Revise my German CV below thank you 20

deutschabteilung der xi’an fanyi universitaet, shanxi provinz

It's not Shanxi ProVinz, it's Shaanxi ProVinz

geburtsort: provinz xinjiang, volksrepublik China write xinjiang provinz, China on it.

Just go straight to the Germans. The Germans will generally help.

Why does it have to be German? No English is used. French..

What is a resume, is to show your qualifications, is to convey your value of things, your resume is now not on the table, but you have less outstanding side, to be a technician, you should put your resume, write very technical, at the same time you have to do those big projects on the letter, although not always responsible, but you are a part of the team, if none of them have been done, hey, you first go to the training class to learn, now employment, like your current work experience, it is difficult to find a good job. And from your resume, it can be seen that you don't have any plans for your career, you don't have a plan for life, and good companies value this very much, friends, come on!

Work experience, you are engaged in design, it is best to attach some of your own work, and describe because of the income brought by your previous company.

The profile is too general, write some results, such as what method was used in drawing what diagram, what effect was achieved, etc!!

No, don't take yourself too seriously.

Third, unimportant positions are generally not reviewed.

Fourth review.

Fifth, everyone's face will not embarrass you. Unless you offend the leader, the sixth blesses you with smooth development of your work, a happy career, a happy life, and a happy family.

After reading the whole article, there are no highlights, no focus, and even very wordy, which seems to be insufficient in writing skills.

Please put the most important content in the first sentence or the first point, and change it quickly.

The professional introduction should be placed in front, and the computer level can write the certificate you obtained, not so verbose, and the language level is also, no need to write it, as long as you write it, you will know that you have a certificate, and social practice pays attention to the format, that is too messy, you can start a new line for a period.