Rewrite the second paragraph of Zhu Yuansi s book, and the translation of Zhu Yuansi s book, a littl

The clear and clear river water is like a warm jasper, and the fish are free and happy to play in the water, which is really enviable. In the middle reaches of the Fuchun River, the speed of the water flow is no longer as gentle as the water of the small river, but as rapid as an arrow, and the fierce waves set off by the river are like galloping horses.

The water of the river is blue and white, and the deep water is so clear that you can see the bottom. Swimming fish and fine stones can be seen clearly, and there is no obstacle to see all the time. The turbulent water was faster than an arrow, and the raging waves were as fierce as galloping horses.

The water of the river is clear and white, and you can see the bottom of the water even at a depth of thousands of feet. Swimming fish and fine stones can be seen clearly and without obstacles. The rapids were faster than arrows, and the waves were as fierce as galloping horses.

The details are as follows:

The wind and smoke dissipated, and the sky and the mountains became the same color. (I was in a boat) drifting along the river, drifting east or west at will. From Fuyang to Tonglu, about a hundred miles, strange mountains, supernatural water, the world's unique song.

The water is all blue and white, and you can see the bottom of the clear water.

The fish and small stones swimming can be seen directly without any obstacles. The turbulent water is faster than an arrow, and the fierce waves are like galloping horses. On the high mountains on both sides of the Jiajiang River, there are green trees that exude the cold, and the mountains compete to go up according to the high mountain situation, and these high mountains are competing with each other to stretch high and far away; Striving upwards, countless peaks were formed straight upwards.

The spring water splashed on the rocks, making a clear and clear sound; Beautiful birds chirp in harmony with each other, and the song is harmonious and beautiful. The cicadas are tall and non-stop for a long time, and the apes are non-stop for a long time. Like a fierce bird flying to the sky and striving for a high position for fame and fortune, when you see these majestic peaks, your heart will calm down in pursuit of fame and fortune.

Those who are busy with government affairs all day long will linger when they see these beautiful valleys. The slanted branches shaded it, and the day was as dark as it was at dusk; The branches of the sparse Ki Nian Zheng are intertwined, and sometimes they can be.

With Zhu Yuansishu [Author] Wu Jun [Dynasty] Southern and Northern Dynasties.

The wind and smoke are clean, and the Tianshan Mountains are colorful. Drifting from the stream, anything. From Fuyang to Tonglu one hundred miles, strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world.

The water is ethereal, and you can see the bottom. Swimming fish with fine stones, no obstruction to direct viewing. The turbulence is very fast, and the waves are rushing.

Sandwiched between the high mountains, all of them grow cold trees, compete with each other, compete for heights, and thousands of peaks. The spring water is rocky, and the sound is rattling; Good birds chirp and rhyme. The cicada is endless, and the ape is endless.

The kite flies to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart; Those who are in the world of economic affairs, peep into the valley and forget to rebel. Hengke is covered, and it is still dusk in the day; Sparse strips are intertwined, and sometimes the sun is seen.

Background: During the Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties, there was political darkness and social turmoil. Therefore, many intellectuals have placed their love for mountains and rivers to relieve the boredom in their hearts.

Wu Jun also developed a love for landscapes and scenery due to turmoil, and "Book with Zhu Yuansi" is a letter written by Wu Jun to his friend Zhu Yuansi after integrating his feelings.

Original text: The beauty of mountains and rivers has been talked about since ancient times. The peak enters the clouds, and the clear stream bottoms out.

The stone walls on both sides of the strait are full of colors. Green forests and green bamboos, four o'clock have. The dawn fog will stop, and the apes and birds will chirp; The sunset is declining, and the scales are racing.

It is really the immortal capital of the desire world. Since the beginning of recreation, there has been no one who can be strange.

Translation: The magnificence of mountains and rivers has been shared by people since ancient times. The peaks here are inserted into the sky and rocks, the clear streams are crystal clear, and the cliffs on both sides of the river are reflected in the sun.

The green forests and turquoise bamboos are evergreen all year round. In the morning, when the night fog is about to subside, you can hear the long howling of apes and the chirping of birds; In the evening, when the sun sets, you can see the fish jumping in the water. This is truly a fairyland on earth!

Since Xie Lingyun, no one has been able to be in this beautiful landscape.

The first paragraph of the article leads the whole article with the eight characters of "strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world", and the second and third paragraphs inherit the two aspects of "different waters" and "strange mountains", and surround the two characters of "unique" and describe, with a clear outline and clear context in structure. In the order of writing the scene, "water" and then "mountain", from near to far, layer by layer, in line with the viewing habit of "drifting from the stream", is clearly organized.

I originally wrote from near to far, but she made a mistake for me, and our teacher buried Hong said that it was from the total to the score.

The dust and mist all cleared, and the sky and the mountains showed the same clear color. Let the boat float with the river, let it go east or west. From Fuyang to Tonglu, a hundred miles of waterways, strange peaks and strange flowing water, unique in the world.

The river water is all green, and you can see the bottom of the water at a depth of thousands of feet. You can see the fish swimming and the thin pebbles very clearly. The turbulent water is faster than the flying arrows, and the turbulent river waves are like galloping horses.

The high mountains between the two sides of the strait are all covered with hardy evergreen trees. The mountains are competing upwards according to the terrain, comparing each other with higher and farther distances. The bending book scrambled to the heights and pointed straight to the sky, forming a thousand peaks.

The water of the spring hits the stones, making a gurgling sound; Good birds sing in harmony with each other, weaving into a harmonious melody. The cicadas chirp endlessly, and the apes chirp a thousand times. A person who soars to the sky like an eagle in his official career, a glance at such a beautiful peak will calm his heart of fame and fortune; Those who are busy all day long without traveling to plan and manage worldly affairs will be fascinated by the sight of such a beautiful valley.

The slanted branches of the trees shade the day, and even the day is as dark as dusk; The sparse branches are intertwined, and sometimes some light spots are missed.

Water first, then mountains. From low to high.

From near to far. I remember that it seems to be chronological, I used to take the test when I was in school, and it should be chronological.

It is written from high to low, from far to near, from an auditory and visual point of view.

You then look at the other stuff ......

Discover the scenery in the small Tan Pond, the source of the small pond, and the atmosphere in the pond.

The order in which the scenery changes (tour order).

It should be from high to low, from near to far, the first paragraph of the article is "strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world" eight characters to lead the whole article, the second and third paragraphs are divided into "different water" and "strange mountains" two aspects, around the "unique" two words germination and description, the structure of the outline is clear, the context is clear. In the order of writing scenes, "water" and then "mountain" are written first, from near to far, layer by layer, in line with the viewing habit of "drifting from the stream".

Landscapes.

Logical order.