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Methods of revising the composition: adjusting, supplementing, adding, deleting, and changing.
1. Tune: The revision of the article should be carried out in the order of the whole first and then the part, the big and then the small, the idea first and then the material, and the content and then the form, and not the attention of some details as soon as the pen is drawn, just like sculpture and painting, there is always a general wheel corridor first, and then gradually refined, and the same is true for the revision of the article. It's like leading troops to fight, first of all, you have to deploy troops and arrange troops.
Therefore, the first step of revision is to make the clues of the whole article clear, hierarchical, and reasonably structured through "adjustment", and then sort out the paragraphs. Through "tune", the scattered becomes concentrated, the chaotic becomes clear, and the upper and lower are not coherent.
2. Supplement: "Supplement" is mainly to supplement the omissions and incompleteness, so as to make the article more comprehensive and complete. For example, when expounding a certain point of view, whether it only analyzes the positive, mainstream, achievements and strengths of things, but does not dialectically see its opposites, tributaries, problems and shortcomings, whether there are only antecedents and no consequences, only foreshadowing and no response, whether it only sees the material but does not see the viewpoint, and whether there is a necessary central sentence and point of view.
3. Addition: The so-called "addition" means that when revising, by supplementing some materials, the abstract, vague, and insubstantial articles become concrete and realistic, and the thin and unconvincing articles become full and powerful. For example, if the narrative is just a flat and direct narrative of the "running account", which is naturally boring, we can consider adding some details to make the object of the description clearer and fuller; Or add some descriptive angles.
4. Deletion: When revising, delete those repetitive, rambling, and rambling sentences, and delete the sentences that are muddy, dispensable, and self-explanatory, and the paragraphs and materials that are extraordinary, off-topic, off-topic, out of touch with the viewpoint, contrary to the facts, and obviously untrue, no matter how exciting, should also be deleted.
5. Change: The so-called "change" is to replace those old and bland materials with novel and vivid materials, and replace those vague, general, ambiguous and obscure sentences with more accurate, clear and bright expressions.
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Here's how to revise your essay:
1. Reading aloud modification method: This is the most convenient and easiest method to implement.
By reading aloud, you can turn a silent text into a spoken language. In the process of reading aloud, while reading in the mouth and listening to the grinding in the ear, you can find many faults in the article. For example, some words sound unpleasant, some sentences do not read well, some paragraphs lack transitions or repetition of meanings, some places are not clear, some figures are inappropriate, etc., these problems can be found in reading aloud.
As long as you keep reading it a few times, your essay will easily become coherent.
2. Modification of ideas: Whether the topic of the article is accurate and whether the ideas are reasonable and reasonable also needs to be carefully considered when revising.
When revising the article, we should first focus on the whole article to see whether the idea of the article is correct, whether the point of view is clear, whether the content is full and new, if there is a deviation in the idea, lack of novelty, the center is not prominent and other problems, we should make adjustments in time, sort out the clues or ideas after determining the idea of the article, and plan the layout of the article according to the clues or ideas.
3. Modification of the structure of the chapter:
The structure of the article is the skeleton of an article, and whether this skeleton is reasonable and strong is an important factor in determining whether the article can stand up. Reasonable structure, clear hierarchy, appropriate detail, and echoing the beginning and end are all elements of the structure of the text. The revision of the structure of the passage is mainly aimed at the modification and adjustment of the paragraph structure on the basis that there is basically no problem with the idea.
The following aspects should be considered in the revision of paragraphs: first, whether the order of the paragraphs is reasonable and whether it reflects a clear context; whether the detailed arrangement of the paragraphs is appropriate and whether the central point can be highlighted; Third, whether the connection between paragraphs is close and the transition is natural. If there are any abruptness, what content can be added or deleted.
4. Modification of words and phrases:
You can re-examine your essay from the four levels of words, words, sentences, and paragraphs according to the order from small to large. Typos must be corrected again, and problems are easy to occur in the choice of words and the connection of sentences.
Is it contextual?
Is emotion positive or derogatory? Is the word meaning collocation appropriate? These are all problems that tend to arise when using the word nonsense. Sentence revisions should be checked for grammatical or logical errors, and special attention should be paid to whether the language is concise and fluent.
Another person said: "A good article is written in three points and changed in seven points." "If we can make this kind of effort to revise our own essays, more of our essays can be "revised" into excellent essays.
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You can write an outline of your essay. It's a great way to easily understand the structure of your article. It is a very simple way to revise your essay and to be able to recognize the shortcomings of your own essay.
So that's where you have to go to the top of what you want to revise your essay for.
If your composition level is in the lower middle and lower levels, you also want to climb to an intermediate level. Then an outline would be the most efficient way to do it. Because the horizontal characteristics of the middle and lower reaches of the composition lie in the confusion of logic and the lack of clarity in structure.
You can also list the outline to know the confusion of your logic and the unclear structure. By revising the outline, you can know how to write a logical essay and keep your structure clear. Raising your score to the middle level is definitely not a problem.
Secondly, it is the middle level to the middle or upper reaches level. At this time, the outline and revision of the outline can no longer satisfy you. More importantly, you need to deepen the depth of your thinking in your composition.
How can he improve the depth of thinking he does, it takes a lot of reading. However, most of the learning time will be given to mathematics and English, which are subjects with a very efficient atmosphere and obvious results. So you need some arguments that have been crumpled, or simple expressions of thought from philosophy books.
In this way, you will be able to improve your thinking content in the most efficient way.
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