Commenting on the expository text, commenting on the expository text

The explanatory comments are as follows:

1. This is an expository essay about bees, in the form of a self-report, in the words of a "worker bee", introducing the life of the bee family. The level of writing is relatively clear, first introducing the species of bees, then introducing the responsibilities of worker bees, then the acquisition and transmission of information, and finally the reproduction of the family. Figures of speech such as metaphor and personification are used in many places in the text, and the language is relatively vivid.

The introduction of honey making is very convincing with the appropriate use of data.

2. This is a very well-written expository essay. First of all, the author uses a self-description method to introduce the object of explanation, which makes people feel intimate and touchable, authentic and reliable. Secondly, a very reasonable explanation order is adopted around the object of hunger, which is in line with people's cognitive laws and cognitive mentality.

Thirdly, this article makes good use of a variety of explanatory methods, which are specific and vivid, and leave a deep impression.

3. This is a complete and accurate expository essay written by junior high school students, and the beginning of the article leads to the object of explanation to stimulate the reader's interest in reading. The method of illustrating the Rotten Tomb with examples, column data, facsimile appearance, and analogy was used to vividly introduce the Zhaozhou Bridge.

4. As an expository article, the article focuses on Lingjing and has a clear idea. At the beginning, the author first introduced the status of Lingjing in general, then traced its history, introduced its geographical location and unique landscape, and then slowly introduced its changes in modern society. The instructions are in reasonable order, and the language is plain and accurate.

5. This is an expository article, and the object of the explanation is pointed out at the beginning of the article. The main part uses a variety of illustration methods such as column numbers, examples, and analogies, which accurately and vividly illustrate the beauty of Tsinghua Garden, and the language of the article is beautiful, and the words used are accurate and vivid.

6. Start with feelings and end with feelings, so that the article can be taken before and after.

It should be coherent from beginning to end, and at the same time, it makes the theme of the article repeated, which is very infectious.

7. The article is ......The atmosphere is rendered fully and just right, to the point of the article....The delicate and expressive portrayal is lofty and admirable.

8. This article is very high in both ideology and artistry, and it makes people have a long aftertaste after reading. Cleverly conceived.

9. The beginning of the article is novel, which has the effect of preemptively attracting people, so that readers can have a sense of the characters as soon as they meetThe impression of the article is coherent and forms a complete image.

A collection of comments from the expository essay is as follows:

1. The title is fresh, like bamboo shoots in spring, tender and crisp.

2. The title is very interesting, and people can't help but want to read it and tell me, where did you come up with such a wonderful topic.

3. The question is punctuated (ellipsis, question marks, exclamation marks, dashes), which is different I like your interesting topic very much.

4. When you write the topic, you skillfully use celebrities and famous quotes, and skillfully renovate them, which not only gives people a sense of intimacy, but also enhances the appeal.

6. Your title uses the method of suspense to "sell a pass" to the reader, and its effect produces a kind of hooking and unstoppable appeal and suspense beauty.

7. Use mathematical formulas and symbols to make your topic concise, vivid, chic and eye-catching.

8. When formulating questions, the clever use of familiar industry terms often gives people a refreshing feeling, and the terms themselves have a certain connotation that makes it easier for readers to grasp your intentions.

9. The abnormal method is to think backwards, avoid the conventional naming of the topic, and adopt the unexpected ideas of others, so as to achieve a more eye-catching effect.

10. Rhetoric refers to the use of metaphor, personification, exaggeration, duality, pun and other rhetorical techniques to make the topic vivid, distinct, wonderful and appropriate.

11. If the topic is old-fashioned, people won't be much interested in reading your essay.

12. Everyone will get up with such a topic, which is too ordinary.

13. The content seems to be written in line with the title, and I use my brain, what is more suitable for changing the title, I think the title is not as appropriate as "xx".

14. You use the flashback suspension method, which is a way of writing the result of the incident at the beginning of the article, and then describing the cause and process of the incident in reverse order. Such a beginning, which not only explains the outcome of the story, but also lays out mysteries and suspense in a unique way, which can enhance the attractiveness of the article. It should be noted that the flashback setting method is only suitable for writing articles about people and events.