After reading The Last War Elephant , I felt that Ga Carol also felt guilty in his heart

The hero is dying, re-wearing the armor, hanging on the battlefield, and solemnly returning to search here.

The Last War Elephant".

The last war elephant that survived the War of Resistance Against Japanese Aggression, Gacar, knew that the limit of life had come, so he put on the elephant saddle again, came to the bank of the Taluo River to remember the past, hung on the battlefield, and finally buried his comrades"Elephant mound"The story of digging a pit next to it and burying itself solemnly.

The Last War Elephant Author.

Shen Shixi, born in October 1952, calls himself Shen Yiming, born in Shanghai, and his ancestral home is Cixi City, Zhejiang. He is currently a member of the Chinese People's Literature Committee, vice chairman of the Yunnan Writers Association, and a professional writer.

A war elephant that was about to enter the grave, struggled to put on the elephant saddle of the world, and rushed to the Hundred Elephant Tomb to be buried with his partners who had fought bloodily with him. The shrewd hunter coveted hundreds of priceless tusks in the Elephant Mound, and quietly followed the old war elephant all the way. In the vast twilight, the old war elephant used the last strength of his life to rendezvous with his companions, and ...... with this land that was once sprinkled with blood

I wrote it:

Ga looked at the fiery red sunrise in the sky, and her heart fluctuated:

Looking back on my life, it is like the rising sun on the horizon, red and prosperous; It is like this lake and river, plain and ......

This is the beginning of the first paragraph, and then I think to myself, or I will hurt you)

Perhaps, my companion summoned me with the Grim Reaper......I'm sorry, my ancestors have been saying to me for generations, Bononddin and the villagers are my "family", my companions are my brothers, the village is my second home, and I want to lie down with my brothers in a "hundred elephant mound".

This is the beginning and end of the second paragraph, and then I think to myself, or I will hurt you).

Accustomed to charging in a hail of bullets, accustomed to smelling ammunition mixed with rot. Suddenly it was quiet. It's a bloody loneliness. Seeing my comrades-in-arms fall from bullets, and I can only charge and kill the enemy, this is nothing more than the greatest resentment and shame ...... my life

This is the first few sentences of the third paragraph, and then I thought to myself, and I can't copy it, this is my "copyright", I got A, and the teacher read it in the class, and I want to protect the composition that I wrote until half past ten, I hope to understand).

Goodbye, villagers! Goodbye, Bonondin! I left, not taking a cloud with me, only left, a trace, regret ......

Goodbye, I have lived in the elephant house for 26 years, goodbye, Bonondin, who has taken care of me for 26 years, goodbye, the old village chief who cared about me. Goodbye, people in the stockade. Your kindness to me in this life, I will repay you in the next life.

Ga Shan raised his head and roared to the sky, as if to say to God: "I hope Ga Shan will be a war elephant in this village in the next life" (think about it later, it's very simple).

It is kind, loyal, and emotional, and worth learning from. Thank you!