An essay, within today s aboard, is required under 10

Updated on educate 2024-06-07
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  1. Anonymous users2024-02-11

    The essay scoring adopts the method of back-to-back scoring by two people, three evaluations beyond the specified value range, and invalid marking is arbitrated by the team leader. The essay grading criteria are as follows:

    Grading Criteria. Essay.

    Poetry. Category 1.

    60 54 points.

    In line with the theme, the idea is profound, novel, and the center is prominent; Have their own life experience and have real feelings; The selection of materials is individual, and the content is substantial; Distinct hierarchy and compact structure; The expression is concise, and the language is full of literary brilliance.

    In line with the theme, the feelings are sincere, the imagery is concrete, the artistic conception is beautiful, and the language is concise.

    Category II. 53 45 points.

    In line with the topic, the idea is correct, and the center is clear; There is a certain feeling of life, and the feelings are more real; The selection of materials is reasonable and the content is specific; The hierarchy is clear and the structure is complete.

    In line with the theme, the feelings are real, there are more specific images and artistic conceptions, and the language is more concise.

    Three categories. 44 36 points.

    In line with the topic, there is a certain feeling; The content is more specific; The hierarchy is relatively clear, and the structure is basically complete.

    In line with the theme, the feelings are more real, there is a certain sense of poetry, and the language is more fluent.

    Four categories. Less than 36 points.

    It does not conform to the topic, and the center is not clear; The content is vague; The structure is chaotic; It is not written or has less than 300 words.

    It doesn't fit the topic, the feelings are false, the poetry is not poetic and the number of lines is less than 8 lines.

    2.If any of the following conditions are met, 1-3 points can be added as appropriate until the full score is reached.

    1) The emotions are real and full of heartfelt touch. (2) Imagination, can arouse people's associations and thinking. (3) It reflects a relatively deep cultural heritage and has a certain ability to think critically.

    4) Novel and creative ideas. (5) The language is beautiful but not empty, and it is full of unique personality.

    3.2 points will be deducted for missing questions; 1 point will be deducted for every 3 typos (excluding those who reproduce), and less than 3 words will not be deducted until 2 points are deducted.

    4.If the words are less than 600, points will be deducted as appropriate; Less than 400 words will be graded one grade. If you write a poem, if you are less than 20 lines, you will be deducted points as appropriate.

  2. Anonymous users2024-02-10

    The ruthlessness of the years, the cruelty of reality. I could only bow my stubborn head in the face of this, and then shed a tear, raised my head again, smiled calmly, and told the world that I could start from scratch.

    Starting from scratch means that I will leave behind what I have before, even if it doesn't linger and it will remain in my memory

    Friendship, a friendship of up to 3 years is buried in these slow years, it is important, it is precious, and only because of their own stubbornness will be drawn with an ellipsis The road we have walked together has played together, experienced the wind and rain together, comforted each other, and sang the same song ......I can only put them in some long ellipsis and shed good memories.

    In this friendship article, I move my hand to another paragraph to start over. It was hard, but at the same time it gave me a fresh start. Start from scratch.

    I couldn't give up the friendship left over from the ellipsis and didn't give myself a chance from scratch. I believe in starting from scratch.

    Dream. Everyone has a dream of their own. When the dream is shattered and scattered in the air like catkins, we have to watch the dream drift away little by little, we are not sad but happy, which proves that we have another opportunity to make up dreams for ourselves. Start from scratch.

    Carefully weaving dreams from scratch, hard but beautiful, with a smile on his face, there is an indescribable beauty.

    The loss of the clump is sad and sad, and it is difficult to start from scratch, but we are constantly losing, and we can't live forever in the memories of the past, give yourself a chance to start from scratch, and you can be happy.

    Under the blue sky, there is only one self, everything around me is zero, I laughed and shed tears, but the smile remained on my face, so that it had become the best memory, and gave myself a chance to start from scratch.

    I accompany Zheng Zen and believe that I can start from scratch because I have already stood at a new starting point ......

    Hope, thank you!

  3. Anonymous users2024-02-09

    Moved, light a petal of heart incense.

    There are more and more high-rise buildings, and the space is getting smaller and smaller. There is more and more indifference, and there is less and less warmth. However, moving, in its light but moving enough way, interprets the connotation of humanity. —Epigraph.

    There were tears, and I felt like I was still full.

    I was moved by opening the window in the morning and watching the sunlight penetrate every leaf, in a silent and simple way to talk to life.

    Walking in the evening, watching the sunset set, and tasting Li Shangyin's artistic conception of "the sunset is infinitely good, but it is just near dusk", I was moved.

    Touched, ignited a petal of heart incense in the spiritual home, lingering in people's lives.

    The times are developing, and while the economy is highly developed, has our spiritual home been barren? Are we missing a corner of our hearts?

    In a hurry, how many people stop to listen to the sound of their hearts? Most people have been sharpened too rough by life and have gradually become indifferent.

    The streets of Manhattan, New York, are full of traffic. A little girl stayed under a tree and refused to leave. People are amazed to find that she is waiting for the last leaves of autumn to fall, the child is innocent, and she will be moved by the ordinary natural replacement.

    A person who lacks emotion is not a real person.

    There can be no real development in a society that lacks emotion. It lacks humanistic nutrients and can only go to barrenness in the end.

    How long have we not been touched by those beautiful words? Li Bai's chic, Du Fu's depression, Tolstoy's vastness, Hugo's grandeur.

    How long have we not been touched by those noble backs? Qu Yuan, who creates a warmer sun for the people in winter; sowed the heroic and righteous Wen Tianxiang who "suffers from life and who does not die, and keeps Dan to take care of his sweat"; Su Wu, who was lonely and watched over the three thousand miles of the Han Dynasty, ......

    Touching is not simply crying, not superficially feeling sad. Touching is a kind of humanistic spirit, and it is the spiritual resonance between people.

    In today's highly developed material, where does our spiritual road lead? Let's learn to be moved.

    When one heart is no longer far away from another, our society will have a few more wisps of warmth. When everyone can feel the vibrations of others' heartstrings, our society will become harmonious.

    I came into the world to see the sun. Doesn't Balmont's words move us?

    With a petal of heart incense, our material home and spiritual home will be full of everlasting flowers and go into the distance.

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