Modified sentences of the type of component defect in elementary school

There are five common types of grammatical errors: missing components, redundant components, improper collocation, and improper word order.

Summary: Incomplete ingredient refers to a kind of sentence that is incomplete, lacks a certain component, and makes the meaning of the expression unclear, as shown below.

1. With the help of teachers and classmates, I quickly made progress. (Due to the use of prepositions or prepositional structures to make the original subject become an adverbial, the absence of the subject in the whole sentence is the main manifestation of the subject's defect.) In this sentence, the words "in" and "under" should be deleted, or the word "makes").

2, in "Wang Laohu Robbing Relatives", Zhou Wenbin, a talented man in Jiangnan, pretended to be **, was snatched home by Wang Laohu, and sent him to his sister Wang Xiuying's room. (Due to the length of the sentence, secretly changing the subject is also an important aspect of the lack of subject, the subject of the first half of this sentence is a "Zhou Wenbin", and the second half is converted to "Wang Laohu", and the subject of "Wang Laohu" should be added to the last sentence).

3. The school has made remarkable achievements in education and teaching, and has been commended by the provincial and municipal education commissions for many times. (It is also important to pay attention to the fact that the partial part of the correct phrase is misunderstood as the central language and the subject is missing in the following sentence.) The subject of the previous clause of this sentence is "grades", and the latter clause is misunderstood as the subject of the first clause is "school", so it is erroneously omitted, and the subject "school" should be added before the second clause).

4. After a winter of hard fighting, a four-meter-high, 700-meter-volt barrage dam stands majestically on the shore of Tianmu Lake. (The absence of a predicate due to the length of the sentence or the forgetting of the previous structure at the end of the sentence is the main reason for the loss of the predicate.) In this example, the subject in front of it is "the people of Nanpu", and there is no corresponding predicate in the back, so "make" should be added before "a").

5. The commercial sector actively responds to the call of the first and publicizes the importance of the product to the masses with great fanfare. ("Clarify" should be inserted before "**").

6. After the students of our school have carried out in-depth discussions on the meaning of life is dedication, after a semester of study, the school has undergone great changes. (The word "makes" and so on should be inserted before the second word "school").

7. In the old society, the working people did not have enough to eat and did not have warm clothes. (Or remove the word "live" and make "not enough to eat and not warm" as a predicate, or add "live" before "eat").

8. The party committee of the school discussed the mobilization of all teachers and students to carry out a patriotic health campaign. (A slightly longer sentence and ignoring the echo with the previous component when said or written at the end of the sentence is an important reason for the mutilation of the object.) In this example, if there is no object center at the end of the predicate "discuss", "question" should be added at the end).

9. "History of Entrepreneurship" is a long story describing the socialist revolution in China's rural areas. The text says that at that time, when the mutual aid group had just been established, Liang Shengbao went to Guo County to buy new rice seeds in order to realize the plan of double cropping of rice and wheat. (The word "story" should be added at the end of it to echo the predicate "to write").

10. They cherished the motherland, looked at the world, vigorously carried forward the courage to fight, and finally won the championship. ("spirit" should be added after "dare to promote", which echoes the predicate "carry forward").

1. Lack of subjectIn the evil old society, we poor people were forced to flee the famine to beg for food, sell our children and daughters, and our families were ruined.

It was revised as: The evil old society has forced us poor people to flee the famine and beg for food, sell our children and daughters, and ruin our families.

2. Lack of predicatesThe unsturdy house was collapsed.

Modified to: The unsturdy house collapsed by the **earthquake.

3. Lack of definite sentencesI have no doubt at all that he was determined to live up to the ideals of communism.

Revised to: I have no doubt at all that he has the determination to fight for the ideals of communism.

4. Lack of adverbialsThe three short-term courses of mathematics, physics and chemistry run by our school have opened courses such as agricultural mathematics, agricultural electromechanical and crop cultivation, so that education can directly serve modernization.

Revised to: The three short-term courses of mathematics, physics and chemistry run by our school have respectively opened courses such as agricultural mathematics, agricultural electromechanical and crop cultivation, so that education can directly serve modernization.

5. Lack of objectThe county ** seriously dealt with the unauthorized price increase of the cement plant.

Revised to: The county ** seriously dealt with the mistake of raising prices without authorization of cement plants.

We must learn from Lei Feng to serve the people wholeheartedly.

To achieve excellent results, we must put in the labor.

If you want to achieve excellent results, you must put in the work.

I'm not particularly fond of this kind of question.

French drunken madness hahaha method dry wait ha.

References to the sick sentences with incomplete components:

1. The subject is default.

During the summer vacation, I visited the scenic West Lake.

It can be changed to: During the summer vacation, we visited the scenic West Lake.

2. Lack of object.

I have a lot of extracurricular books in my spare time.

3. Lack of object.

The school organized and carried out the study of Lei Feng.

It can be changed to: the school organized and carried out the activity of learning from Lei Feng.

1. The subject is incomplete:

Listening to the report of the heroes who fought against disasters made my heart surge.

It should be changed to: 1) Remove the words "make" and "of": After listening to the report of the heroes who fought against the disaster, my heart was surging.

2) Remove the "of": Listening to the report of the heroes of the disaster made my heart surge. ("Listen.......)The subject of the report "do" and "make").

2. The central language is incomplete:

Environmental enforcement exists"Dead ends"The remediation of industrial pollution is still in no arrears, and there is a big gap between the requirements of the circular economy.

It should read: Environmental law enforcement exists"Dead ends"The remediation of industrial pollution is still in a state of no arrears, and there is a big gap between the requirements of the circular economy.

1. Lack of subject

Example: From this ordinary little thing, it illustrates a big problem.

Analysis: What is the subject of "explanation"? A prepositional phrase cannot be the subject, and the words "from...... can be deletedMedium".

2. Lack of predicates

Example: These characters are of different types, and the distance is quite large, if you don't have the skills to shape the character of Zhenliang, you can't play it well.

Analysis: "These roles are different types" lacks a predicate, and it should be added with "Tong pants belong to the royal ship Yunyu" to make it smooth.

3. Lack of object.

For example, in the past two years, they have promoted the scientific farming insisted on by the Mahe Brigade throughout the county.

Analysis: What is "promoted"? Absent object "......experience".

1. Lack of subject

For example, through hard work, her grades have improved very quickly. (The words "adopt" or "make" should be deleted. )

Shouldn't the uncivilized and disciplined classmate Li Shi be blamed? (Delete "for" or delete "receives.") )

2. Lack of predicates

For example, the citizens of Foshan are working hard to build a civilized and healthy city. (At the end, add the words "and struggle").

After completing the task, everyone went to the restaurant for supper. (It should be "eating a late-night snack").

3. Lack of object.

For example: Although I am busy at work every day, I still focus on researching with my classmates or reading books by myself. （"Hold on"What the? "Time"The word cannot be omitted. ）

We must do everything in our power to mechanize and collectivize our agriculture. (The sentence should be a segment.)"Walk on the ......of the road"）

4) Cumbersome repetition.

For example, in the past year, women have laid a considerable foundation for work and gained some work experience. (The second disturbs the paulownia, the third.)"work"It should be deleted. ）

Actually, this is an overly thoughtful idea. （"Concerns"I just thought, it should be deleted"ideas"。）