Water Fairy Yongjiangnan Expanding, about the Water Fairy Yongjiangnan s homework

Climb a green hill and look into the distance, everything is in the haze. The sun shines on the river, sparkling, rising a leisurely mist, and the water town in the south of the Yangtze River shrouded in smoke is very charming. The houses of the families on both sides of the strait, with beautiful painted beams and pavilions, continue to follow each other, extending to the more moving water towns in the distance.

The lake is dotted with lotus leaves and water chestnut leaves, and there is a faint autumn color. Quietly watching the sand gulls dance, the charming dancing posture seems to be praising the beauty of Jiangnan. The wind blowing from ten miles away, with the faint fragrance of autumn flowers, blows the bead curtains of people.

The delicately carved boat is about to reach the horizon, and the wine flag flutters melodiously on the boat, although it is not a wine shop, but seeing such a beautiful scenery, I am already a little drunk. I love this beautiful Jiangnan water town!

There are no 400 words, and I am adding a personal name or something, and the change is here.

Expand]: The smoke waves of the river and the fog in the mountains on the shore reflect each other, the eaves of the houses on both sides of the river are connected, and the painted beams are connected. The lotus flowers on the river are clustered, the autumn light is tranquil, and the sand gulls are flying and circling on the river, and the fragrant wind wafts out of the bead curtains.

Beautiful ships seem to be coming from the sky, and the hotel's flag is waving in the wind. It's so lovely, Jiangnan!

Original text]: Water Fairy Yongjiangnan.

A river of smoke and water shines on the clear land, people on both sides of the strait connect the eaves, and the lotus bush is light in autumn.

Watch the sand gulls dance again and again, and roll the incense wind ten miles of bead curtains.

The painting boat is on the horizon, and the wine flag is blowing in the wind.

Love Jiangnan. About the Author]:

Zhang Yanghao (1269-1329), Han nationality, the name Ximeng, the number Yunzhuang, a native of Jinan, Shandong, was a famous composer in the Yuan Dynasty. He is good at both poetry and writing, and is known for his loose songs. His representative works include "Hillside Sheep Tong Caring for the Ancients" and so on.

1. At the level of writing the scene, the author takes the lotus pond as the center, and then writes about the sand gulls dancing on the lotus pond embankment, and then extends from the lotus fragrance to the surroundings, and then extends to the sky, from the middle to the surrounding layers, and from one point to the whole Jiangnan.

The first five sentences write about the scenery from far to near, from big to small, writing about family, lotus ponds, and waterfowl, the sixth sentence writes about the distant painting boat, and the seventh sentence writes about the wine flag of the village hotel, which is very organized and layered, expressing a cheerful style. 2. This song depicts a picture of the autumn colors of the water towns in the south of the Yangtze River, which is poetic and beautiful.

2. This song depicts a picture of the autumn colors of the water towns in the south of the Yangtze River, which is poetic and beautiful.

With Jiliang 3+4, the first sentence "A river of smoke and water shines on the clear Lan Feng is sleepy", showing a natural beauty: the river is sunny and sunny, rippling, and the smoke and water are confused.

The second sentence "people on both sides of the strait are connected to the eaves", and the sentence is dual, writing that the houses depicted in the confusion of smoke and water are constantly connected.

Then the author turned his attention to the natural scene.

The three sentences of "a period of autumn light in the lotus bush", "light" are used well, diluting the rich spring light of the gentle township, as if there is a sense of removing the hustle and bustle, and adding a little poetic swaying.

The four sentences of "watching the sand gulls dance again and again" add a bit of leisure and contentment.

Peikuan five sentences "Ten miles of incense wind bead curtain", this is the inversion of "ten miles of incense wind bead curtain", using Li Qingzhao's "curtain roll west wind", hinting at the richness of this place, and echoing with the front of the eaves of the house.

Six or seven sentences of "painting the boat to the edge of the sky, and the wine flag is flying outside the wind", not only literally, but also the scene described is just the same, one side is frequently called, and the other side is tired of traveling.

Eight sentences of "love Jiangnan", summing up the experience, from objective observation to subjective feelings.

【Double Tone】Water Fairy.

Yongjiang South 1 Yanshui 2 Zhao 3 Qinglan 4, people on both sides of the strait are connected to the eaves 5, 5 lotus clusters are a section of autumn light 6. Watch the sand gulls dance again and again 7, and roll the incense wind ten miles of bead curtains 8. Painting the boat 9 children to the edge of the sky, wine flags 10 children wind outside the wind 11. Love to kill 12 Gangnam!