Can anyone help me change my English essay? Urgent changes are good additions

nowadays, more and more people choose to study abroad.

they are turning out to be a good prospect.(I don't understand what you're trying to say).

there are several reasons for that.

firstly, students can broaden their horizons.

the students can learn advanced knowledge.(Why do you need to study abroad to learn advanced knowledge?) ）

secondly, studying abroad is a good opportunity that builds maturity and independence.

finally, the environment plays a role in learning foreign languages.

however, some people think that studying abroad has a lots of disadvantages.

firstly, the fees and cost of living are high. it is a financial burden to the family.

secondly, the poor self-discipline will turn out the poor academic performance when their parents are away from them.(Repeat point, I changed it).

finally, the students might take some time to get used to the foods there.

One of the most important transports is the plural of the highest adjective and noun The bicycle is a means of transportation and not transportation, so the plural of transport is used.

type plus s

Uh, upstairs, the last sentence has although, and it can't be added anymore. . . The landlord should pay attention to this.。。。

There is a lot of inappropriateness in the last sentence of the first paragraph.

Actually, you can say:

i can donate to volunteer in helping the wild animals.

I volunteered to save wildlife.

According to a recent survey, students know that their hardwritng is poor, and to my surprise, most students are reluctant to improve. Of course, there are a variety of reasons.

More than half of the students think they can write by the computer and there are also quite a few students who are busy studying, so they don't have enough time to practice it, and some students think it's not good with hardwriting. As a consequeece, they prefer to spend their time on other meaningful things. Different students have different reasons, so I can't list enough reasons.

As far as I'm concerned, in my opinion, everyone should improve our hardwriting, and there is no doubt that good hardwriting is more than just important. Good hardwriting makes a good first impression on others....There is no denying that hardwriting will play an increasingly important role, in short, we should try our best to improve our hardwriting, we still have a long way to go.