4th grade essay my self portrait, my self portrait 4th grade essay

The sample essay on my self-portrait in the second volume of the fourth grade is as follows:

My "self-portrait".

My name has a history! My father's surname is Hu, and he took the word "Hu Ji" from Cai Wenji's eternal swan song "Hu Ji Eighteen Beats". When I was born, it was a spring rain. As a result, the poetic name of "Hu Ji Song of Rain" became my "patent".

I wasn't tall, thin, like a weak bean sprout. However, my "bean sprouts" brought a lot of surprises to teachers and classmates.

Last semester, I participated in the 100-meter race, and as soon as the gun went off, I was like Nezha stepping on the Hot Wheels. Needless to say, I'm number one! My classmates hula gathered around me and praised me, "Awesome!

You're amazing! The teacher also said in surprise: "'Little Bean Sprouts' is amazing!"

More powerful is yet to come! This year's "June 1st" Children's Day performance, probably because I look good-eyed, the teacher chose me. At that time, some students didn't understand, "Is she so quiet and shy, can she be on stage?"

What everyone didn't expect was: I walked on the stage generously, playing and singing, and the song "Spring is **" was crisp and pleasant, as if bringing everyone to a beautiful spring. Hehe, I actually won the most applause.

If you don't make a sound, it's a blockbuster. This is me, Hu Ji Songyu! What do you think? You remember me!

Comments: This essay is the same as a general self-introduction, introducing the origin of the name, appearance characteristics, hobbies and specialties, the difference is that the introduction method is very ingenious: using other people's words to introduce the introduction of his name, the author does not directly state that he is good at running and singing and dancing, but uses the contrast between his body characteristics and the surprise brought to his classmates to cleverly introduce his own strengths.

Writing ideas: establish the center, focus on the selection of materials, determine the key points, arrange the details, pay attention to the selection of materials closely around the central idea of the article, choose authentic and credible, fresh and interesting materials, so that the central idea of the article is clearly and profoundly expressed. The details are as follows:

Today, Mr. Wu mysteriously walked into the classroom with a dictionary in his hand, and started typing without saying a word, and the projection showed: the loveliest, most beautiful, smartest, most capable, most magical, greatest, and most promising in the world. At this point, the teacher suddenly stopped, and I was confused.

The teacher asked us to go up and look at the dictionary, and I found that there was a mirror hidden in the dictionary, and it was myself that was reflected.

Draw a picture of myself, I am a smart and cute, naughty and capable little boy.

My ears are very big, and when adults see me, they say that I am "blessed with big ears", and I call myself "Pippi with big ears". I like to wear black because I like SWAT, and SWAT wears black.

My personality is a bit impatient, and if someone says bad things about me, I hit someone. One day at noon, a classmate called me a big fool, and I threw my fist at him in a hurry.

I love fishing. In the summer, I often go fishing by the river, and I am very patient when fishing, staring at the fish float motionlessly, and immediately lifting the fishing rod when the wind blows.

The origin of my name is interesting. It is said that there was a high monk named Bodhidharma, when crossing the river, there was no bridge or boat, so he broke a reed and crossed the river smoothly. This is the historical allusion of "crossing the river with a reed".

Mom and Dad gave me this name because they wanted me to be a thinking reed who could think for himself.

When I grow up, I want to be a police officer and serve the people like them.

That's who I am.