Help me revise my essay and choose a name for it

Updated on educate 2024-07-31
13 answers
  1. Anonymous users2024-02-15

    A few words for our lovely and respectable teacher.

    There are thousands of bright flowers in the world, and who cultivated so many flowers? It is our lovely and respectable teachers, they work tirelessly for us students, why they work so hard to serve us, it is because they love me, everyone always says that one day is a teacher, and a lifetime is a father, let us regard teachers as parents and repay them well, because we love you, lovely and respectable teachers.

  2. Anonymous users2024-02-14

    Gardener = teacher, flower = student. The title is called Diligent Gardeners Cultivating Delicate Flowers, which should be too long, sorry

  3. Anonymous users2024-02-13

    Thanksgiving to the teacher.

    There are thousands of delicate flowers in the world, and who cultivated these thousands of delicate flowers? It's thousands of toiling gardeners. Who are these thousands of toiling gardeners?

    He is a thousand great teachers. Who are the thousands of delicate flowers? It is the pride of thousands of students.

  4. Anonymous users2024-02-12

    Thousands of great gardeners-like teachers have cultivated thousands of delicate flower-like students.

  5. Anonymous users2024-02-11

    There are many delicate flowers in the world, but who cultivated these delicate flowers? It's every hard gardener. Who is this toiling gardener? Great teacher. Who are the many delicate flowers? He was a proud student.

  6. Anonymous users2024-02-10

    First of all, I think you write very well, and secondly, I think it's good to name it "Mid-Autumn Festival", I don't know if you think this name is too vulgar, but I think your article gives people a quiet feeling, and it's quite open-minded to use this name.

  7. Anonymous users2024-02-09

    Night Bright Heart Moon.

    Homesickness and sleepless nights.

    Homesickness for the moon. Silent night, thinking about the moon, sad and moonlight.

  8. Anonymous users2024-02-08

    Keep ......There are ...... everywhereAh, you ......Let go of ......A pleasant ......Lovely ......My ......If ,......I want to ......Okay, please adopt or agree with my opinion, o( o thank you (it's all my own thoughts!) I thought about it for a long time).

  9. Anonymous users2024-02-07

    It's another year of reunion festival. Gather Chanjuan.

  10. Anonymous users2024-02-06

    Reunion night, good time, Mid-Autumn Festival ......Whatever, a lot of miles!

  11. Anonymous users2024-02-05

    Mid-Autumn night.

    Month". The moon is shining.

  12. Anonymous users2024-02-04

    Just use the "Mid-Autumn Festival"!

  13. Anonymous users2024-02-03

    Mid-Autumn Sigh Mid-Autumn Festival Night Mid-Autumn Festival Wishes Mid-Autumn Festival Feelings.

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