma between "Dad" and "Mom", or you can put a comma before "Dad").

6. His kind words+ and kind face always appeared in front of my eyes.

Modified: After "words", add "ringing in my ears":

7. Increasing quality is the top priority of Qingdou Chinese teaching reform.

Modify: "Increase" to "Improve".

8. The win or loss of this ball game is not only related to the reputation of the team, but also related to the honor of the school.

Revise the word "rather" to read the word "and".

9. After watching this exhibition, I have a lot of feelings. Modified: Remove "make".

10. Only socialism can save China. Modified: "just" is changed to "cai" finch is swimming.

The first is an error in word order. As a result, the logic does not make sense, and a thing should first be established, and then gradually improved and sound. Therefore, the first sentence should be changed to the Red Scarf Broadcasting Station, which has established and improved a series of management systems.

The second question is the incomplete ingredients. Resulting in unclear semantics.

Finding out should be followed by questions. Or behavior.

The second sentence was changed to the industrial and commercial department, and the department of commerce and commerce immediately investigated the problem of the shopping mall's unauthorized price increase.

The third sentence is well... Didn't see the problem.

There are a few things you can do to fix mistakes. Waiter.

The first is to find the ingredients, who is doing what. Take out the main running ingredients, and what is missing will be obvious.

There is also the cultivation of a sense of language, and some problems of collocation face-to-face. You can know that ** is not very clever.

The last thing is to see if there are any duplication and redundancy problems.

l.The Red Scarf Broadcasting Station has established a series of management systems. (will sound and establish a swap position).

2.The industrial and commercial administration department immediately found out that the mall was good at guessing Kai's own price. (Add "the act of the custodium" at the end).

3.Ensuring food security has always been the top priority for the national economy and people's livelihood. (Do you confirm that you sent this sentence correctly?,It's a bit like the original words of a book.,I can't see the error**).