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The end of the world is just a stone's throw away. The distance between you and me is so close.
It's as if you can reach out and reach your face.
But the distance between you and me is so far.
You are like a bright and mysterious star.
It's out of reach.
Sight. But it's like the horizon.
Thereupon. I do my best to bring myself closer to your world.
I want two parallel lines to intersect.
But every time my hand is about to touch your back.
A trance. Your figure distanced itself from me again.
ps: 1. Don't mind if you think of a title for your poem. Close to the end of the world: Although the metaphor is close, it is difficult to see each other, as if it is far away from the world.
2. Help you add two image metaphors, stars and parallel lines, let's have a good experience.
3. I think the "touch" in your penultimate sentence is very good, as if it is real and touchable, which paves the way for the following.
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You and I are so close.
It's just a stretch of hand.
I'll be able to touch you.
But. You and I are so far away.
It's that I'm nowhere near you.
So. Even if you're in my eyes.
I still think you're so out of reach.
Thereupon. I try to bring myself closer to your world.
Every time my hand is about to touch your figure......
A trance. Your figure distanced itself from me again.
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You and I are so close.
I can touch your face as soon as I reach out.
You and I are so far away.
I can't keep up with you.
So. Even if you're right in front of my eyes.
I also think you're so out of reach.
Thereupon. I try to bring myself closer to your world.
Try to create possibilities for yourself.
But. Whenever I fight hard.
My hand is about to touch you.
A trance. Your figure distanced itself from me again.
Bite the text and chew the words, and think a lot].
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Words used in their own right"Confused"to express thoughts"Blur"..
It cannot be perfected without changing more than 70% of the words, because the expression of ideas is not targeted. Of course, the meaning changes completely.
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It's as if you're close to me.
But it is separated by the distance of the heart.
As if you were too far away from me.
But I really want to break free.
I've worked hard to see you.
You're drifting.
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1. Life without friendship is bleak, just like the earth has lost the shine of the sun and has no brilliance. Life without friendship is boring, like a damp match, no matter how you rub it, you can't ignite the fire of hope in life. A philosopher said:
If two people share one pain, then there is only half pain; If two people share one happiness, they have two happiness. A life without friendship is incomplete.
2. Tiredness at the end of the world, and the long wind caresses thousands of miles.
3. A person always has to take a strange road, see unfamiliar scenery, listen to unfamiliar songs, and then in a casual moment, you will find that the things that you originally tried so hard to forget are really forgotten.
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The world is just one less person without you, and I am without you, and the whole world is indeed missing without you.
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The world is too big or meets you, and the world is too small or loses you.
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Writing Wu Song's feelings after reading the tiger is mainly to write the plot of Wu Song's fight against the tiger, as well as your feelings after reading.
Here are my thoughts:
Beginning: Briefly describe the admiration for those heroes who watched the Water Margin during the summer vacation, and then transitioned to his favorite character, Wu Song, and then connected to the hero fragment ......of Wu Song fighting the tiger
Text: It is to narrate and describe Wu Song's fight against the tiger, the most important thing is to describe the demeanor, psychology, action, and details of the characters, plus the rendering of the environment, I believe you will describe this story vividly.
Ending: It's your thoughts on the story, of course, be realistic (what schoolchildren grow up to be like him, it's best to relate to those corrupt phenomena).
Think about it yourself, you won't ask me again To be honest, I haven't seen the Water Margin even yet, I only know that Wu Song fights the tiger I can't write an essay and ask me again
Look for me when you have a lot of points
I want points
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The plot flows, does not inject water, and is simply neat.
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The Reborn General Door Poison Queen", "The Reborn Daughter General Star" and "The Daughter of the Daughter" features: The characters are full of characterization, and the pattern is large but not exaggerated! The plot flows, does not inject water, and is simply neat.
Xixing's representative works: "Jun Jiuling", "Jiao Niang Medical Scripture", "First Hou", "Great Emperor Ji", "Zhusha", "Famous Doctor" Features: Xixing's books have a kind of magic, which makes people calm down when they look at it.
Although most of them are the theme of rebirth and revenge of the big heroine, there are few emotional lines, but there is no bitterness and hatred, the style is humorous and funny, which can cause emotional resonance, and the plot is interlocking, not routine, and people can't guess.
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Help this work come up with a name.
Kiss a few words.
can all match the overall feeling of his work, and the ones you posted above don't meet the requirements. Not like.
Boil dear, I didn't send it to you just now, I sent you an example.
Drawing dreams. The charm of the country.
Beijing Rhyme" Prosperous Dress".
The third one is pretty good, is there anything else?
I also quite like the third one
Fuxian. Rong fiber.
Rong fiber. And this, take a name. With the theme of lotus flowers.
Lianhua is too liquid lotus wind.
Blooms. Ai Lian said.
The lonely king ——— the desert eagle.
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Send 11 flowers, I only love you wholeheartedly, the whistle is very romantic, if you can, under the premise of safety, you can put a candle in a heart, buy some balloons, write on it, you can see the kind of yo, what to write you decide ha! Show her and let it fly in front of her...
No, I don't just look at **, I like a person when I look at people. It also depends on the heart. character, at least to understand what kind of person he is.
The sun is silent, it is a kind of brilliance; The mountains are silent, and they are a kind of majestic: the blue sky is silent, and they are a kind of lofty. The pines and cypresses are silent, and they are a kind of verdant: the flowers are silent, and they are a kind of handsome.