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21 Read the following poem and write an essay as required.
On the maple leaves, the dew shimmered red...... red
On the lotus flowers, the dew drops have a pale ...... like teardrops
Understand the material comprehensively, but you can choose one side, one angle to conceive, and write the beginning of an essay.
Requirements: Have a clear central thesis, appropriately and briefly demonstrate the central thesis, and use certain expressive techniques to make the opening article literary.
No more than 150 words.
21 Essay Idea:
The poem uses "red" and "pale" to express the feelings of the dew in different positions, and the word "flickering" highlights the pride and sense of accomplishment that the dew drops feel when they realize their self-worth; The word "pale" reflects the sorrow of the dew drops that they have disappeared into obscurity. This poem uses contrasting techniques to present the different sad and joyful attitudes of Dew Drops under different life situations.
Ideas that can be generated:
From this and that, from the appearance of nature to the truth of life, there can be the following ideas:
1) From the perspective of dewdrops: some people are content in good times, and sad in bad times, according to which the theme can be "how to face the situation correctly" and "how to correctly understand self-worth".
a Find the right position to realize self-worth.
To realize one's own value, one should choose a position that can show the light of one's life. Only by positioning accurately, fully showing oneself and giving full play to oneself can one achieve oneself.
b In the face of various circumstances in life, do not take pleasure in things or sorrow for yourself.
Life cannot always be in a shining position, in the face of a bleak situation, we must be calm and calm.
c Correctly understand self-worth and do not pursue illusory values.
The true value of the dew is to nourish the life of another place, not to show off the color of the self, the dew is colorless, and "shimmering red" is actually an illusion.
2) From the perspective of leaves and flowers: maple leaves and lotus flowers have no advantages or disadvantages, which shows that Dewdrop's cognition of their environment is not correct, so they can make ideas from "how to view the environment correctly" and "how to correctly understand things".
a Everything in life is beautiful, and it is not only a beautiful life that is valuable.
The red dew is beautiful, the white dew is not beautiful, it is just the prejudice of value.
b People should change in time with the changes in their circumstances.
In the case of environmental changes, instead of complaining, it is better to adapt to the changes in the environment.
c The times make heroes.
In fact, dewdrops are always dewdrops, and whether a person's life can be gorgeous depends to some extent on the current situation.
3) From the perspective of the relationship between dew drops and the environment:
a The value of life depends on oneself, not on circumstances.
The value of a dew drop can only be determined by its own characteristics, and showing red on a maple leaf does not mean that the dew is red.
b It is necessary to create an environment in which talents can show their value.
c Use people in the right places.
The same drop of dew, placed in different places has different values, which gives us this enlightenment.
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I love the early spring evenings, the clear sky with the cold air, the pedestrians coming and going under the plane trees, and you ask me if I would like to follow you out of here.
My intention for you is that if you escape into the empty door, although I don't believe in Buddhism, I can sweep the courtyard and dust, and be your half of the Buddha's guest, not much, that's all.
But you walked in the warmth of my March, I was not willing to take off the scarf, the temperature was not up or down, the weather station said that there was sunshine, your blankets, your buttons, your porcelain bowls and carved bottles, all scattered in front of the glass. I'm also in front of the glass, and I haven't taken off the bracelet you love yet, the warm color is not warm, and it fades and thins.
You didn't take away the boots I gave you, so I took one that was released from the early spring rainwater and used it to water the coriander that was sown late last summer, your favorite dessert shop with wooden windows, last year's summer new products, all off the shelves after summer, today's special promotion is Mandheling with maple cake, which is the taste I love, but you don't drink coffee, which is not as good as you want.
The male cat called the tower at the corner of the street, you don't like it, also had a cute girlfriend two days ago, and it still has the scarlet paint on its tail that the child mischievously painted, but it was not disliked.
The street lights are broken without warning, like, you go without warning. One year or two years is the hardest, the memory is still steaming, my friend persuaded me, life is short, I thought about it carefully, short is not short, bitter is a little bitter, anyway, I haven't found sugar that will feel sweet when I think of you, honey can't do it.
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Composition is the transition from internal speech to external speech, that is, from a compressed and concise language that you can understand to an external language form that has a standardized grammatical structure and can be understood by others. Do you always have a hard time writing essays? The following is the first year of the road essay in front of my hometown, welcome you to learn from and reference, I hope it will be helpful to you.
There was a dirt road in front of my grandfather's house, which was my childhood casino, and my friends and I were covered in mud on sunny days and mud on rainy days. Sometimes my grandfather was so angry that he simply locked me in the house. I leaned on the windowsill, looked at the sewage all over the street, and thought:
When will I be able to play to my heart's content without my grandfather getting angry?
When I was old enough to go to school, my mother took me back to the city, and when I saw the asphalt road in the city, I was so happy, but I remembered that my grandfather was still walking on the dirt road that was always dirty, and the dirt road gradually became an unhappy note when I missed my grandfather.
During the summer vacation a few years ago, my grandfather fell ill, and my father and I hurried back to our hometown. As soon as I entered the village, my eyes lit up. Yes!
After a few years, the muddy dirt road in front of my grandfather's house turned into a gravel road, each stone was washed by the rain and crystal clear, and the oncoming wind was mixed with the fragrance of wild flowers, which made people feel refreshed. On both sides of the road, tall pine trees are planted, shaking their little heads in the rain, like dancing dolls. The mud houses along the road have also changed, and the rows of brick houses in the village are sleeping in the rain.
A group of children in tank tops and pants are playing, chasing, frolicking on the road, ......I happily threw away my umbrella and ran to my grandfather's house in the rain.
Since then, every year I have been arguing with my father to take me back to my hometown, but they have not been able to do so because they are busy with work. Last summer, my uncle's family came to the city to do business, and I clamored to go back to my hometown, and my mother finally agreed.
I followed my uncle to get on a luxury minibus, thinking: I haven't been to my grandfather's house for a few years, and I don't know what has become of it now, I really want to see the stone road again, hurry up and get to the station! Just thinking about it, my aunt urged me to get out of the car, and I hurriedly asked
Got home? I couldn't believe my eyes, the road in front of me suddenly opened up, the gravel road was gone, a cement road stretched straight into the distance, the green trees beside the road were greedily sucking the rain and dew, the leaves were green and shining, I looked up, the two-story buildings on the side of the road, one by one, I couldn't find the old house anymore, under the guidance of my aunt, I hesitated into the door of a small building, pushed open the door, and saw that my grandfather was holding a plate of fruit to greet us!
In the evening, my grandfather and I sat in the small courtyard, I snuggled up to my grandfather's side, took his hand and asked, "Where did you get the money to build such a beautiful road?" Grandpa grinned and said with a smile
This is all the way for the state to guide us farmers to get rich, so that we can live a good life......”
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Unforgettable hometown paths.
My hometown is in a valley in the mountains, and looking down from the top of the mountain, there are irregular sheep intestine trails. I don't like the wide, straight asphalt roads in the city, but I love the rustic roads because they record my childhood.
I remember it was a rainy night, thunder, lightning, downpour, everything was chilling. My mom and I came back from my grandmother's house and walked down this muddy path. The path was potholed, and my mother and I struggled to move forward.
Mom was still holding my arm like a teddy bear that would never be able to stand still, for fear that if I let go, I would fall. I innocently said to my mother: "Mom, when I was a child, you pulled me, and when I grow up, I will also hold you and prevent you from falling."
Mom smiled and said, "You're still far from growing up!" ”
The two of us were talking patronizingly, but our feet slipped and we fell to the ground at the same time. My mom and I couldn't help but laugh. Standing up again, none of us helped anyone anymore, and walked slowly on our own in the heavy rain.
I cautiously managed to walk through the muddy path and let out a long breath. My mother smiled and said to me, "Child, it's good, as long as you work hard, you can succeed!"
Overcoming what you think is difficult, is it true that you are happiest in your heart? I nodded.
As the years passed, I don't know how many different paths I walked, but this experience is still etched in my heart. Yes, isn't the same in life? At first, there are parents holding your hand, but in the final analysis, you will still let go, and it is up to you how to go on the road in the future.
I remembered the saying that only hard work can be rewarded and can be successful. Therefore, no matter what difficulties and setbacks we encounter, we must face them bravely and move forward bravely. The inspiration given to me by the path in my hometown will be useful for my whole life!
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On the way back to my hometown
This morning, my mother and I took a taxi with heavy bags to the "Liuliqiao Long-distance Station" to take the bus back to our hometown. When we arrived at the "Liuliqiao Long-distance Station", it was just eight o'clock, and the train departed at nine o'clock, and we waited in the waiting room for more than half an hour and finally started to check the tickets. We put everything in the car and started the day.
As soon as the car started for a while, I was impatient, so my mother gave me the phone to play, and after a while I got a little motion sickness, so I returned the phone to my mother, and then fell asleep on the chair.
I woke up and asked my mother in a daze, "Mom, are you out of Beijing now?" Mom said
It's already out of Beijing. I happily said, "Oh yes!
Finally out of Beijing! "But I waited at the window, waited for a long time and didn't get to my hometown, I was impatient again, my mother took out the playing cards to play with me, I was sleepy and fell asleep again after playing for a long time, I woke up, finally arrived at my hometown, I was very happy!
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The road in front of my house is called Cunjin Road, it is a very famous road, and our history books also have its tragic story, although this period of history is far away from us, but the changes in Cunjin Road in recent years are real for me.
Dad is a photography enthusiast, and every time he encounters something new and interesting or worth remembering, he always takes one or two photos, which can be regarded as a photo for immediate storage, so the most things in the large and small drawers of our cabinets and computers are photos.
Eleven "long vacation, one morning after I finished my homework, I sat at the computer again, ready to play a game to relax, inadvertently opened my father's electronic photo album, couldn't help but look at a large number of old ** that my father had scanned in a few days earlier, looking at it, a familiar and unfamiliar photo appeared in front of me: a not spacious road, cars and people, potholes on the sidewalk, many on both sides of the road are different in height and size, dilapidated and old shops. I can't remember where this is.
Oh, by the way, it's Cunjin Road, and it's the ...... that Dad took four years ago before Cunjin Road was renovated.
Perhaps it is this photo that reminds me of all kinds of interesting things about the golden road in my childhood memories:
Four years ago, I was only in the second grade of primary school, and I went to school on the road of Jinjin. I remember that the sidewalks were very narrow at that time, and the row next to them was almost all small shops, some buying food, some buying stationery, and some buying clothes....... Every time after school or in the evening, as soon as the big brothers and sisters from several nearby schools come out, they are even more crowded, and it is as lively as a small commercial street.
Many times I passed by, I couldn't control my cravings, and I also went to the small snack shop to buy a few xiaolongbao to satisfy my cravings, but I often forgot to wipe the soup that flowed to my mouth, and almost every time I returned home, my parents were a magical "Sherlock Holmes". Although now I don't know if this small shop has moved to ** and still makes xiaolongbao, the deliciousness of the bao still makes me unforgettable.
I also miss the old redbud trees. At that time, the green trees planted on the narrow sidewalks were redbud trees, thick and strong, and I don't know when they were planted, but they were there when I was sensible. Every time the flowers are in full bloom, this road becomes a world of flowers, on the ground, on the roof, on the trees, everywhere is paved with redbuds, when I was a child, I always love to step on the ground with bare feet, taste the soft feeling, or pick a few flowers, put them in front of me to smell the faint fragrance.
Although you can occasionally see redbuds now, they are not as impressive as the scenery of redbuds all the way on Cunjin Road in my childhood.
In fact, there is another thing that I liked most when I was a child, that is, watching cars on rainy days. Odd? It's not strange at all, that's the fun of being a child, because the road before Cunjin Road was potholed, when it rained, the big and small potholes were full of water, as soon as the car drove by, there were large and small splashes under the wheels, splashing the adults and children who walked to make a fuss, embarrassed, and I often "hit", that was the most interesting thing when I was a child.
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