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The first time I came to Xiamen University, I remember that as soon as I arrived at the school gate, I was fascinated by the majestic and magnificent scenery of Xiamen University, so I thought, if I can come here to study in the future, how good it would be! In this way, Xiamen University began to become the university of my dreams.

As time went by, I grew up and at the same time, I began to understand that a good university is not only beautiful scenery, but more importantly, it has rich connotations. I began to look for the answer: it turned out that Xiamen University was founded in 1921 by Mr. Chen Jiageng, a famous patriotic overseas Chinese, and has a history of 87 years.

It is a comprehensive university with a complete range of disciplines, a strong faculty, a first-class university in China, and a wide range of influence in the world. What I like the most is its ** system! There are two majors of education and performance, vocal music, piano, folk music, instrumental music, theoretical composition, dance and other professional courses, its purpose is to rely on a comprehensive university, take artistic creation as the center, take learning and Chinese and Western as the basis, and develop potential as the goal to cultivate comprehensive and professional artistic talents.

I thought: Isn't this my dream university?! Isn't it exactly what I dreamed of?!

If you want to apply for university in the future, then apply to Xiamen University, I believe my choice is absolutely right!

Whether in primary school or middle school, I often hear about my older siblings applying for Xiamen University. I remember when I was in the fifth grade, one day my neighbor's sister was going to Xiamen University to take the entrance test, and at that time, I asked my father: Can I apply for Xiamen University like Sister Xiaowen in the future?

Dad was like, "Of course, but you have to do very well in your studies." Do you know?

Sister Xiaowen's ranking in the year is one of the best, as long as you study hard, Mom and Dad believe that you will be able to do it! ”

My father's words have always encouraged me to be admitted to Xiamen University, the ideal university of my dreams, which has always become my spiritual pillar and motivation for my studies! In a flash, 2 years have passed, and perhaps it is for this reason that I performed exceptionally well in the entrance examination and won the first place in the class! Since entering middle school, I have overcome all kinds of discomfort with this belief, and my ranking is gradually improving!

I believe that as long as I study hard, my dream will definitely come true!

I must be admitted to Xiamen University!

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During the Spring Festival this year, I went to Xiamen University with my brother and sister, and the comma should be changed to a full stop.

Be sure to be admitted to Xiamen University, and the comma should be changed to a full stop.

You have too many problems, a grade student, the essay is written like this!?

Hey, Sun Yat-sen University is better than Xiamen University. How can you belittle Sun Yat-sen University like this, it's really a child who is not sensible. When you go to Sun Yat-sen University to see it, you will change your attention. However, there is still a question of whether you can take the exam or not.

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