Can you help me revise my personal application to HKUA!! Rush 40

There are a lot of grammatical errors......I hope you changed your ...... before you handed it in

After reading it, I feel that there are a lot of sentences that start with as, which makes people uncomfortable, and there are not many changes in the sentences, which is a bit lacking. Rough reading, some grammatical problems, logic changes too quickly.

You want to be a war correspondent, and it's a good job.

Why are you interested in this university for this major. What are your hobbies, strengths, strengths and abilities, and what are your plans for the future, tell her that being admitted to the University of Hong Kong is an important step for you to achieve your life goals.

You choose this major for what career you want to pursue in the future, what are your abilities and how you are suitable for this major.

If you have won an important award, write briefly to provide an illustration of your ability. You don't have to list all the schools you have studied and the certificates you have obtained like a resume.

Not too long, half to one page of A4 paper is sufficient.

Alas, why do everyone come here to study economics, finance, accounting or something? These majors are already overcrowded. To tell the truth, there are many students in the mainland, and the competition is fierce, so if you have other majors that you are interested in, you can try something else.

Moreover, the economics major of the University of Hong Kong is only average, not particularly good.

Sample economics personal statement

Include a self-introduction, talk about your previous academic experience and achievements, awards, life grinding, why you chose the University of Hong Kong, your learning goals, and your understanding and views on your major

The resume is very simple, you can refer to the job application resume, state your personal situation, what schools you have studied, what awards you have won, what certificates you have, and what your grades are.

Write down the advantages that you think are good, and then write down why you want to choose xx majors, such as choosing business, because the University of Hong Kong has a high business ranking, high employment, and so on. No matter how realistic and utilitarian it is, Hong Kong people think this is normal.

I'm here this year, and I'm having this problem, but I'm from the math department.

Hmm....In fact, the most important thing is the real results...If your grades are good enough, you don't even need to write...If the results are not outstanding, it is useless to write sincerely...

Winning prizes is usually more useful for some grand prizes...It's like a competition or something, and those can make up for the lack of results...It doesn't matter if you don't

Yes, in fact, the English letter of introduction has very little impact on the application. The main thing is your college entrance exam results.

As long as the letter of introduction is enough words, there is no language problem.

I also submitted it casually last year. In the end, he was also admitted to the University of Hong Kong.

None of my classmates seem to have any big impact on how well or badly the letter of introduction is written...

I just uploaded it, and I suggest you go to your English teacher and ask him to help you fix it, as long as there are no grammatical errors.

Well, it's probably too much.

You can't get it yourself, you can't.