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Anonymous users2024-02-12The breeze is blowing, the white clouds are blooming, the auspicious rays are shining, and the land of China is shining. From the capital to the Summer Palace, thirty miles. Entering the park to see the scenery, visitors are weaving, unique in the world.
I saw Kunming Lake.
The blue waves are rippling, the Tianshan Mountains are colorful, the swimming fish are playing, the swans are spreading their wings, the geese and ducks are happy, the distant mountains and near the water are picturesque.
Seventeen-hole bridge. It is very spectacular, the ancient trees are green, and they are pointing high and pointing at each other. Green bamboos into a forest, a hundred flowers compete for beauty, and birds sing. The corridor is tortuous, passing through the cloister, and the winding path is secluded.
Sigh Qianlong's filial piety, build a garden to celebrate his birthday, skilled craftsmen, show their skills, Chinese civilization.
The relationship has a long history. Praise the splendid culture of the motherland, 5,000 years of history, and now inherit, and create brilliance!
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Anonymous users2024-02-11Scenery with Zhu Yuan and Liang Sishu expresses the author's praise for the strange mountains and rivers of the Fuchun River, his contempt for the pursuit of fame and fortune, his love for beautiful nature, and his noble ambition to retreat from the world. 1. In the text, "The kite flies to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart; The charm of the mountain is vividly written, expressing the author's pride when he can see the beautiful scenery. It also shows the author's idea of abandoning fame and persuading friends to go into hiding.
2. It not only uses people's feelings to reflect the beauty of the landscape, but also expresses the contempt for secular officialdom and those who pursue fame and fortune, and the persuasion of friends. It implicitly reveals the noble ambition of loving the beautiful nature and retreating from the world. 3. "The Book with Zhu Yuansi" is a famous landscape sketch written by Wu Jun, a Liang writer in the Southern Dynasty, and is a fragment of a letter written by Wu Jun to his friend Zhu Yuansi (a Song Yuansi, the word Yushan, life unknown), which is regarded as a masterpiece of writing scenes in the prose.
The article not only contrasts the beauty of the landscape with people's feelings, but also expresses the disdain for fame and fortune and the weariness of officialdom and government affairs.
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Anonymous users2024-02-10"Book with Zhu Yuansi".
The wind and smoke are clean, and the Tianshan Mountains are colorful. Drifting from the stream, anything. From Fuyang to Tonglu one hundred miles, strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world.
The water is ethereal, and you can see the bottom. Swimming fish with fine stones, no obstruction to direct viewing. The turbulence is very fast, and the waves are rushing.
Sandwiched between the high mountains, all of them grow cold trees, compete with each other, compete for heights, and thousands of peaks. The spring water is rocky, and the sound is rattling; Good birds chirp and rhyme. The cicada is endless, and the ape is endless.
The kite flies to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart; Those who are in the world of economic affairs, peep into the valley and forget to rebel. Hengke is covered, and it is still dusk in the day; Sparse strips are intertwined, and sometimes the sun is seen.
From the perspective of writing scenes in the book with Zhu Yuansi, the order of writing scenes: from low to high, from near to far, visual and auditory.
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Anonymous users2024-02-091. Writing order: describe the scenery in order from total to score, from bottom to top
The first part of the article begins with the words "The wind and smoke are clean, and the Tianshan Mountains are colorful", which is the overall feeling of visiting the Fuchun River, and then after explaining the route of his tour, he summarizes the content of the article with "strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world".
The second part of the article consists of the second and third paragraphs, the second paragraph corresponding to the "strange water" summarized above, and the third paragraph corresponding to the "strange mountain" above. From the total to the score, it is clearly organized and compact.
The second part of the article first writes about the water, first writes about the underwater "swimming fish and fine stones", and then writes about the water surface: "the rapid turbulence is very arrowy, and the waves are like running". Then in the third paragraph, write about the mountains, from low to high, and then write about the mountain scenery. The overall scenery is written from bottom to top, naturally according to the visual movement, in an orderly manner.
2. Description of the scene: grasp the characteristics of the scene:
When writing about landscapes in this article, I use singular to describe and summarize.
In the second paragraph, when writing about water, it captures the characteristics of water in both dynamic and static situations: the water is characterized by clarity in a gentle way. The author uses exaggerated rhetoric to describe the characteristics of clear water:
The water is ethereal, and the bottom can be seen", and the underwater scenery is used to highlight this feature: "swimming fish and fine stones, and there is no obstacle to direct view". The rapid flow of water is characterized by rapid turbulence, and the author uses a figurative exaggeration of rhetoric:
The turbulence is very fast, and the waves are rushing.
In the third paragraph, when writing about the mountain, it is written by grasping the characteristics of the mountain being steep and towering and the beautiful scenery between the mountains. When writing about the steepness and steepness of the mountain, he wrote that the mountains "compete against the negative momentum", "compete for the height", "compete" and "point", and vividly depict the steep and straight appearance of the mountain. Writing about the mountain scenery, the author selects the animals, plants, and springs that are vibrant and diverse in the mountains, and combines movement and static.
The beautiful scenery of the mountains is fully displayed.
3. Scene blending: The author's strong feelings are integrated into the scene
The first paragraph of the article is a general write, from the overall feeling of "the wind and smoke are clean, the Tianshan Mountains are colorful", revealing the author's leisurely and relaxed feelings, "strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world", and directly express the love for the scenery with discussing the scenery. In the second paragraph, when writing about the mountain scene, the majestic and steep mountain is depicted, showing admiration; Writing about mountain scenery, various animals and plants, etc., reflects the intoxication of beautiful scenery, and then expresses the mood of indifference to fame and fortune and yearning for a calm and natural life.
Zhu Yuansi, a Song Yuansi, the word Yushan, life unknown.
The clear and clear river water is like a warm jasper, and the fish are free and happy to play in the water, which is really enviable. In the middle reaches of the Fuchun River, the speed of the water flow is no longer as gentle as the water of the small river, but as rapid as an arrow, and the fierce waves set off by the river are like galloping horses.
There was a hint of wind, the smoke disappeared completely, and the sky was the same color as the mountains. I was alone in a boat drifting along the river, the boat in the wind, to the left and to the right, admiring the mountains on both sides. It's really fun! >>>More
The wind and smoke are clean, and the Tianshan Mountains are colorful. Drifting from the stream, anything. From Fuyang to Tonglu, a hundred miles, strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world. >>>More
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