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Remembrance Today, I went to my grandmother's house with my younger brothers and sisters, children are active by nature, and after a while, they ran out to have fun and play, and I sat in the house playing with my mobile phone. Suddenly, my sister came back and called me, "Sister, let's go to pick a valley together!" ”

Picking a valley? That's a long time ago. In my memory, I also said to my sister with such excitement:

Sister, let's go to Caigudi together! "At that time, we used to eat while picking, and when we came home, we could only come home empty-handed. At this time, adults will always ask:

Where's the guti you picked? My sister and I could only look at each other and smirk.

At that time, I felt that Gu Ti was better than all the sugar, and when I chewed it gently, a fresh and watery fragrance overflowed my cheeks, and the best thing was that it melted all after eating, leaving no trace of residue in my mouth, which made people taste fragrant and had an endless aftertaste. Although the older Gudi is not as juicy and sweet as the tender Guti, it has a different flavor, full of toughness, a bitter and sweet feeling, and has a more aftertaste than the young Guti.

Unconsciously, such a taste is far away from me, separated by years, but also by mood. Now that I was by my sister's voice, I suddenly hooked it all up.

Thinking like this, he took his sister's little hand and went out of the house. The early spring rain had just been sprinkled, and the grass leisurely stretched its bright green wings. In the middle of several slender leaves of the thatch, a slightly thicker core grows, the color is dark and shallow, and it stands in **.

Pull out one, peel off the outer skin, can't wait to put it in your mouth, and then chew it gently,—— but it doesn't have the sweetness of the original, just a smell of grass, and a little astringency.

chuckled and shook his head, sighing, he still grew up, he no longer had that state of mind, he could only pursue the taste of the past in that memory, but he didn't know if he could find it back, and the more he couldn't find it, the more he was afraid that it would arouse his memories.

All the slight astringencies, in the recollection, turned out to be sweet.

1 Some people leave and never come back, so waiting and hesitation are the most ruthless killers in the world.

2 Before thee I have become very low, very low, low to the dust. But my heart loves it, and it blooms out of the dust. (Zhang Ailing inscribed on the back of the ** given to Hu Lancheng).

3 Love, family affectionWe have everything, but there is no love.

4 If emotions and years can be gently torn apart and thrown into the sea, then I am willing to be silent at the bottom of the sea from now on. I love to hear your words, but I don't understand them, and you want to see my silence, but you don't understand them.

5 Love is always a matter of a thousand turns. If you have never been forsaken or hurt, how can you know how to love others? Love, it turned out to be an experience, but I hope that people will last a long time, what do you like? What are your thoughts?