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The god of food "big head".

Change: Our class is full of talents, there is Cai Xionghang, the biggest person, the best xx, and the fastest xx, but compared to the amount of food, the big head - Li Xin deserves it!

It's dinner time again, "Hahaha!" I followed the arrogant laughter and saw that it was the big head. I saw that he showed a row of teeth, the fat on his face trembled with a smile, and he kept looking at today's meal, his eyes were straight, and he barely left saliva.

He kept saying, "Hurry up ahead, I'm going to starve to death!" I watched and laughed.

Big head ......Hey, hey, you want to laugh at me, how many bowls are you going to eat today? You're not going to eat all that bucket? Hahaha......I laughed so hard that I almost didn't lose my breath, but his answer suffocated you.

Hey, hey, hey. He smirked, "No more than 4 bowls." ”

Good guy, I'm just going to eat a bowl! I looked at his belly in amazement, and he ate the equivalent of six days a day!

When he arrived at the restaurant, he cooked the meal, trotted back to his seat, and as soon as he sat down, he couldn't wait to pick up the spoon and scoop two large spoonfuls into his mouth from the steaming rice, and screamed "haha", obviously being burned, and then slowly scooped a large spoonful of vegetables, chewing "baw, chirp", and the juice sprayed on the corners of his mouth, making his face full of ......

OMG! Big head, you're in too much of a hurry! "Dude, take your time! I was a little surprised, the spoon didn't move in my hand for a long time, and I just looked at him in a daze.

Tsk ......After he finished eating the first bowl, wiped his mouth, ran to the side of the rice bucket and added a large bowl slowly, Cai Xionghang couldn't help but say: "Big head, you are really the god of food in the world!" ”

He smiled embarrassedly, and ate again, it can really be described as gobbling up, he grabbed another chicken leg, took a bite of chicken, and ate it, in just a few minutes, he eliminated two bowls, such a food speed, I had to give him a thumbs up, you know, I didn't even finish half a bowl!

The big head's God of Food talent is more than that, but speaking of this today, if you want to know more about his amazing talent, please come and visit my class!

The events you chose for your essay are very attractive, and the topic is good, but the language structure is a bit weird, so I helped you change it... Keep up the good work! ）

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