Change a few sentences in English the second year of junior high school .

1.The Young Pioneers played into the revolutionary tradition.

2.Summer in the Little Khing'an Mountains is so beautiful.

3.As a result of the study, everyone's general consciousness has been raised.

4.The two old and new societies are really a stark contrast!

5.We need to develop our own interest and level of writing.

6.Under the education of my teachers, I have a correct attitude and method of learning.

7.At the beginning of the school year, we set up a plan and clarified the direction of our efforts.

8.My father told me that when I was a child, I didn't have money to study.

9.My drawer is stacked with many award certificates.

10.I'm about to graduate, and I should study harder.

Answer: 1The Young Pioneers carried forward the revolutionary traditions.

2.The Little Khing'an Mountains in summer are so beautiful.

3.After studying, everyone's consciousness has generally improved.

4.The old and new societies are really a stark contrast!

5.We need to cultivate our interest in writing and improve our writing skills.

6.Under the education of the teacher, I have a correct learning attitude and improve my learning methods.

7.At the beginning of the school year, we made a plan and clarified the purpose of learning.

8.My father told me that when he was a child, he didn't have money to study.

9.My drawer is full of award certificates.

10.Graduation is approaching, and we should study harder.

1. This is a happy, pleasant, and joyful class meeting. Modified: Removed "pleasant, joyful".

2. The teacher suddenly slowed down his progress. Modified: Remove "gradually" or "suddenly".

5. In order to avoid similar accidents in the future, we must improve the safety system as soon as possible.

Modified: Remove "avoid" or "no longer".

6. His kind words+ and kind face always appeared in front of my eyes.

Modified: After "words", add "ringing in my ears":

7. Increasing quality is an urgent task in the reform of Chinese teaching.

Modify: "Increase" to "Improve".

8. The win or loss of this ball game is not only related to the reputation of the team, but also related to the honor of the school.

Revise the word "rather" to read the word "and".

9. After watching this exhibition, I have a lot of feelings. Modified: Remove "make".

10. Only socialism can save China. Amendment: "just" is changed to "only".

11. After the incident, the class teacher studied with the class committee and decided to conduct an education on this issue.

Amendment: "This question" was changed to "Students".

It was decided to use their extracurricular time to plant trees on campus.

1.In addition to the staff of Peking University, teachers, students and scientific and technological personnel from 15 colleges and universities including Tsinghua University also participated in the study.

2.The house is furnished with all kinds of things used by Lu Xun.

3.Summarizing the knowledge learned in a timely manner at the appropriate stage is a successful experience for Xiao Min to achieve excellent results.

4.The development of all things has ups and downs, which is determined by the internal contradictions of things and the influence of various external factors of nature and society.

1.The Young Pioneers played into the revolutionary tradition.

2.Summer in the Little Khing'an Mountains is so beautiful.

3.As a result of the study, everyone's general consciousness has been raised.

4.The two old and new societies are really a stark contrast!

5.We need to develop our own interest and level of writing.

6.Under the education of my teachers, I have a correct attitude and method of learning.

7.At the beginning of the school year, we set up a plan and clarified the direction of our efforts.

8.My father told me that when I was a child, I didn't have money to study.

9.My drawer is stacked with many award certificates.

10.I'm about to graduate, and I should study harder.

Answer: 1The Young Pioneers carried forward the revolutionary traditions.

2.The Little Khing'an Mountains in summer are so beautiful.

3.After studying, everyone's consciousness has generally improved.

4.The old and new societies are really a stark contrast!

5.We need to cultivate our interest in writing and improve our writing skills.

6.Under the education of the teacher, I have a correct learning attitude and improve my learning methods.

7.At the beginning of the school year, we made a plan and clarified the purpose of learning.

8.My father told me that when he was a child, he didn't have money to study.

9.My drawer is full of award certificates.

10.Graduation is approaching, and we should study harder.

1. Improper word order.

1.Improper word order of multi-layered adjectives 2Improper word order for multi-level adverbials 3

Improper order of the definite and central words 4The position of the adjective and adverbial is out of place 5Associated juxtaposed words or phrases in improper word order 6

Improper word order of the subject and related words.

Second, improper collocation.

1.Improper collocation of related words 2Improper collocation of the definite and the central word (subject and object) 3

Improper collocation of the moving object 4Improper subject-verb collocation 5Improper collocation of guest and guest 6

Improper matching of dynamic compensation 7Improper collocation of the adverbial with the central word (predicate) 8One side and two sides are not properly matched.

3. Illogical.

1.Unclear conceptual scope 2Paradox 3Repeated negations cause confusion 4Subject-Guest Reversal 5Misuse of related words.

Fourth, the structure is chaotic.

1.Two different sentence structures are mixed 2Anti-customer mainly 3Halfway through.

6. Excess or incomplete ingredients.

1 ingredient excess 1The subject repeats a part of the same predicate 2The predicate repeats the same object 3The predicate repeats the modifier before and after it 4The definite is repeated with the central sentence 5The adverbial is repeated with the central language.

2. Defective ingredients 1Subject mutilated 2Predicate mutilation 3The object is mutilated 4Modifier mutilated 5The central language is incomplete.

Misuse of related words.

Example: Since you're here, it's time for me to go.

After many charges, the army finally stopped the stubborn attack of the enemy.

If you behave like this, it won't be China.

That's a lot, where do you want me to find it!