Use a poster sofa pocket to write a 2000 word story or essay or something

When it comes to sofas, everyone must be familiar with them. Yes, almost every household has it. But have you ever thought about the sofa of the future?

The sofa I designed is multi-functional, and there are six advantages in the whole body. If you want to have more space to play, just press the seven-color button, the sofa will automatically shrink and move to the corner, play enough, just clap your hands twice, and the sofa will automatically recover; If you want to talk to someone, don't make a chair, don't go to a teahouse or bar, just sit on the sofa. As soon as you sit down, two small hands will appear under your feet, take off your shoes and socks, and let your feet soak in the foot relaxer, so that you can comfortably talk to others.

And this foot soothing machine will also change the temperature according to the weather conditions, so that you can sit warm in winter and cool in summer; If you're tired, sit down on the couch! The sofa will stretch out two gentle little hands to massage you; If you're hungry and thirsty, you don't have to get the food yourself, pour the water, the couch has everything ready for you. You just have to pat the sofa, and the little hand of the sofa will bring out a plate with your favorite food and your favorite drink; If you have a guest in your house and want to spend the night in your house, and you have no bed, you can let the guest sleep on the sofa, it will be comfortable.

Because the sofa will give the guests a warm quilt and make the bed bigger. Guests must applaud when they sleep; The biggest advantage of this sofa is that it can distinguish between good and bad. If it's a nice person sitting on the couch, then the couch will be soft and comfortable, and the right wind will blow for you with the weather temperature; If someone with a bad conscience sits on it, the sofa will become cold and hard, how wonderful!

With such a sofa, the general public must like it.

All sorts of situations are jealous of the tax gunner.

After the third grade of elementary school, children begin to learn to write. At this stage, only the expression needs to be clear and correct to express the meaning, and the short paragraph can get a high score for the essay, while in the upper grades of elementary school, an essay needs to reach about 400 words. For some children who lack training, they will not know what to write, because of punctuation abuse, word repetition, paragraph centering, etc., which is counterproductive.

So today, I will take you to understand how to write longer essays in primary school composition tutoring?

(Concentrate on writing).

In fact, it is not difficult to write 400 words for a narrative essay in primary school, and the most important thing in tutoring is to cultivate children's ability to describe details. For example, there was a child who described a cooking scene, and when he wrote down all the seasonings that could be added, there was nothing to write about, so he kept repeating and I stir-fried. An article was smashed in this way.

In the eyes of this child, the details have been said to be exhaustive, but they are not.

There are not many details enough to describe the logical order, and in the case of cooking above, our classmates can add frequently used conjunctions: first, then then, then this is not enough. The cooking process is so smooth?

If not, then you can add: sudden, unexpected, however, knowing, is so. Once you've joined the connection, students will find that you can add a new link to your cooking, such as flavor.

Logical order is the key to the smoothness of the article, and the application of conjunctions in the article is the basis of logical order.

Of course, the use of conjunctions is only the first step, and then students should pay attention to the psychological feelings between each description. For example, before cooking, think about the taste of a dish my mother used to make, why it was delicious, or simply describe the reason and goal for your own cooking. During cooking, you can add psychological changes.

For example, when I first say that I suddenly find it difficult to cook, that I seem to need to do a lot of simple things, or that my mother, who secretly rejoices that I do this, will surely praise me like this. Imagine that this must be the most popular dish of the night.

Psychological depiction is the key to writing cooking, because it allows for understanding the purpose and composition of the author's writing, but the strengths and weaknesses of composition are also that the delicacy of the text is often reflected in the observation and imagination of things. When the plate is placed in the pot, the sound is:"Whew", the oil jumped out, and I immediately dropped the spatula, and then jumped down; After being placed in the pot, the leaves begin to curl and the original large leaves shrink. The green color gradually deepens.

These descriptions do not use too many poetic and esoteric words, but they are enough to express the depth and vividness of the author's description, and the vivid picture immediately appears before our eyes. Of course, after adding detailed descriptions, the number of words in the synthesis must not be less than the required standard.

(Study in a group).

Usually children always have nothing to say when writing, it does not mean that there is no content in their minds, as long as the logical framework of the composition is arranged, and then fill in the description of psychology, action, and appearance, you can quickly find the feeling of writing. The above is how to write a longer essay in primary school essay tutoring, have you learned?

How I want to build myself a house of the future, it's called the Apple House. My apple room is turquoise, like a big apple. It has a star-shaped automatic door, and it only knows the people in the house, and it will open it when it sees them.

The windows in my house are triangular in shape, and I open them when I say they open them, and close them when I say they close them. Even more wonderful is the roof. It is transparent and has a lot of flowers and trees planted on it, like a hanging garden.

At night, you can count the stars through the rooftop. There are all kinds of robots in the room, and if I get hungry, the robots will bring me a big meal. If there is garbage in the house, the robot will sweep the house clean.

If I want to study, the lamp on my desk will automatically turn on. If I don't sit up straight, the chair will automatically alert me until I have my chest up. There is an e-book in front of my desk with a lot of knowledge that allows me to learn a lot.

If I want to play, the bed will go down automatically, and there will be many toys on the floor for me to play with. My family can also transfer places and go where I want to go. Is my house great?

I heard my mother say that the first, second and third grades are to lay the foundation, the fifth and sixth grades are the total review, and the fourth grade is a turning point. And I improved in the fourth grade, which means that I will be even better in the next five or six grades.

It turns out that my language is always slippery, up and down, and not stable at all, just like on a seesaw, going up and down. My mother enrolled me in many cram schools for this, and I thought: interest classes, interest classes, if there is no interest, what is the use of going to it?

It's better not to save some money.

My mother seemed to see through my thoughts, and deliberately did not report any interest classes in the second semester of the fourth grade, and gave me some strange and intriguing questions, such as: wood - texture - geography - ideal. My mom gave me a beginning and an end for me to practice, but every time I looked it up in the dictionary, which my competitive spirit did not allow, it aroused my interest, and when I learned a lot of vocabulary, this basic problem became a breeze.

Gradually, I was able to match the idiom solitaire.

Then, I found a test paper, all the questions on it are very flexible, from that book, I understand that no matter what you write, you must write out the true feelings, in order to be a good article, if there is no emotion, the article will be dry, like a flower without nourishment and water, without showy, ** people will be dissatisfied because of this. After understanding this, my writing skills have really improved. This has given me more confidence to learn Chinese and I know how to learn Chinese.

I've improved, I've improved. Because I know what it is, and why it is. My heart is as sweet as honey.

Progress is something to be proud of for me.

In the past, I was the little princess of the family, under the care of my parents, I didn't like to work very much, and my parents did the housework, but I sat on the sofa and watched this scene happen, without any strange feeling. My mother used to say to me, "You should do your own thing; "But I don't like that.

On my way home from school, I felt that I had done something wrong, and my mother was too busy at work and had to work for the family. Not only did I not help her, but I also did not do the same thing. In an instant, an idea came to me:

Let mom take a break and I'll do the housework. When I came to my senses, I was home, and I took action. Sweep the floor, wipe the table, ......I was so tired that I didn't know what to do, and the beads of sweat fell down, but I didn't stop.

When I saw how clean my home was, I thought of how tired my mother was. I started cooking before my mother came back, and when the food was served one by one, I only heard a few "touches", and it turned out that my mother was back. I sat on the side as fast as I could, as if nothing had happened.

As soon as my mother came in, she saw that the messy house had become a beautiful scenery in one afternoon, and she was so happy that she had nothing to say, and the food on the table was incomparable. Suddenly, her gaze turned to me, and I believed she knew that I had done it.

Just as I was enjoying dinner, my mother suddenly said to me, "Son, you have improved," and I was taken aback, this was the first time my mother praised me since I was a child.

I've improved, but I can't be proud, I have to work harder on the premise.